- Aug 18, 2019
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I really really can't wait for this game to be finished, the concept and gameplay are incredibly fun!
If you overfill the beer or underfill the beer you get a minus to reputation. Try to click when the liquid is near the top but not overflowing.I don't know what I'm doing wrong, but I'm gaining a negative reputation, I can't raise my repot, could someone help me with this?
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Yeah, afaik this is just as far as content for the bar scenes goes
I agree with the corruption speed point, it does seem to go quite fast.Still seems like early days, but this has big potential. Thoughts:
Very impressive overall though. Best of luck - hope to contribute in future.
- Although I have some concerns about pacing, the mind control/corruption is very hot and extremely well done. Rides the right side of the line between 'amplifying desires that are already there' and reprogramming - she's into it, but not exactly sure how much is her own latent desires and how much is the training. My worry is that it's progressing quite quickly, so it could run out of road - if you're already at the
stage after the third corruption, I don't know how much further you can go before she has just fully given into it, and that dynamic goes away.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.- I like the writing, particularly the central relationship, and all of the characters feel very distinct. Alexa is a bitch, but I didn't have a problem with it, and it's necessary to advance the story. I'd like to see the characters expanded upon a bit in future though.
- Fun premise and setting. I feel like there would be a lot of scope for other games in this world with similar themes. If that tech IO keeps buying exists, then there will be other people/machines using it.
- Art is great, both the characters and environments. Neighbors seem a little bit placeholdery and lacking in detail compared to the MC, but no complaints. Looking forward to more H scenes!
- Gameplay is very basic. There's no strategy to the bartending at all - you quickly learn which actions to do in which order to maximize money everytime, which makes it very tedious. That's not a problem now, but it might be when the game is longer. There's also a lack of explanation about what they do (or that you need to click to stop the glasses filling up, although I worked that one out pretty quickly!).
It's sort of hard to learn but easy to master atm, where it should ideally be the other way around. These mechanics could do with an overhaul - maybe reducing the money but adding more ways to gain time, and some random reactions by chuds that force you to take different actions.- Money and corruption should ideally be viewable in the pause menu like your personal income is, without having to go to upgrades or wait for the end of a shift/day.
- There are some events that feel like they happen out of order, or aren't contextualized well enough. In the monologue she does about
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.- Some corruption events are prompted by upgrades, while some seem to happen without them. This made me worry that I might have missed content by upgrading too early. I'd be happy delaying an upgrade if it means the corruption is more drawn out, with more scenes of a similar 'corruption level' happening, but I feel like that should be signposted.
- After I'd sold the first wallet I collected, I could never seem to get another one in my inventory no matter how many I stole. Not sure what's going on there.
- Chud Light 10/10
Since you were only commenting to get notified thought I'd let you know at the top where it has page numbers to the right of that just choose watch and it will also let you know when there are posts or updates as well.Looking forward to the update, just commenting so I get notified