Unfortunately I have to follow the latest negative reviews and say that this project has become a little too clever for my tastes.
I'm fine with a slow burn story, the slow building of the characters and the lore of the world is but there is a limit to everything.
The author is a good dialogue writer and until now seemed to have kept the bar straight towards a specific story.
With this latest update tho, more characters continue to be added which causes a significant sense of dispersion and frustration.
Other than that, the main story didn't make any progress other than a few little clues scattered here and there. I Initially thought that the author already had the whole story in mind but I'm starting to think that he still doesn't have a precise idea (secret project inspired by Greek mythology? Great conspiracy of the rich and powerful?). The fact that the MC don't have a past is another clever ploy to be able to insert anything at a later time, a time that never arrives by the way.
Furthermore, another very important issue remains to be resolved: what genre will the project refer to? Full harem? Forced choices? And at that point, will there be the possibility of having more LI? And again, which kink will the project focus on?
None of these questions have been answered and this is starting to weigh on us because the project does not seem to have a precise identity despite the excellent technical and writing work.
That said, there is still time, and hopefully with the closing of the first chapter and the beginning of the new one, the project will begin to acquire a precise identity and give some answers.
If that happens, I'm ready to revise my vote.
I'm fine with a slow burn story, the slow building of the characters and the lore of the world is but there is a limit to everything.
The author is a good dialogue writer and until now seemed to have kept the bar straight towards a specific story.
With this latest update tho, more characters continue to be added which causes a significant sense of dispersion and frustration.
Other than that, the main story didn't make any progress other than a few little clues scattered here and there. I Initially thought that the author already had the whole story in mind but I'm starting to think that he still doesn't have a precise idea (secret project inspired by Greek mythology? Great conspiracy of the rich and powerful?). The fact that the MC don't have a past is another clever ploy to be able to insert anything at a later time, a time that never arrives by the way.
Furthermore, another very important issue remains to be resolved: what genre will the project refer to? Full harem? Forced choices? And at that point, will there be the possibility of having more LI? And again, which kink will the project focus on?
None of these questions have been answered and this is starting to weigh on us because the project does not seem to have a precise identity despite the excellent technical and writing work.
That said, there is still time, and hopefully with the closing of the first chapter and the beginning of the new one, the project will begin to acquire a precise identity and give some answers.
If that happens, I'm ready to revise my vote.