Ren'Py Abandoned Space Trainer [v0.1.1] [Xasrai]

Edvin

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People are complaining about the anime eye style, not the art quality. The art is good quality.Complaining about art styles like anime are not objective complaints, style preference is subjective.
Well, I had the pleasure of working with some very talented artists in the area adult games and this style is roughly at the level of a better beginner. He is not completely without talent, but his attention to detail is insufficient and his style is not very nice combination western and asian drawing style (combining these two styles is EVER a good idea).

He is definitely not ready to start his own game on Patreon.
Competition is high and the first impression is the most important.
I do not know about you, but I am not impressed.
 
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waffel

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well like exploitation films, most new patreon startups are exploitation games, I fully understand and agree with your views, except that I personaly like how he has mixed the two artstyles even though I favour the more hardcore eastern style :)
 

Edvin

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Are you really sure this is a style that people will appreciate? :closedeyesmile:
(If so, I should start my own patreon. I can make lots of such pictures.)

 

waffel

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Don't mock the stick figure, remember how awesome a game 'one finger death punch' is! ;)
 

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Didn't know about this game. I like how Leia looks like, but I like more my own version of her. ;)
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I like how the brunette looks, but I think mine is a little better.
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Nice job Xasrai, the art looks good
 

nekobasu

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Anime characters for a star wars parody... just no(just my opinion). That aside the art is good but the placeholder backgrounds made me loose interest pretty quick.
Seriously, dev of this game, first impressions last.

E: Another thing, I thought we'd be playing that awesome looking chiss character on the logo, seems we're stuck with some character named "Starkiller" who really doesn't like the sun.

E2: Not even once did I feel like Leia was in the game.
 
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Didn't know about this game. I like how Leia looks like, but I like more my own version of her. ;)
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Appropriate that your name is Darth Smut and your developing a star wars trainer, while also commenting on someone making their own version of a star wars trainer. I just fine that entertaining plus your avatar is pretty funny.
In relation to the game the artwork is okay I suppose, everyone has their own style. I'm sure op will improve over time.[/spoiler]
 

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I don't really have an opinion about this game yet, because I haven't DL'd and tried it out, but I had to comment because i find it strange that, judging from certain comments in this thread, seemingly several people on this board have a problem with anime art style. The reason I find this strange is that this is a forum dedicated to *hentai games*; I would think that even those porn game enthusiasts who aren't fans of anime would have at least developed an appreciation or tolerance of the style through osmosis ;)

Anyway, to judge from the image in the OP, I think the art is pretty good. I've seen better of course, but I've also seen lots worse, even in some pretty popular games. It could be better, but I don't really understand the unusually harsh criticism in this case. Criticism is a good thing, but it has to be in perspective relative to the medium.
 
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Kev33lar

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Ummmmm... Is this game gonna get an update?
I'm never sure if the owners/developers are aware of games posted here, which means you would need the OP to get the next version and post it.
I tried it, got frustrated in the competition, and started doing console cheats/reading the scripts.
You can't beat her with without console cheats by just dancing(she is always better), or slave competitions(skill increase is too slow/unreliable-you can't get rep fast enough). You have to make your reputation at the guard room (felatio or vaginal sex). The girl you're up against doesn't seem to earn rep unless you do, so feel free to train stamina for more actions per cycle. If you console cheat, her stat is "MRep". Just set it back to 1 when Melina(?) shows she's gotten too far ahead. Money is useless, the store has been disabled. After you speak to Jabba, you can visit the other planets. He has several endings typed in, including new game+, so unlike many Betas, you might be able to actually finish this.
The main compliant is the visuals- most everything happens offscreen/by text; and the fact you seem to be strictly a trainer (you have your slaves do stuff to/for other people, but not YOU) . So if you are looking for a story, you might try it. (he certainly put a lot of time and effort in his training routines). If you are only looking for pretty pictures, its a doll dress up game.
Oh, If you are wondering how to get submission points- each skill can go up to 1000- when it reaches 500 (bar half full), you get a sub point.
 

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That and lots of games are just random people throwing shit at walls to see what sticks to see if their shit that is sticking can be milked for $.