VN - Ren'Py - Summer Scent [v0.6.5a] [The Naughty Captain]

as of 0.2

I would like to give this a higher rating. As the starting point for a vn it's not really lacking in any department. Visuals are good, the two girls so far have a unique look. There is a story worth mentioning and already a conflict/mystery to solve.

Could just be my own weird quirks, but the plot kind of having an "original sin", and the fact that it's thrown in your face during every interaction just gets annoying. You are an asshole for not knowing your sister is a slutty bitch, when she's a bitch to you in every interaction, she's admitted to drinking and driving, you caught her stealing liquor from your parents, she goes out to bars to get drunk with guys who obviously are looking to bang.... Am I missing something here? She acts exactly as you would expect of the "rumours" but she's actually a kissless virgin? And the mc is a idiot and asshole for not believing otherwise?

I just really find that whole plot point doesn't make much sense... and having the mc get called an idiot/asshole/pervert or being ordered around in every scene just isn't my cup of tea. It starts to feel like getting nagged in real life.

So far not bad, not bad at all. At first thought it would be another generic crap written by a horny teenager, but it happend to be pretty good. Renders are not the best that I've seen, but pretty enough, models are nice, the story has a nice pace (i like to take it slow).
So far - 5 stars. We'll be watching this one. Hope the developer won't get bored with the project too fast.

I decide to try to go ahead and give this a try, and have to say it is a great start to the game.
*Both the graphics and the models was one of the best I've saw for beginning of a game.

*The story was written pretty good, and had me hook by the end of the first day.

*The only thing that stood out is maybe a button to review the stats, and how you are progressing.

I will be following this game from now on, I wish @The Naughty Captain great success in developing this game.

One of the best beginnings to a VN I've ever seen. The renders are top notch, The writing is sharp and fun. The dev managed to get to some real emotions very quickly without it feeling forced. I'm not usually big on VNs that involve incest, but this one it too good to ignore. I hope the Dev can continue this quality. If the next release is anywhere near as good as this one, I'm going to Patreon.

Love the start.

Only renders of 2 women so far, but both are beautifully done and in a realistic style often absent from games. Also, if my eyes doesn't deceive me, they are not stock models but rather unique.

Only a few mature scenes so far (dreams), but quality seems good to great.

Story-wise, I like the premise and it seems to have great potential, but then again I am a sucker for exactly this premise. The mystery of the 2 guys seems interesting, but I hope it is kept the b-plot, while focus is given to re-establishing the brother-sister relationship (with a healthy dose of her friend )

For a first release it's very promising, and a joy to play.

5/5