- Jul 4, 2017
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Man, after playing this update without playing the initial 0.18 update, I can say I’m quite disappointed mostly with the storyline and character development. The amount of content Jenny has is quite satisfactory and should be the goal for a lot of the main characters, which is why I’m eventually hoping that either Debbie and Roxxy get their smaller updates soon again if it comes with more animations and scenes aside from pregnancy. But regarding the storyline, I didn’t really find it impressive or have a feeling like I’m glad I achieved all the scenes with Jenny. I know DC wanted to separate her story/development from Roxxy’s but when you have two characters that portray the bitchy archetype at the beginning of their story, you have to at least get some similarities between both stories if you’re trying to get a happy or well developed character at the conclusion of it.
That’s why mostly everyone enjoyed Roxxy’s update, as she went from a cold bully to the MC to someone who warmed up to him over time and developed a genuine attraction to him from his personality. The thing with Jenny is, she does warm up to the MC over time, but the problem is the bitchy façade she has is still there throughout the whole story, showing a notable lack of character development. Most of the attraction Jenny has for the MC comes mostly from his dick and makes it easy to keep her shallow for her storyline as she only needs him for camshows or money. I’m upset because there could’ve been potential at least with the stalker confrontation, such as if Mr. Bubbles was portrayed as more of a creep or asshole, with instead Jenny punching him, the MC could’ve punched him if a choice was presented with the dominate/submissive choices and Jenny in shock would’ve been surprised but appreciative of the MC and start to fall for him.
I feel the dominant/submissive routes were mostly useless in this update, as they have the same endgoal from what I’ve seen and read. In my opinion, if the route was planned better with more dynamic choices such as the punch example I presented, the dominate route should’ve led to a submissive Jenny falling for the MC through his dominant personality and becoming his actual girlfriend with none of the payments, while the submissive route leads to the opposite with a dominate Jenny and required payments for the “Girlfriend Experience”. Basically, dominate route leads to Jenny having a character archetype similar to Roxxy at the end of her route and submissive leads to basically what Jenny is now.
I understand DC wanted to keep the Roxxy and Jenny routes different, but everyone liked the Roxxy route, no one would’ve really complained if they kept the character development similar since that was the expectation a lot of fans had since the comparison keeps being brought up over and over again. At least with my suggestion, there would be choices that could separate it, something that’s not present in Roxxy’s route and would’ve helped differed both of their routes as DC wanted. There’s still a good chunk of the game left to go and things can added or changed, but I don’t really see why I would take Jenny to prom, I’m probably going to have to pay her $5000 to take her to prom if nothing really changes after this point. And I wouldn’t like to see all Jenny’s character development shoved in at the end of the game where potential dialogue changes could’ve been showed in the current content for her now.
That’s why mostly everyone enjoyed Roxxy’s update, as she went from a cold bully to the MC to someone who warmed up to him over time and developed a genuine attraction to him from his personality. The thing with Jenny is, she does warm up to the MC over time, but the problem is the bitchy façade she has is still there throughout the whole story, showing a notable lack of character development. Most of the attraction Jenny has for the MC comes mostly from his dick and makes it easy to keep her shallow for her storyline as she only needs him for camshows or money. I’m upset because there could’ve been potential at least with the stalker confrontation, such as if Mr. Bubbles was portrayed as more of a creep or asshole, with instead Jenny punching him, the MC could’ve punched him if a choice was presented with the dominate/submissive choices and Jenny in shock would’ve been surprised but appreciative of the MC and start to fall for him.
I feel the dominant/submissive routes were mostly useless in this update, as they have the same endgoal from what I’ve seen and read. In my opinion, if the route was planned better with more dynamic choices such as the punch example I presented, the dominate route should’ve led to a submissive Jenny falling for the MC through his dominant personality and becoming his actual girlfriend with none of the payments, while the submissive route leads to the opposite with a dominate Jenny and required payments for the “Girlfriend Experience”. Basically, dominate route leads to Jenny having a character archetype similar to Roxxy at the end of her route and submissive leads to basically what Jenny is now.
I understand DC wanted to keep the Roxxy and Jenny routes different, but everyone liked the Roxxy route, no one would’ve really complained if they kept the character development similar since that was the expectation a lot of fans had since the comparison keeps being brought up over and over again. At least with my suggestion, there would be choices that could separate it, something that’s not present in Roxxy’s route and would’ve helped differed both of their routes as DC wanted. There’s still a good chunk of the game left to go and things can added or changed, but I don’t really see why I would take Jenny to prom, I’m probably going to have to pay her $5000 to take her to prom if nothing really changes after this point. And I wouldn’t like to see all Jenny’s character development shoved in at the end of the game where potential dialogue changes could’ve been showed in the current content for her now.
