[R>Writer] solo dev looking for an experienced writer to peer-review my dialogue

[daraku_y]

heyo, i'm currently compiling everything for an h-game in rpgmaker (one piece trainer focused around hypnosis) and, as it's my first time writing in this sense, i was looking to see if any experienced writers could peer-review what i've written, give me tips on what to add and help me make the characters manner of speech better mirror their actual characters in one piece

my tag is sonnybuoy if you're interested in helping out

 

[battlesh0rts]

I could help