Ren'Py - Stellar Dream [Part 1] [Winterlook]

Art is great, writing is definitely superior to most porn games I've played. The UI could use some work but it can be improved easily, the core of the game has a lot of potential. Definitely some of the best art on the site.

Also for the other reviewer who reviewed this game before me, holy shit you are pure tard. You're really asking for a one man dev team to create 30-60 frames per second animations for a 2d porn game? Literally no other porn game does that what made you say such a dumb critique as if it was industry standard? More frames than Disney themselves animate for their 100 million dollar movies btw. Coomer brain.

Good Points
+ Art style looks pretty cool. Girls drawings and place designs looks cool.
+ We have kind of interesting story.

Bad Points
- Time system in the top of screen is pretty weird, it could use some change to avoid unnecesary annoyance.
- Map system needs huge improves. Opening map and going somewhere is too painfull and annoying. We need map icon in main HUD instead of pressing general menu (menu we have everyting like: stats, inventory, tasks, map and contracts) and same time you should add fast travel icons player can choice, like there will be little arrow right side of map icon which opens sub places we can go. And having notice for closed places could be amazing aswell.
- There is no exit option from that general menu, its pretty basic thing and not having makes things annoying, only way to exit from that menu is going somewhere you can get dialogue with someone or going your room.
- We have static so called ''animations'' and they are awfull... While art looks amazing not having 30-60FPS proper animations is pretty big bad point, we need better animations than this. For catching up good looking art this game needs proper 30-60fps animations with good physics and quality.
- Explore mechanic can use some changes, MC getting tired to easily.
- Multiple choice questions could use some improve.

For The End
This is first relase and i dont want to be so hard, all i can say i can see the potencial but without proper animations and with bad points i write its most likely wasted. With next updates i will look again and gonna hope DEV will add proper animations and fix bad points, wish you luck with your game and i hope you will make great job.