Welp... Here's the first sentence you see at character creation.
" You just finished your highschool, now you could do anything you want. So much opportunities lie ahead! "
OOF. Please tell me English isn't the dev's first language. Anyways, here's a freebie.
"You have just finished high school, and now you can do anything you want. So many opportunities lie ahead!"
Now hire an editor to do this for literally everything else.
Yeah, so the writing is crap. Not only is it grammatically poor, but also creatively bereft. The premise is easily one of the dumbest things I've ever encountered in a porn game (doubly so for one using real-porn assets), in that you die if you get too horny cause your sperm gets into your blood? Not only is that, again, quite possibly one of the dumbest things I've encountered here on F95Zone (and also presented by a 'doctor' that uses 'idk' to describe this nonsense to the player), it is also quite possibly the most un-fun mechanic you could possibly have in a porn game.
What happens when your character sees some tiddies? They get a boner and die. Fuck off with that nonsense.
Also the UI is such crap, that it took me minute to get past the first page and actually start the game proper. There is no start button, or an obvious hyperlink to advance past the initial splash page. You need to use the box explicitly designated as 'type here patreon acess code' (yeah, they also misspelled 'access'), and put nothing in there, then press enter, for you to even begin to start. How you're supposed to deign that solution from the ether (as opposed to just clicking on everything until something worked) is beyond me.
Thanks, I hate it.