VN - Ren'Py - Summer in the City [S1 v1.01] [FlipDaShit]

For V0.1

Great start to the story. I was a bit afraid when the description started with "girl from the middle of nowhere" that it would be a story where things happen to the main character rather than giving her influence on what happens in the story.
Luckily this is not the case. Summer is a girl who knows what she wants and how she can get it. (Or at least she is unsure what she wants but she decides whether to try out new things or not.) She is an active participant in her own life.
Great writing overall I'd say; jokes mostly land rather than being annoying or downright unfunny; you get to parry your self-proclaimed nemesis, something quite sorely lacking in a lot of games and the characters feel lively.

The English writing is (near) native with few mistakes. I'd say the writing leans more towards sex over story. This might be a turn off for some but I do think there is enough of a story to get invested in. At least in a slice of life kind of way. I do not foresee (nor do I hope for) a murder mystery around the corner or something like that.

The art in the game is great. One of the better ones on the platform. Lighting looks great, models look cute, renders look well posed and framed. Do note that for non-sex scenes characters aren't posed in the scene but just hover in front of a background. This might be a dealbreaker for some.

Very interesting first release.
The models are quite pretty, as are the renderings in general.
The writing is very good. I'm not a native speaker, but it reads very well and the descriptions and paraphrases are very consistent. The playing time of v0.1 should also be positively highlighted as it already covers what some other developers would almost call a finished game.

There are currently 4 attributes to maintain, but I have not been able to determine any restrictions that a scene was not triggered because a threshold value was not reached. This is something to try out in the next playthrough.
There is currently no usable inventory, such as selectable clothing, toys (after all, you have already received one as a gift) or countable money. But it's only the first release. It remains to be seen where this journey will take us, and I will definitely have my bags packed to accompany Summer on her journey of sexual exploration.

Incredible game, great start, lots of potential.

The protagonist is beautiful, and I love lesbian content, so this is a big deal. It has a cool development.

Looking forward to new updates and more lesbian scenes.

I just had to rate this, even if it is only a 0.1 version.

1. So why five stars?
   I love the different and willing corruption of the MC. There are too many game with forced and completely laughable corruption, so this is a fresh wind.
2. The girls and woman in the game are normally proportioned. Some are taller other smaller and they have realistic sized tits. There are way to many games with horrible oversized utters on the females' and for me that is a complete turn down.
3. I already like the beginning fetishes.
4. The story writing is good enough that I read it and not simply skip from scene to scene
5. I really like the art and I think it's beautifully done.

So I wish you the best of luck and thank you for your work!