VN - Ren'Py - Stay Online [v0.85] [LadyLana]

Okay, this is a pretty simple game that actually turned out to be a bubbling volcano. If you don't follow the path of obvious perversion, then she will keep a tight rein on you for the whole time. Good execution of the idea. I will be waiting for new updates.

I really like this game, it feels unique in that it's a phone-based game that actually uses 3D renders, and that alone gives it a big boost. The story is also really good, with a few different pathing options giving separate routes to follow.

The FMC is really attractive, and the scenes, although mostly short by necessaity, are also generally hot - although that hotness is definitely increased by the accompanying story.

The hidden cameras are a welcome addition to the game, giving it a whole new element to help drive the story forwards, and, depending on the selected path, the teasing is really nicely done as well. On the cheating path, although it's not actually behind the MC's back, things are kept quiet, but I can see why that would be, even if it's not how I personally would react. All told, it makes for a really intriguing story, and a great game.

At first look like normal game ntr but is so very surprise me when play .
Good with CG + Content + Story + Sexy Character
If you like NTR + Wife + Cheating + Cockold this game should have in your list.
Thank you Dev for nice game make me feel amazing i love content with phone is so brilliant.

I like the game very much. Great story. Amazing renders. Very very erotic. Wish it will continue like this. Best wishes to the developer in this amazing journey. Hot game honestly. Looking forward to the next updates. Well done .

The game is very good, with lots of potential, and because of that i feel compelled to put my 2 cents of constructive critcism for the dev...

Some choices put you on a certain route, regardless of the previous, which does seem a bit simplistic. For example you can have 100% loyal responses then decide not to call her and bam! cheating route, which feels a little 'meh', a bit out of character maybe, expecially because nothing outrageous happens there to justify it. Same thing with the panties and the cuck route...

Also it's pretty obvious where the choices will lead, which is a good thing for the delicate (to some!) subjects of the game, but i think it takes away a bit from the theme of the game: "Relationships between lovers are tested by distance." Well, not really tested if all you have to do is take the conservative choice to keep her faithful.

I'd love to see Julia show some more agency (that's when this game truly shines), maybe pushing back or growing bolder if the PC is too "boring", from the lack of intimacy, etc... forcing the player to make tough decisions (kinda like solving a puzzle), instead of having a straight up path/outfit/scene selection.

I know it's the first game and it's way, way easier to do it this way, but one can always look for the best.

This is all constructrive criticism for the dev, tho because at the end of the day, it's a very good game: it's teeming with passion, well written, with good characters and great art. keep up the good work!

[v0.6]

- The model look good Julia is a perfect combination of cuteness and sexy, she looks even hotter as the story progress

- Not a fan of phone game but this game make me forget about it, the hidden camera feature is so impressive that make me so into it even more

- the story is enjoyable for NTR lover, especially the part when another girl secretly text MC about Julia action

- easy to play but so impressive, this game is pretty good. you are the best Lady Lana.

Insanely good buildup. I specially love the nuances and the subtle differences between the cheating route and the consensual sharing route.
For example, I love how even in the cheating route, Julia is in good terms with you and truly loves you. A lot of ntr games do this thing where the girl becomes a sociopath and starts humiliating you, which is definitely not my cup of tea. If the cheating route continues like this in future too, I'm pouring a lot of money into this project for sure.
Julia's model is also very unique and pretty. She checks off all the boxes of being seductive, hot, slutty, cute and beautiful at the same time. Had such a blast playing this fr.

First off, I am not a big fan of these phone games. Initially an interesting premise, it has been abused by many a Dev. This one promised NTR (netorare) and NTS and the LI looked very cute, so I gave it a go. Suffice to say, I have thoroughly enjoyed it.

What sets this one apart is the visuals and decent writing. It also works on the "less is more" concept. At times it can be frustrating, but it does raise the tension and allows your imagination to fill in the blanks. Oh, there are visuals and even animation, just at times you cannot see a wide angle of it. Frustrating, yes, but it is in keeping with the supposed phone/camera/video aspect of it.

As mentioned, the wife is very fetching. I know that is subjective, but not sure how anyone could conclude otherwise. She has that mix of cute-smoking hot that appeals. You get plenty of pics of her.

There are two storylines as far as I can tell - NTS and NTR. The NTR is not hard cuck - people confuse that all the time. At least in my playthrough, the husband didn't have a lot of agency after a certain point. The train left the station and all he could do is watch it unfold. Very titillating. The NTS is what you would expect and, frankly, more down the cuck road where he is an active participant, from afar, in the planning and execution of the action.

The build-up is just the right speed. By Version 8 - you are really getting into the action. Be mindful, choices will steer you one direction of the other. I found myself going down the NTS route and had to backtrack. No problemo.

So, while I hesitate to throw 5 stars around, I'm giving Stay Online the Full Monty. I think, for the phone cheat/ntr genre, it is worth the 5 stars. Granted, if the tags don't suite you, don't play it. If you like NTR, however, it certainly scratches that itch. Try it out.

I like where this game is going, this type of NTR is always my cup of tea so it may not be objective, but it's not in the deep end yet so I can't give too much of a meaningful review, the female characters are hot, and there are some animations that are also a plus.

Version: 0.4

TLDR: Same ol’ story, well crafted.

This is another NTR-oriented phone game, like a dozen of similar ones. However, this game – so far, as the content is still limited (v. 0.4) – is one of the best in this genre (to make it clear: partly due to the efforts of the dev. Partly – because the average quality of the ‘phone games’ is not extremely high).

The overall idea is simple, there are not too many characters involved, which is good, the dialogues are believable. On the other hand, the plot is predictable… I guess. Though maybe the dev can surprise us? I do not want to spoil, but one of the first choices in the game, concerning the cameras, may suggest some twists in the plot. Hope it’ll be so. I can imagine additional spice if for instance Julia realizes that Patrick has broken her trust – and in consequence he is not aware that she is aware of the cameras… What about Vika blackmailing Patrick – where could it lead? And so on...

The game is mainly text based, which is pretty obvious, but it’s not fully dominated by the text (also thanks to the secret cameras and a video call – hopefully, there will be more of it). I like the visuals. Especially, the FMC is hot. By the way, Vika seems to be a twin sister of the FMC from ‘The Pineapple Express’.

The flaws? The game’s portrait orientation makes the menu and the save slots very small; the letters are almost illegible, the MC’s laptop’s screen - as captured by Vika - has to be looked at with a magnifying glass. There are also not too many options regarding the phone – maybe there could be some more functionalities, like the browser or the phone’s gallery? Location checking app? Remote access to Julia's laptop?

I am looking for such additional features (or plot twists) as in the current state IMO the game is good but not very good. Say, a solid four but still with the potential for a full pool of stars.

Very good game, good dialogues and the pace of the narrative. It is good that there is no dispersion on unnecessary branches (like mother, sister or daughter). Everything is clear and to the point. There is still little content, but what there is already gives great hope. I really hope that the author will not abandon the game and will actively supplement it

I really think this could be a good proposal. Additionally, I like the designs of the girls, and the way the story is told gives a different touch to the eroticism. I’d like to keep seeing how it develops in the future.

The way it captures the thrill and tension of a forbidden romance, the guilt and desire warring within the heroine... it's positively delicious!
The way they'd dance around their true feelings at first, then slowly give in to temptation? Mmm, it makes me shiver just thinking about it!

An overall good game so far. The dev uses mystery and suspense really well. And the graphic is really good. The wife is attractive. He is prolly a fan of pineapple express and lostin paradise because I see little bit of art work inferring to character from those two games. love it.

Let me start by saying I’m an NTR and NTS fan.

However, the characters are poorly written. The MC constantly objects to Vic’s actions, which feels illogical. If he’s against them, he could simply communicate with his wife to resolve the issue. Overall, the MC comes across as very weak.
The wife’s behavior is inconsistent. At first, she’s portrayed as innocent and elegant, but then out of nowhere, she claims to enjoy watching cheating porn. What!?
The game’s logic is flawed. It’s blatantly trying to copy similar games without any creativity.
Some of the artwork has glitches, and some backgrounds are low-quality.
There’s barely any story—it’s just a very simplistic game.

Overall, it was a disappointing experience, and every point I’ve made is valid. Feel free to check for yourself.

A must play game for NTR lovers, I liked the building up, graphics & writing are good, looking for next updates , however if you're playing on phone, download some app from Play Store which forcefully change the phone orientation to portrait, as this is a portrait game but it will run landscape so you'll have very small screen. I hope dev fix this in next update❤

V 0.3: LI is hot, dev is pushing out lots of content in quick releases, nice gimmick with the CCTV. Game doesn't work that well on android (ren'py in portrait mode doesn't work that well on mobile screens, apparently), but is great on pc.
Moderately slow burn so far...

well done, good characters creation, big potential even if idea is not the most unique. It matches expectations of people who is into these kinks. Can't wait for the next releases, keep up the good work!

First of all, it's a pure click orgy, but it's worth it.
FMC is very nicely drawn, the corruption increases at a reasonable pace, MC is given a few options and the texts are really good, as far as I can judge as a non-native speaker.
It could, however, do with some clearer instructions not to skip additional options too quickly because you're focused on the text and don't immediately notice the instructions on the upper phone display.
At the moment I would give it 4 points, because I personally feel that one or two convenience functions are missing. But it really only just missed 5 stars.

Personally, I would like to see a more differentiated development of two basic paths for the next updates. Firstly, the love story, which includes more private phone sex, such as a camera in the bedroom, more teasing, (interactive) sex toys and the like. Secondly, a prioritization of the open relationship, in which the MC becomes the active companion and observer. (Of course, the NTR haters will now take to the barricades, but this story has a well-founded background for such a decision.)

*Update v0.5 & v0.6 - 5*
v0.6 not yet released here...
LadyLana continues to deliver.
Julia is smoking hot.
Paths are clearer and the subtle variations in dialogue & images are simple, but very, very effective in appealing to the desired path played.
Can't wait to see what's next and how each path story plays out.
How/when will Julia learn about the cameras?
Will she be mad? (likely on one path, but the others, seems like she'd be ok with it and use them to tease, play into Patrick's desires even more). Just have to wait and see...

*Update: v0.3 - 5*
The excellent start continues...
Adds another 10-20 mins of reading, excellent photos, and the "paths" are getting more defined.

Early development: v 0.2 - 5*
Excellent start.
Yes, another "phone/text VN", but this is the best start I've come across for these types of VNs. Very early first impressions, as far as starts go, this is easily top 2 or 3.

Not a lot of content, story yet, still early, about 20-30 mins worth depending on how fast you read. But what's there is a very hot start/tease that hints toward more excellent story and content to come...