VN - Ren'Py - Stray Incubus [S2 Ch.2a] [Flynn974]

Very interesting story and great art. All the girls are very different and i enjoy monster girls very much, so if there were more in the future (like with different ear and tails) Id be even happe. Excited for what comes next and cant wait for more

Honestly there is nothing to say against this VN. It is just such a fun read and never gets boring. The characters are also great and look good and if you are looking for hot sex scenes then look no further.

I'm glad i found this gem, renders are nice and the story is good and easy to follow. There's a lot of content already and plenty of lewd scenes, the girls are good looking and each of them has a different personality.

And thank fuck the MC is also good, he can actually stand up for himself and hes not retarded, he uses his brain. Too many games make the MC a beta pussy with everyone walking all over him with zero player input to change him.
As others have said it can use some music and sound effects (hopefully in future updates)
For a free game that is not patreon exclusive it has a ton of content in a few months since release.If the dev starts a patreon page i will support.

5 stars, looking forward for future updates, good luck dev, great game.

Concept is pretty straightforward but it sure is well executed. Additionally the world building is not bad and there's already a lot of content. Definitely worth playing.
Yes, there are some typos and such but I had a lot of fun playing, so it did not affect the rate.
edit:
Unfortunately, had to lower the score to 4. It's still a decent game, but last two updates were disappointing.

Stray incubus [ v0.5a ]

By the time I'm writing this review I have finished ch 4 and have to start ch 5. After finishing ch4 I suddenly felt the urge to write the review. So yeah I'm here. The game is surprisingly good. Yep this one is a hidden gem.

I played the first version when it's rekeaed. I like the game liked the story concept, models were good for a HS game. But renders felt like a bit rough and transitions seems off. But story felt good.

But after playing the new update I have to say this one surely surprised me. Render quality increased. Relationship progress system got an upgrade. And I'm starting to love story more and more. Ch 4 reminded me of a top rated HS2 game in this site. Not mentioning its name it would be against reviewing rules. If this one got sound and bgm ch4 would be more horroric. I personally love ch4 but some players can find it irritating too.

MC is an incubus with a big dick. But I'm glad he didn't try to corrupt the girls with his big dick. This one isn't a fuck fest. Actually there is a relationship progression in this game.

Within 2 months of release this one got much more content than many games that takes years to give an update. And surprisingly dev don't even have a patreon page or othe accounts where players can financially fund the game. Dev you can start a patreon page so players ( those who wish) can financially support you.

+ Story
+ Models
+ Horror
+ Hours of gameplay

- no sound effects or music ( this can't be considered as a negative but game would be more amazing with it because this game surely need it. It would be nice hear sword clashing sounds during fight scenes. Thunder and rain sounds can add more horroric atmosphere. The scene where Mc looks through window and suddenly the girl appears outside wind would be more horroric with sound effects )

If you like playing HS game with good story definitely try this one. It is getting better and better through each updates.

A game I can easily recommend...

Good

So the game has a lot of good going for it...

- The character design fit the girl's personalities and enhance the experience

- The story with the mini-quests each chapter is also well done

- The sex scenes are also enjoyable and have good lighting (they don't look grainy too)

Things that can be improved

- Well like mentioned in the comments, music would be nice (some royalty free music fitting the theme would enhance the playing experience)

- Having the sex scenes on the first 2 chapters be animated too

- Some grammatical and syntax errors


All in all, the story is very good and I'll be looking forward to how it goes...

A personal gripe tho is that mc does look like a shota (young boy) even though he's 175 cm (must be the very slim build he has)...doesn't look that well with how big his dick is being incubus and all, though it didn't make me not enjoy the game tho

4.5 Stars
What I like:
Great renders
Great story that's different from the usual
A talented Dev who actually listens to constructive analysis of his game...a feature lacking in a lot of other games

What I don't like:
So many choices that have one choice only...Why?
Random search puzzles that are really just lucky dips with no way of knowing which way to go. These are just frustrating and don't help the game at all in my opinion
The mc in bathers with a normal groin bulge but when unleashed, a cock the size of an arm....that's one hell of a 'grower' and even in this magical world it's a bit hard to swallow (pun intended)

Overall, I thoroughly recommend this game and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. As I said previously, Flynn974 is very talented and I hope to see more of his work in the future

Version played v0.4b

Story so far is actually rather enjoyable. I really won't go into it much besides that.

Renders are good for the tech used but it does show it's limitations. Even there I have seen better
Animations are a bit simple / stiff and there is even some clipping going on, so really not great.

Another thing I don't really like is the comically large dick of the protagonist, I know the tools used to create this basically force a large dick but this one is especially huge. I understand it's an Incubus but still. I also know this is personal taste, it just seems to be a bit weird, when dressed there is not nearly the bulge that one would expect.

In terms of scenes there are a few but less than one would expect given the the harem with an Incubus but it works nicely enough.

Still overall it's pretty good and on the plus side the lesser focus on visuals also meant the game progresses quite fast. Which is certainly worth something. Providing the plot doesn't go on forever and overstays it's welcome.

decent protagonist I like the personality you've given him, well the characters in general but the main having a brain that he actually uses and isn't an idiot is great it gives him more depth, I like the art, and the story gets a bit hectic suddenly and switches back to its normal pace suddenly that it gets a bit confusing but I understand why. also the grammar isn't bad to be frank its much better than others, even story wise

v0.4a

fantastic art, and animated sex scenes. with very cute girls.
interesting story. really exceeded my expectations.
interesting worldbuilding. seems like a meshup of various mythos with a focus on olympian.
a pretty unique game, very much not following the norms for this site.

early on it feels a bit rushed in terms of pacing but it improves with time.
choices are mainly in the form of letting you avoid romancing certain characters.
usually pretty obvious but sometimes unclear which choice would make you miss out on content until you try out both routes.

As of V0.2
Honestly I'm surprised by the fair amount of content for V0.2 , I more or less expected a demo or prologue but nice to see quite a bit of content to play in the end . After reading the overview of this game , I decided to give it a go , have to say the story is fascinating revolving among some greek mythology . Female charecters looks good for an Honey Select game . However I'm not gonna it is without any negatives - there are some like even after choosing Main charecter name , Zycris name is found in the script and there are few minor typo errors as I'm not native English speaker , I don't bother much with it . Overall a good HS game with a interesting story to play , looking forward to next release .

I just finished my playthrough and it serves a solid introduction.
Plot is interesting, but at this point it is just hopeful conjecture, as there only exists a bare-bones story foundation. Could use a little bit details on the lore about the world and the races etc. Just to feel a layer of extra immersion.

Renders are good, considering HS.

The girls look beautiful, could use some variety, maybe just what I felt.

There are some spelling issues, here and there, not glaring tho.
Looking forward to more.