Dev, I think your game is nearing acceptable feature-complete status and is already an easy recommend, but you can make it a rare example of a non-bloated, well-paced, finished porn game and move on to your next project. I have a few (hopefully constructive) criticisms I think could use a little polish, but you're very close to greatness.
Firstly, it's weird to me that Catherine shoves a wine bottle up her pussy on full display to the chuds as one of the first openly lewd things she does, which happens before she's even comfortable showing her tits. Not sure if this is intended to happen this early or not, but that should definitely be a later event. The pool stuff applies here too of course. Feels like you go from zero to one hundred way too fast, which isn't even fair or accurate because there's a lot more gradual corruption to happen later, and you do a lot without getting into actual sexual acts. The corruption in this game is great but has that huge spike at the beginning then slows way down, which feels off.
The economy of the management gameplay is a bit too harsh IMO. You make basically nothing starting out but start with a huge nest egg to kinda keep you from running out, and I think it would be very easy to buy the wrong stuff and basically soft lock yourself. I haven't actually tried this, so I don't know if there are safeguards in the game, but you should probably earn more at the start. And the rent increase is too harsh even if it does warn you beforehand. Maybe make it 150-ish instead of 200. And using the same currency to buy progression items and also to reduce the economic burden on your main currency only serves to arbitrarily extend the game IMO. This is obviously subjective, and I'm not normally someone who argues for games to be easier, but I already see people complaining the game is too grindy. You then introduce a second character to do your bartending job right when you get your waitress job, but the bartending job still has lots of content by this point, and people would maybe feel more inclined to fully enjoy the rest of the content if the previous gameplay was somewhat easier and less grindy. I actually really like the progression of the bartending job overall. Also, I saw you say this was already planned, but the waitress job absolutely needs a skip as well.
I don't know how to say this without invalidating what has probably already been a lot of work, but I don't think the sewer section really even belongs in this game. It doesn't fit with the previous two sections, and you can already do enough with what is there at the bar to have a rich, self-contained game. Maybe if it was a very brief excursion to end the story, but the current amount of exploration is already unnecessary IMO. If you really must add more to the game, some sort of strip club minigame that turns into basically a brothel is what I would do, but I think you could do enough with the existing waitress job to not have to do this. I know that the Patreon money financially incentivizes bloating a game, so I really hope this doesn't turn into yet another example of that, and I would love to see your take on another idea instead.
