Small suggestion: reduce the number of glaring white background images.
I will not comment too much on the content; Lost in Laminate more agency than this, this felt FAR too linear.
HTML Sonata [v0.5e] [GlossandGlamour]
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I will not comment too much on the content; Lost in Laminate more agency than this, this felt FAR too linear.
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More linear is definitely the point, the goal was to tell a lean story without letting scope get out of control.
I much prefer linear stories like this so thank you
Great writing. Absolutly top-notch.
I didn't expect Shinji to show up. I mean, I guess it makes the story much more wholesome but I'd prefer f/f only, or at least, I'd apprciate if the game is tagged so that I'd know beforehand.
I didn't expect Shinji to show up. I mean, I guess it makes the story much more wholesome but I'd prefer f/f only, or at least, I'd apprciate if the game is tagged so that I'd know beforehand.
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Sadly for now its only in the browser, there's no export/import functionality. I think its the limit of the outdated IF framework the author used.
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Really enjoyed the story, great writing! I do have some gripes with it but only because it is captivating and makes me invested in the details. I love that the heavy bondage / submission theme is a 'normal' ingrained part of the world. (for the MCs status, which is what matters). Denial is super hot and to me it adds to it that the rules are so stacked against the sub, wetware have and important duty and are tightly controlled.
Towards the end of 0.5 content it made a lot of things right that I was missing a little bit until then. I know we are using internet images here but Artemis was only sexy in that office scene. Other times your "domme" is a male kpop star cosplaying as Neo. I want a shapely busty dominatrix please! With feminine face. Ideally in form fitting officer uniform but i realize im strecthing it. When finding images for custom scenarios its impossible to be that specific.
While we get to see them working and the sub-dom relationship during that is expressed well, we dont see much of their alone time & training until the office scene where mc recieves some personal teasing. I wish there was a bit more of that and mind conditioning with more traditional methods (being dommed) between these 2 central characters.With that said, the more institutional angle is a strenght of this story. So this is just a small suggestion for bolstering the 'personal handler' idea, and not to replace anything.
Edit: It would be super super hot to get bullied / ordered around by some random encounter, I liked the relationship between the wetware but its the obsessed student girl im awaiting the most to get their hands on us.
Variable results on my first playthrough:
Towards the end of 0.5 content it made a lot of things right that I was missing a little bit until then. I know we are using internet images here but Artemis was only sexy in that office scene. Other times your "domme" is a male kpop star cosplaying as Neo. I want a shapely busty dominatrix please! With feminine face. Ideally in form fitting officer uniform but i realize im strecthing it. When finding images for custom scenarios its impossible to be that specific.
While we get to see them working and the sub-dom relationship during that is expressed well, we dont see much of their alone time & training until the office scene where mc recieves some personal teasing. I wish there was a bit more of that and mind conditioning with more traditional methods (being dommed) between these 2 central characters.With that said, the more institutional angle is a strenght of this story. So this is just a small suggestion for bolstering the 'personal handler' idea, and not to replace anything.
Edit: It would be super super hot to get bullied / ordered around by some random encounter, I liked the relationship between the wetware but its the obsessed student girl im awaiting the most to get their hands on us.
Variable results on my first playthrough:
Code:
02 Humbled?: No!
See Things: 0
ID/Math: 0 / 2
Position Check: 2
Choc2: 1
ArtyPoints: 8
01-P Meal: 1
05 Meal: 2
00 Meal: 1
Egg/Aphro/Visor: Yes! / Yes! / Yes!