Completed everything until chapter 4, needed a huge break from work and this was just the game to just do whatever.
Most of the lore is a mish-mash of other generic games, but it works here too, so some events are interesting, I do like how you don't mind killing characters that otherwise would survive impossible odds they find themselves in. The death of Klemes and the way he found the MC after he got impaled by poison and the way he again stayed back wasn't done well and I felt nothing for his death, if he even is alive. What was done with Red Winter and the rest of the tribe leaders, etc, was done beautifully, I really like Winter, Surst, and the rest of the characters, developing their dynamic was definitely a good choice, to be honest this game doesn't even feel anymore like a porn game and feels like a proper adventure game which also happens to have sex scenes.
It was extremely pleasurable to defeat all succubus, although there should have been more options for the MC to be more dominant when facing off succubus seeing as how Iron Will is the only thing you have and you can have some fun with them before breaking off their assault. The combat is serviceable, I don't consider turn base a good combat system anymore since it doesn't really offer true tactical or strategical options like real time strategy games, but I understand why it was done, it's serviceable.
I see that there are 3 different types of art, the first version of the succubus art is... serviceable, but too flat for my liking, it has too much of that modern anime aesthetics that I hate, the chapter 4 art of the succubus is much much better as it offer more shader to the skin, whoever that artist is he should keep improving his art and adding just a tad more shader to his art and it would be solid. The last type of art is also nice, but too cartoony, I see that it replaced the portrayal of the MC character when you go to the menu to that type of art, the same goes for fishing, hunting, etc, it's a nice art don't get me wrong but it still needs more improving.
Writing is... solid for what it is, there are too many mistakes that needs to be rectify and sentence structure also needs some work, tonality also needs to be added, and more characterization, I don't know if you need help with that.
The red riding hood succubus was delicious, let me tell you, you have a good knack for scenarios, I hope we meet her again and get away with doing mischievous things to her, while she gets more and more frustrated the more she fails at her plot.
Overall your game is good man, much better than what some others do and fail at, keep up the good work since you're actually creating something and not being stupid like us criticizing everything, but we do so for the love of it and wanting to see your work be even better. Bless.