Decent job so far.
There's a lot of improvement to make on the progression, it's all guess work and feels really awkward, that you need to talk to the Captain to make time pass when the TV doesn't work. Also, discovering that you had to repeat Asha's quest 2x to raise enough money, is kinda weird. It worked, but felt amateurish.
Right now, I don't feel I could recommend this to anyone, in spite of good renders and a somewhat fun story. The progression is too convoluted, weird and feels forced. Hoping this can be fixed, I'll keep playing this.