VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Sparkling Duplicity [Final] [Goosenards]

Best blowjob in a porn renpy game.

I'd like to leave the review like this (more than enough with what I wrote above), but I have to write something else to be able to publish it

I wouldn't say that it has the most realistic animations, but they are certainly some of the most interesting that I've seen in this type of games in a long time.

Great job.

Pretty damn good. Girls are gorgeous, MC is decent model-wise. The pacing is okay, it was pretty good until the end of chapter 2 where it just really rushed out a couple of faps for the reader. Overall this game is just straight up good, a bit of refinement and sticking to more believable pacing would make it great but seriously pretty good right now.

Chapter 2:

This will be a short review highlighting a few things.

Story 3/5: You are a deadbeat dad that stepped out on his family and only to come back to an ungrateful, hateful son (Which is deserved). In turn, they both have become resentful towards each other. The only reason the father returned was because he promised his dying wife to take care of their son until he went off to university. His son has no respect for his dad and will be going to university in a few weeks. But you as player has the option to take revenge on him by fucking his current girlfriend as revenge or even hooking up with his ex-girlfriend and friend who are all around his age. The progression with each girl has been rushed a bit for faps which ruins the pacing.

Characters 4/5: The dad was a complete pushover in the first chapter as his son berated him, but later on he has become more and more of a dick towards his son. His son is a misogynistic piece of shit with a chip on his shoulder due to his dad abandoning him. They are made for each other, but this not about them, but the girls. The love interests are all different with their own quirks, but because they rush the sex scenes, they don't have as much depth as they appear. For example, you go on a date with one girl ending with a wholesome kiss only to end up fucking her on a couch and at a club one day later, not great.

Models 4/5: They all look fine except for the main character dad. His hands are discolored, yellow nails and very hairy and his is in dire need of a haircut. For the girls all of them look good and have the same body type except for one fat chick.

Animation 5+/5: The usage of Virtamate animations with hair physics make this VN standout from all the others by leagues.

Music 4/5: It has music and it's decent, really liked the club music.

Conclusion: You could make the argument it's a 3/5 due poor pacing and no real suspense, and that's fair. It's definitely not the greatest writing/story/plot but it's a story of a late 30s guy fucking some teens which are in his son's social circle. (What you expect?)

Just fantastic. The base story/theme is good, the models are beautiful and the animations are great with good camera angles.
As someone who enjoys secretive scenarios, quickies not fully naked, good face expressions from the girls and different camera angles (top to bottom, first person, focus on girls, etc) this game is possibly a gold mine.

I feel burned by other creators, but if the releases are consistent i will support the dev on subscribestar. Keep up the good work.

This is pretty darn good. The girls are all hot and thank fuck there are only 3 of them. The story is fast paced and pretty well thought out. This is definitely a unique AVN and I am looking forward to seeing more of it.

So the bad... while the models look great some of the time, they look pretty crappy in other scenes. I think this is the fault of the models and not the fault of the dev but they are bad enough to pull you out of the story and make you go "eh?". Also, for me, some of the h scenes could be better. To be clear, the animation is really great, but the interactions need some work. I was really disappointed in the h scene with Blair and some of the scenes with Tina. I also didn't like the forced interactions. There is no solo route here, so even if you reject Tina you will end up with Stephanie and visa versa.

Now the good.... The writing is great and while the Dad is kind of a dick to his moron of a son, they both deserve each other so it seems to work well for this story. The humor and dialogue are spot on and very enjoyable. And while I may have not liked all of the h scenes, some of them were really amazing. The first BJ scene with Tina and the dancing scene in the club were off the charts good.

Anyway, it's a really great start. You should definitely download it and check out the animation if nothing else.

Good luck to a talented developer!

Ch. 2

Okay, I'm actually enjoying this one so far. It's kind of stupid and every girl throws herself at the MC, but it's probably the cute ginger that's doing it for me. She has enough character to be interesting.

Them suddenly fucking towards the end of chapter 2 was a bit abrupt though. I feel like that bit should be re-written to have a bit more of a lead up.

(Review of Ch. 2)

The loli content reminds me of Koala's games, here the sex scenes are just as daring if not more, and some of the animations are real triple-A stuff I wouldn't be surprised to find in "those" porn sites.

The dialogue between the MC and his son is too harsh to be believable, some of the renders are awful (mostly the MC looking like a messed up, disjointed body in some shots) and lighting has room for improvement, but the sexual content is top notch and some parts are hilarious. Worth checking out for that alone.

Wow uhh, honestly just fantastic. I didn't know I was into this until I played it, truly one of the few games that keep us coming back here. I mean there is a decent sized list of those games, but I will be adding this to it. Good NTR

Really hot female models, MC definitely looks good too compared to some other visual novels I've played but he could be a little more buff, considering it's a netori game.

Great animations with great hair and clothes physics.

When it comes to the story, well there is no story. You are cucking your own son and that's about it, at least for now though I don't think it will get any more interesting later on.

Pacing is bad, while I do appreciate it when I don't have to read an entire book by some Tolkien wannabe random to get an H scene, things definitely happen way too fast there.
At the end you literally jumped from one H scene with one girl to second H scene with another girl in a matter of few lines.

I will still keep my eye on this one, everything except story is high quality, which is not a bad thing, in the end it's a porn game. However I hope the author will see this and consider more natural pacing.

Amazing art, amazing animations, characters with personalities that are different between each other. story seems pretty good so far aswell
overall a pretty solid start, keep up the good work guys and it will be a huge success of a game.

One of the best porn animations period. Character models are good. Story is moving too quickly it starts good with good dialogue, humor etc but by the end of chapter 2 the pacing is all over the place, hope it gets better. Looking forward for more juicy animations

Pretty much what anothersilo wrote. I simply cannot give this game more than 2 stars. The story and especially the pacing are terrible. Especially with the cheerleader; everything happened way too fast, no build-up whatsoever.

Some stuff also makes zero sense I know it's a porn game, but it's also a visual novel, which means the story has to make a minimum of sense for it to be enjoyable.

The only reason I'm giving it two stars is for Blaire (who's the only LI with an acceptable pacing and who is likeable), and the animations which are among the best from this site. They could be smoother, but they feel less robotic than most other animations out there.

The models are nice. They work.

The story and characters lack build up. Our MC is flirting and having sex with the girls after seeing them twice. As well as a meeting at school with the Dean who is getting oral sex from a student, which when exposed is shaken off as normal.

The pace of this story is fast. Even the son is established as being an asshole in the first dialogue. There is no subtle nuance.

The animations are different, and do look great. But again, the scenes where they're used lack realistic build up and tension. And instead of feeling something, i'm only watching something.

Added to my watch list because i want to see more.

Great NETORI game. The game has excellent renders and animations. You play as a middle age man and get to cuck your son with his GF, his EX, or his best friend. The game gives you lots of choices to do this. Overall 10/10 game.

The animations blew me away! Best I've seen in any porn game. The LIs are cute, the story is a bit different from the usual, and though the son is an annoying little twat it actually adds a bit of humor. I'm looking forward to seeing where this one goes.

TLDR: This game has a lot of good things going for it, and I really wanted to like it, but the story just could not be worse...

I'll start with the good.
Animations: 5/5 -- best in class for games on this site
Visuals: 4/5 -- nothing groundbreaking, but renders look good and the girls are pretty
Dialogue: 4/5 -- it won't blow you away with how well written it is or anything, but it's definitely good. I never had my immersion killed by bad writing or grammar/spelling mistakes.

Now for the bad.
Story: -1000/5 -- You play as a middle-aged, widowed, father of a boy who is just an absolute piece of shit. The game gives the son some backstory as to why he is the way he is, but it doesn't stop him from making Dudley from Harry Potter look like an angel.
There are 3 love interests:
#1 -- your son's current girlfriend, and a notorious slut who has fucked the entire football team and several teachers (as well as your son).
#2 -- your son's ex-girlfriend, who has done lots of sexual stuff (although not full penetrative sex) with your son. She also just hooked up with a coworker.
#3 -- your son's friend, who is the only actual decent love interest in this game. And she's good, don't get me wrong. If this game was just her, I might actually enjoy it.

Can't wait for more content!

Seriously the best animation I've seen in any adult game. The mc's model could use since adjusting. Compared to the other characters it doesn't look like he fits with the rest of the cast.

The animations are truly top tier and the story is not cliche like most of them and pretty great for Ch1. Can't wait for more to come and please please please make a discord we all can keep in touch with the updates.
10/10 chief kiss

Hands-down the BEST animation I've ever seen in an AVN. Granted - there are only two blow-jobs and one dream-sex scene (1 camera), but the blow-jobs are nearly life-like in their animation and execution. I'd allow that girl to give me the same any day of the week, it's just that spectacular.

Renders aren't top-notch for 2024, but they're fine considering the awesomeness on display with animations.

The story is rather simple, but fun in a way as your son in the game is quite the asshat.

The only thing lacking right now to make it one of the better AVNs of the year, is more content, and a slightly more involved story (an actual plot). Hopefully the developer can double their efforts and pull both off, as I'd really like to see this AVN succeed.

Right off the bat this game has the very best animations I have ever seen in any of the games I have played here. Simply top notch effort in a prologue. I was quite surprised by how much I enjoyed it and really like the girls so far. The slut is a slut, but a quality slut, and the two other apparent love interests are simply amazing and I look forward to more content with them. I wouldn't think I'd ever be interested in cucking my son, but what can I say, he comes off as a dick and I didn't mind at all.