VN Ren'Py Abandoned Spiral Tavern [v1.0.3] [Monocow]

DarkWolf2055

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Overview:
You are saved from a raging blizzard and brought to a tavern with a cabbit keeper, no memory, and an impulse for lewd things.
Later that night, you learn you are a vessel to a fertility goddess, and she needs seed, and a LOT of it.
And that's the name of the game (not the actual name, THAT'S Spiral Tavern) get different kinds of semen and keep the goddess happy while trying not to get hypnotized ore vored, or absorbed, or mindwiped, droned, this might be harder than it sounds now that I think about it.​

Thread Updated: 2019-03-11
Release Date: 2019-03-08
Developer: Monocow
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Censored: No
Version: 1.0.3
OS: Win Mac Android
Language: English
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RedPillBlues

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Art looks great, besides that dudes dick in the first post. That screams all kinds of wrong to me.
 

Loqic

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The art looks great!

The writing however... :unsure:
Oh well, who knows, it's a start. Let's hope it gets a good amount content and polishing up in the future.
 

Wolfikins

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Could you provide a couple of examples of the writing?
If it is riddled with spelling errors and grammatical errors, I don't want to even download the game.
Eh, a load of "Story, in a porn game?" fourth wall breakages, unsubtle nods to how cliched the sitch is, "don't you wanna ask how many cabbits exist in the world?" type dealios... It's mildly annoying, and not as clever as it thinks it is, but, then again, this mainly seems like an interest check prototype.
 
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W65

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I'm getting HL2 flashbacks from that "Start Load Preferences" menu lineup. I know it's pretty normal Ren'py stuff, but it just hit me in the Half-life bone.

So this is supposed to be based on someone's "RP Server," which I'm guessing is a furry typefucking RP IRC. That might explain it if the story is a little loose and fast.

Dude apparently has a second Patreon for regular old porn comics, if anyone's interested in the art. This and another game I've recently seen have this mamabliss-on-their-meds vibe that I just can't shake once I've seen it. I dunno if it's the linelessness or just how round everything is.

Judging from the caps, at least, those are some scandalously human-looking furries.
 

Wolfikins

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You've been around here for a year yet still think these are porn games.

There are more story based games here than porn based ones. It's more erotica than anything else.
Not gonna lie, kinda confused about how that got construed as me sayin' that, because that's p. much a quote from the game, or, more specifically, the developer's "voice" in the game I'm using there, to mention a legit crit (if a minor one, considering how early days it's meant to be) that yeah, that fourth wall breakery is a bit cliche, bit tired, and not as funny or clever as it thinks it is. Does that bring the whole down? A little, but, like I said, early days, and since there's no voice attached, it's an easy enough thing to change if that's the dev's decision.
 

RedPillBlues

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Theres no longer a patreon page, looks like it might be abandoned.
 

Avaron1974

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Looks that way.

The game is in development, all art assets are not final, and if supported, will be updated later in a clean up update.
That's from their itch.io page, I highlighted the telling part.

It seems to me they were another of those devs that expected to make bank within a couple of months in an over saturated market with no proven track record.

Looks to me like devs are refusing to build up naturally and want the big bucks quick. From now on i'm naming this BSS Syndrome. I know it's been around longer than him but he's the only one I know managed to abandon 5 games in less than 5 months across multiple accounts and get himself blacklisted all trying to chase patreon bucks.
 

Theovonpapen

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I know it's been around longer than him but he's the only one I know managed to abandon 5 games in less than 5 months across multiple accounts and get himself blacklisted all trying to chase patreon bucks.
For a moment there, I thought the 4 games below your reply were the other 4 abandoned.