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ToxicCrobat

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anonymouscheddaredgrizzly said:
Yes Automaticsquare is correct that Kya is the Niece of Melody Dewitt.

As for writing, cut back on the Italian a bit, got it. Trying my best to represent the cultures (because if I remember correctly Maria was Proper Italian) without having things be walking stereotypes. But I'm trying to have actual characters behind my stories, because as much as we like STS, some characters in the story are just walking sterotypes or sex situations.

Hence why I like how I've written and clearly other people like as well, Roxxy and Anon's relationship. Because I imagine over the years Roxxy has grown more accustomed to Anon's Dorkiness, while Anon has matured a lot more. Basically they are growing more towards the center of their personalities, which is why they are going strong.
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I know that writing dialogue for characters that have already been established isn't always easy. I struggle with that when I write theories and my own ideas. I will give you serious props for your dialogue though. I suck at making dialogue feel genuine. I did plenty of theories and posted them on the Summertime Saga Discord before I joined the Dev team. But I also get your point. Many of the characters have become stereotypes; it's part of what makes the porn games fun. If everyone acted like a serious or realistic version of themselves it wouldn't be as fun to play through. I look forward to reading your future stuff.
 
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