Some feedback wanted on a new visual novel

_Eyia

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Game Developer
Oct 1, 2018
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Hi

I'm working on my first visual novel here. It's still short and not ready as a real version yet. But I thought I'd post it here already to get some feedback, as it's my first time working with Renpy, Daz and coding.

The story is about a Female Protagonist - and shortly said - will graduate from university and start her professional and personal life.
It would be a faster past game. As in skipping a week or two here and there, to move the story ahead for a broader perspective, rather than going from day to day always.

Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks.

PS. I hope the windows version works, as I created the Renpy on Mac.
Mac:
Windows:
 
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