VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Sophia's Story [v0.2] [Trinciapapere]

The issues are just to many. Here are a few...
Language (Spelling and sentence constructions.)
Character mishmash, Conversations comes from wrong character etc.
Renderings are blurry, the lighting, light source, lack of light source makes it an eyesore..

I Tried this before reading any reviews or posts
F- for Engrish, I really don't know why, If English is not your* First or Fluent language people feel using Translators such as Google* (Other translators are available.) They are not fit for purpose when it comes to grammar.
Being a natural English speaker, this makes my eyes and brain hurt

E- For Renders, Some were so grainy they looked like photographs from the 1940's , Lighting was non existent in some scenes.

Summary: Based on [VN] [Ren'Py] Sophia's Story [v0.2] [Trinciapapere]
@trinciapapere , Can do better more time needs to be spent on homework i.e.: Learn how to use Rendering software Learn English or Speak to a native English speaker about translating VN to English or just publish in Italian.

I Hope this review is takes as constructive criticism I'm all for people following their hearts and doing something (If I had the time I would publish some of the stories I've got) Kudos for doing it.


* Generalization (not aimed specifically at one individual.)

Edit for Grammer

LEt me tell you 1 things:

The purpose of a porn novel is to arouse people, and for that purpose that recurrent face of Einstein totally destroys all your development efforts.

Special mention about the "efforts". Some renders are so basic and noisy that could have it reduced by 80% and still look like shit.

Engrish is the worst i have read anywhere, macihese tranlation from Russian works best that this crap, i dont have any other name for this. This games purpose is to kill your mouse with clics, to maybe enjoy 1 single sex scene with the worst lighting setting someone can create.

I dont know how anyone would lose their time to make this garbage and present it with such pride.

Dont read my review, consider this 1 star a -10 stars. Girls dont look entirely bad though, but animation, and the rest of technical aspects suck ass.

The potential is there maybe, if the dev can do renders that aren't a blurry fuzzy mess with broken necks and chooses a different engine.

Hundreds of lines of text with the image not changing at all.