VN Ren'Py Smallwood [v0.1.1] [Parallaxzero]

[SergejGamer73]

Why is the text too small??

 

[Null Void Abyss]

Just play the update, I love it and good job with expressions on their emotion and I like Clark finally realize He wants Chole and not that bitch Lana, I was screaming Fuck yes lol I hope next update will focus on her /ISPOILER]

 

[Parallaxzero]

Alright, as 'promised'. Just finished with the game!
I was thinking how to structure this, as I have ADHD and tend to ramble, even when writing, so I'll try to split it up a bit.
For anyone; before you read and bitch, I hate NTR. Loathe entirely. Cuckshit is cuckshit, so that's my stance and feelings. Nothing you can say will change that. Nothing "soft" or "hard", for me, NTR is NTR (by definition, or the grey zone one(s)).

Story: Good. It kind of follows Smallville (for better or worse), not much more to say. If you like Smallville, and you like spicy, this should be up your alley.
Art: It's AI, so can't praise it too much, but even with AI you need to make sure, and the art so far has been solid (saw that there's

Spoiler: SECRET

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so resting this here. It reminds me of the older DC cartoons, though, which is noice.
Chapters(?): The only change I would make here is to split chapters into episodes (like a TV-show huehuehue), since it's based off of one. It has the bones for it anyway, and this would be a nice nod!

So there are issues with the scenes, I'll just put a spoiler over all of it, so if you click it, don't bitch.

Spoiler: SCENES

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As much as I wanted to enjoy this, I think I kind of misunderstood the game, and that's on me. I thought it was going to be a more Clark-heavy harem, but it's way far off.
I don't want to pressure the dev into changing his visions to accommodate me, or people like me, but if the rest of the game is going to follow the first parts, I don't think I'd be along for the ride, sadly.
For anyone who likes the game, and the direction, I do believe you'd be in competent hands, so to say, and you'll get a ton of enjoyment out of it.

Thank you for all your input! I greatly appreciate you taking the time to write all of this, it's very insightful.
Getting a better understanding from other players' perspective helps me know what works and what doesn't as well as how others perceive each scene.

It's AI CG, I know a lot of people have prejudices against anything done with "AI", and that's totally fine. I'm more open minded, I think some AI CG can look good, but I also think drawn CG can look bad, it's never black and white.

I thought about making it episodic, and still might, this is not off the cards(it's not difficult to switch over to either).

Don't read this if you don't want any spoilers regarding the possibility of future in-game events. This is mainly for ZeSergeant

Spoiler: RESPONSE TO SCENES

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Why is the text too small??

Small how? Font size? and what platform?

 

[ZeSergeant]

Thank you for all your input! I greatly appreciate you taking the time to write all of this, it's very insightful.
Getting a better understanding from other players' perspective helps me know what works and what doesn't as well as how others perceive each scene.

It's AI CG, I know a lot of people have prejudices against anything done with "AI", and that's totally fine. I'm more open minded, I think some AI CG can look good, but I also think drawn CG can look bad, it's never black and white.

I thought about making it episodic, and still might, this is not off the cards(it's not difficult to switch over to either).

Don't read this if you don't want any spoilers regarding the possibility of future in-game events. This is mainly for ZeSergeant

Hell yeah, brother. I appreciate a bit of back and forth, and don't worry, you don't come off as aggressive!
Like I said, I just wanted to give my perspective, and no matter what, your vision is your vision, and you should stick to that.
Since you seem like a decent guy, I'll just "fight back" a bit in spoilers below, so we don't talk past each other

Spoiler: Continuing Scenes

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I do wish you the best with the game, even if I'm not along for the ride!
I also appreciate some actual discussion without it turning into a cockfight (no homo).