VN - Ren'Py - Sofia's Dark Fantasies [Beta v1.06 - Episode 1 + Special] [Greuceanu Heavy Industries]

I'm not very good at analyzing but here we go

To begin with, I must say that the main character is one of the most beautiful characters in any game I've ever played, but I must say that her white hair makes her more attractive.

Maybe many people will criticize me, but it would be interesting to add them in the future, but topics like ''humilation, prostitution, etc.'' but if they don't, there's no problem. The game already has excellent art, the possibilities are great, so I'll follow the development, particularly me. I'm attracted to more obscure female protagonist games (gore, rape, to be more specific) but games like these I like too I hope it becomes a great game

MC is very sexy: I add 1 star. Else is disaster.
1) This is not a female protagonist. This is narrator protagonist. Narrator preventing me feel like Sophia. Instead, I'm looking at her through some dude's eyes. That's an immediate reject. Dropd away.
2) There is no plot. It's just a set of primitive situations from cheap 80's deuchland porn. Random stories about a TV repairman, a plumber, a car washman. There is a lack of emotionality. Typical teenage boy's work.
3) There is no shadow in the frame. There is no dynamic range. Transition from shaded areas to light areas. Therefore, there is no sense of volume. That is why even a sexy MC model does not cause delight, because it seems flat. The author tried to compensate it by volumes of the model's shapes, but it doesn't work that way. The shape is created by light and shadow, which are not present here.
4) The 'menu of choices' looks like typical superstitions about 'MILF' of a 13 yo boy. He divides women into two types - whores and nuns. Because his mum, of course, is a nun. The player is not encouraged to choose guys based on his feelings. Instead, it is asked to choose an action based on the narrator's opinion. This is disgusting.

Summary: This is an extremely disappointing experience for those looking for an immersive experience into the world and emotions of a Woman. Another pseudo-feminine game. Deception.

Pros:
+ solid first release size
+ solid quality
+ great female faces
+ overall solid female shapes (*)
+ refreshing straight forward story
+ nasty old man kink
+ a bit of (quite short) sex already (even not with some old guy)
+ nicely written, not too much text but well worded like the creator reads much
+ that blond hair and tanned skin of her in the mainscreen looks SO GOOD!

Cons:
- if mc would be overall a little but more curvy/thicker she would look even better (*) (if possible)
- her tits are solid big but look a bit too plastic shape wise and a bit more prominent nipples would be really appreciated (*)
- sex scenes a bit longer in the future
- good wife not worth it yet - if you go good wife route no sex with old guy happens
- "husband" should be her boss or grandpa or something cause he looks too old for being her husband in my opinion also in the text it reads he is in his mid 50s but he really looks more like in his late 70/early 80s in my honest opinion (no sex with him yet? very sad)


i really like the straight forwardness and the idea of the story and the spoiled insta-model idea. nice wording (how he describes the hair of the old man in novel worthy :-D) with a few tweaks here and there and more content this will have much potential!