This visual novel stands out from the rest I have played, mostly beacuase it's well writen. The story line is engaging , funny and well structured. However, I think that the discourse implicit in the narrative is quite demagogic.I like the overall concept where it tries to avoid some of the pornographic culture that sells sex as an act of violence. Supposedly, the protagonist attracts women in part because he reflects a set of high values such as being smart, politically correct, hard worker, very handy, and of course, the perfect gentlemen, all of these framed by a holy naivety. There's an implicit speech that criticizes sexual stalkers and predators and makes fun of them as losers. Nevertheless, I think all these good intentions of the autor of avoiding reproducing stereotypical male models of encoding narrative eroticism, falls apart quite forcefully, when he takes the decision to endow the character with a monster cock with wich all the girls in town die to fuck. Its not only an exaggerated phalocentric way of encoding the ideological background of the game, in a very clichéd male perspective, that affects the narrative strucutre that spins around his big penis. But also, ends in a very bizarre visual depiction of the characters. In my opinion, the main character looks deformed, aesthetically speaking. And the same goes for so many city girls that are painted with massive tits, and "problematic" personalities that can be fixed with the right dose of cock.
The character design and the systems of relationships between characters is very well built, in terms that it allows diverse types of conlficts that need to be solved to progress in story and eventually get laid. But all these obstacles in girls personalities, that are quite interesting at the early stages of the game, finally gives in as they find out the wonderful surprise that the protagonist is very well gifted. As if they were brainless subjects craving for big cock all the time. I have to mention, that I recognize an effort of the autor to introduce different types of facial futures, and there's a variety of body types, but the fixation with bizarre balloon like breasts is evident.
From my point of view, the attempt to generate an alternative narrative that moves away from traditional macho models, stays short. Futhermore, it stays in a quite conservative scheme and into traditionalist models of the social conceptions, especially masculine, that exist around sex, eroticism and pornography.
Also, if theres a trans girl in game, I'm very surprised that theres a lack of gay/lesbian content... theres is one gay character but seems that its only a narrative ornament. Not giving him a branch is wasting the possibilties of interactivity.
Finally, I just wanna say that theres a very nasty contradictory moral conception going on here. I understand that the patron community decided to override all the incest content of the game. I don't justify incest, not my kink, but also its not something that frightens me... But returning to the visual aspect of the game, says all the characters are grown ups adults, but all the students looks like oversexualized kids. There is no controversy there? Whats wrong with you ppl?
