VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Suburban Demon Mother [Version 1] [Malum Oculus]

the only thing that prevents me from offering only a star is the design of the protagonist.
otherwise it has been a demo for almost 2 years.
and in his discord, twitter or patreon there is no news about this game so don't expect to play this soon

This is a great game for yall who likes futa, gorgeous woman and beutiful sexy renders. I'm surprised that not more people have reacted and writen about this game because it has great potential ....well if the Dev just could do more deving and get over the Demo stage LOL

[Review for the Demo}

So far I really like the concept. The characters look good, the renders look good for a proof of concept and I so far the writing seems pretty decent.

The male model being a 0 effort placeholder is a little annoying and ruins the flow, but I'll let it pass for being super early.

[Rev @ Demo]

Very short, all points below can be supplemented with "...what little there is of it."

Art's alright. Characters look fairly standard save for the title character who looks like somebody went a bit too far experimenting with sliders.

Writing is not great. Scenario is novel and fun enough, and voice is alright, but the narrative thus far is level 10 Tell Without Showing. Characterization is fair.

Nothing in the porn squicked me, but there's only 1 visual scene.

Gameplay thus far is a strictly linear tech demo of a VN.

TLDR: Average it is.

I can't give this VN more than an average rating as it's not that long.
The good news:
The models are all sexy
The VN has a nice feel to it, and I believe it will get better in future updates
It has a nice build up around the different characters that were involved
The bad:
I found a few double words in sentences that didn't need to be there
The place holder dude at the beginning was a scare. Thought it might set the tempo for what was to come
Overall:
Story flows well, the characters all mesh together, and it really seems like it might be something to keep an eye on. Keep up the good work.

Got a lot of potential, can't wait to see where the game/story goes.
Obviously as a demo not a lot of details for a lot of things, like the person who attacks you at the beginning, but got potential to go a long way.
Personally hoping her daughters new boyfriend is a major submissive and we get a mommy daiughter tag team going on him