VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Sunshine Love [Ch. 3 v1.01i Extras] [MrDots Games]

[80K words of backstory and exposition]---[20K words of introduction to too many characters at once.]---[10K words of characters that will ever matter and gameplay]

Mr. Dots needs a goddamn editor, and a PJM.

I say this as long time patron.

Excellent start. The models are beautiful, and the story is great so far. I enjoy the build up to relationships that are done here. I haven't noticed any problems this far. I look forward to how this story plays out. Lots of interesting characters, and lots of potential paths to check out. Keep up the great work

I didn't expect that much going into this game, but honestly I was pleasantly suprised. The first version is quite long too and there's a good amount of content.

I enjoyed the fact that there are several type of girls in here, so not just the small ones. The sis is my absolute favourite.

Still, you can definitely see this is a Mrdots game. WIth barbie doll faces and facial expressions that don't seem to change much at all, like you're looking at robots. Perhaps this is the uncanny valley thing...

Will leave my review at 4/5 for now, but this could change in the future, for better or for worse. For now, I do recommend to give this game a try.

edit: came back and changed my review to 5/5. I dont think it's fair to be this critical about a 0.1 release. Will for sure come back to review later versions.

V0.0.1i

I was speechless, I mean wow! For something so new, this version already satisfies. The length of the game play on this version is longer than some games that came out 5 years ago. The story, amazing! Although this are adult games, I for one still look for substance, and this didn't disappoint. Renders and character designs are fresh, stunning, jaw dropping beautiful. I have absolutely zero thing to complain about this game right now. I do wish Melody and a few other characters drop-by.

Mr. Dots, I loved Melody and am sure am gonna love this till the end too. Thank you.

PROS
+1 Star - Some renders are nice but some are so bright where I can't see a single damn shadow.
+1 Star - Nice Framerate of Animation.
+1 Star - Outstand user interface.
+1 Star - Large Content.
+1 Star - Character Development was nicely down.
Overall: 5 Stars

Neutral:
• It has incest content but unfortunately, step shit. On the bright side, you won't get a negative star from me.
• I did not enjoy the story at all but I won't give you a negative star because I understand that you are not a professional writer.

CONS: This can be fixed.
-1 Star - I know you have a powerful PC but at least put some effort into the pose of your character, they look stiff and generic especially the Dad scene not to mention the expression is awful.
-1 Star - I'm so happy that the game has music but unfortunately, I end up getting disappointed because most of the music does not fit the scene at all in which forced me to turn off the music.
-1 Star - Fake choices, none of these choices affect the storyline I already tried negative points path and max positive points path, both end up in the same path. This is a kinetic novel.
Overall: -3 Stars
5 Stars - 3 Stars = 2 Stars

[based on one playthrough of the first release]

This looks to become yet another hit for MrDots. The game is solid for a first release. It has a lot of content already, not too much naughtiness yet, but we need to have anticipation for the next year or so, so we need to take it slow.

Pros:
-Really good renders, most girls are gorgeous and MC is well done too. I especially love the skins.
-Sex content is well made, pretty realistic (no insane DMD dick, thank you)
-Great locations and backgrounds
-Engaging story with enough depth to draw you in
-Great tie-ins with other games and popular culture

Cons:
- Way too many big boobs (and butts) for my taste (thank god for our dearest cousin )
-Ashley looks way too young to be a mom of a daughter this age
-Character scaling, this was an issue in Melody, and is not good here either, look at the MC sitting on the bed for example.

gotta give credit where credit is due

how you make your females so smooth skinned and sexy as hell ... so great renders ...
Story is really good , i went thru this whole version1 and thought wow , just wow ..
don't quite understand why you used characters from your other games , but hey it all worked out in the story anyways so nice job on that .
but you putting my arch enemy in this game also ... grrrr ... i want Lucas DEAD !!! i guess that shows how good you make games to get to people like that .. urrgghhh time to make the doughnuts ... or in this case find them still makes me wonder why some Dev.'s do that .. but hey what the hell do i know ... it works ...
would i recommend this game .. hmmmm kinda dumb question ... i mean i'm playing it ... so of course i will
i hate myself for being retired and not being able to help fund some of you Dev.'s in your great games .. won't stop me from playing them tho and giving my opinion to you ... well that is about all i got to say other than i've rated this game 5 stars ,, this game like all i've played of yours is awesome

ok typos sure , but hey its version 1 i know they will get fixed ....and a few renders also


ok beef time .. i don't like this was put out in just 64 bit ... i run 32 ..... and it won't run for me anymore .... i used to love this game .... lowered to 1 star ....

thank you for allowing us 32 bit players to play again ...... your great

Dreadful.
Bad story with not much sense, with a lot of "why on earth would they do that?" Blank and unlikeable MC and most of other characters as well.
Forced sexual content. Big, big minus.
Arts are not great either. Faces are somehow...weird and people looks like they're made of plastic. It is unpleasant.
Deleted and ignored.

This is a very strong 0.0.1 entry, which deserves our support (I am a Patreon supporter and you should be, too) -- but it has certain imperfections that are worth noting.

1. The artwork, particularly the facial features, does not vary enough between characters. To some extent this makes sense when the characters are close family members -- but it's enough to break immersion, which is a problem. As others have noted, these features are also shared with characters in the Dev's earlier (very good) games, as well.
2. There is not enough erotic tension. The Dev is good at setting up narrative conflicts -- he does in his earlier games, too -- but these need to be better melded with the sexual content. My hope is that he will get there eventually: the mother-daughter antagonism could be helpful to that end.
3. The sex scenes have a 'mechanical' aspect. The animations and other depictions of sex are good, but they don't feel particularly visceral or passionate (another problem with the Dev's earlier games).
4. The dialogue could be pared down. I like the Dev's writing and the story. But there's too much dialogue. If you lost half the text, the overall experience would improve for the player/reader.

You should play this game and support the hard-working and thoughtful team behind hit. There are many, many things to like about _Sunshine Love_: for example, they know how to create a 'slow burn' story that has sex scenes early in the game. It involves simple narrative devices, but so many others get this badly wrong (as in _A Wife and Mother_, which otherwise has many strengths).

My hope is that the Dev treats these notes as constructive criticism, rather than an indication that I think this is a bad game. That's not true: it's a good piece of work that could be superb wtih some marginal tweaks.

Great game. A lot of content. I'm sure it's gonna be a hit of 2020.

+ Interesting story. Well-made, realistic characters with depth (kind of - at least in comparison to other games)

- There's a few 'logic errors' in the prologue.

- It's a shame MC is a boring asshole, just like in previous games (your typical hentai game style male hero)... I mean he is not that bad, I can tolerate him, but in the end, his [Mr Dots] every game protagonist have the same problem as Fallout 4 protagonist - too much of a 'forced personality'. I simply don't agree with MC's point of view - but at least he is not a teenage pervert (thank you Lord!)

- Take a look at all three [Mr Dots] games and thier female cast. Take a look at their faces and breasts. What do you see? Yes! All female models look very alike (like they were part of the same family or something). It's like playing same game all over again.

greatest quality I've ever seen so far.
Just Ver0.1 is showing huge potential.
Renders 5/5 greatest ever
Anmiation 5/5 superlative quality
Story 4/5 just beginning part , so cannot judge it but good start
Characters 5/5 Each character's so attractive.

Here my first impressions :

First I want to say that I played previous MrDots game and :
- I liked Melody
- I didn't really like DMD which I found very boring

Hopefully here, it is closer to Melody than it is to DMD, meaning an interesting and believable piece of life story. It is maybe, maybe, maybe even more interesting than Melody imo.
The graphisms and renders have improved from his previous game.
The animations have stepped up
I like the girls much more than the DMD ones. And the girls seems to be kind of tricky, their personality are far from perfect dream girl, they are realistic and complicated.

To sum up a very good start with a solid first release, we can recognize the MrDots style but with some improvements, and the story ( at least to me) makes much more sense than the DMD one.

It’s a great game by an experienced dev.

Pros:

• Renders are top of the line (as good as it gets).
• Animation is excellent
• Excellent writing.
• The girls are all stunning.
• Plenty of romantic options, enough to suit any taste.
• Quite a bit of lewd content including a couple of sex scenes, even though it’s only a first release.
• The addition of a replay gallery

Cons:

• None whatsoever

As far as first releases go, it doesn’t get any better than this in terms of amount of content, quality, lewdness and potential.

Some people have complained that the models look similar to his other games, which I agree. However, I don’t see that as a problem at all, the girls in those games are stunning. Obviously, the dev has a particular style and personally I like it.

I really look forward to seeing how this game evolves, although I wonder how this game will proceed pace wise. Keep up the good work dev

v0.0.1i
Since this is just the beginning, I don't have enough info to write a proper review but from what i could gather:

After playing the game for a a little while, it got worse, the MC still a insufferable spineless bitch

- Bad Setup: A guy trying to have 'fun' and make up for his time lost studding (in his own words), while also putting his relationship an a "break"? not appealing, really... Also, they really had to lost contact for so long? Now he is in a relationship kinda, and the sister is also dating kinda, pretty unfavorable scenario for building a relationship, of course everything is gonna work out well for the MC at the end (still MrDots after all), but being a Knight in Shining Armor (in this case also reads Mr. Steal Yo Girl) while still supposedly having other girl (without any choice in that matter) is REALLY not my thing.
- Incest: Pretty useless, the sister could easy be replaced by a "generic" childhood friend, cousin fits the same category, "being related" here is just an adicional flavor, not the main plate... And there just ONE half-sister? why a half sister? no mother? incest is pretty "useless" in this scenario.
- Weak Personalities: The characters are just... TOO BASIC, nice, but basic... I know its pretty unfair to judge by just 1 chapter but that was the impression I've had, probably hopefully some deep will be added in the future).
- Weak Personality (MC): Again, this could change... but the MC will have to grow some balls urgently, for example, he isn't slightly pissed at Ashley for prohibited the contact with the sister... He is so bland and basic that we can classify as Ph 14.

Overhaul: Disappointed
But I liked, I know, kind of bipolar (like the some relationships in the game ), the game have a lot of room to grown, this is just MY initial opinion, and that's something I'm probably gonna change a couple of updates later.

Easily 5 stars. Why?
First of all this is the most content I have seen in a first update of any game on this site. You are already introduced to quite a few female potential LI’s and there is someone for everyone in the game.
Some people in the reviews already, seem to expect everything to be roses and rainbows and for there to be no low and high points of the story. There is obviously a reason the MC sister acts the way she does sometimes and if you actually READ the dialogue you will understand fully why she seems to have mood swings.

The animations and renders have improved drastically compared to MrDots other two games so that’s encouraging.

So I have to respectfully disagree with some others and would fully recommend this game in its current state.

After 0.03:

The game is making some odd choices. The level of pseudo-choices are off the walls. The choices in this game are: do you want plus points with someone, or negative? There's no incentive to doing things another way. There's no way yet to leave a dead end relationship with the most boring love interest I could imagine.

For such a well-regarded dev, this game just oozes laziness in all but the renders. Even the animations are quite lackluster. I've played so many games with just far more heart and effort poured into them with far less support. I'm not seeing any "going above and beyond" in Sunshine Love and it just kind of feels uninspired. Maybe one day I'll feel differently but this game is puzzling to me and not in a good way.

Best I could give is 2/5.
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It's a decent start. The first version had a lot more content than expected but a lot of it was droll dialogue that didn't really serve a purpose.

The people close to the MC seem to have strange personalities. The gf seems like she is over the MC but at times she is acting like he is the love of her life. Same situation with the sis. They both act bipolar which gets tiresome quickly. I really dislike when games just have LI's that annoy me and the gf and sis certainly do just that. The MC also seems pretty passive and doesn't really stand up for himself. Seems like the sis will constantly be screwing him over and he will simply take it.

Vicky, the twins, and the cousin seem like they will be interesting and I would like to see more of them.

The version ends on a pretty cheap cliffhanger thrown in there just to add drama for no reason as well.

All in all, this game has potential but I can't help but feel disappointed. I expected more and it has me feeling cautious towards the future of this game. I would recommend waiting for more content before trying it.

EDIT: At the time of this rewiew (Apr 5, 2020) i was NOT part of the dev team. As for today, i would not review any of our own games because of rules of F95)

First of all - Many people will say "Of course Hyperserver has to do a 5-star rating", but i try to explain exactly why i did.

For a first release, the amount of content is HUGE. The setup of the story is well done and leaves a lot of possibilities for further twists and unexpected turn-arounds.
The girls are well done, and there is at least one girl for every taste.
The Menu looks well developed.
The animations are smooth and imho also approved compared to previous games of MrDots. The music matches the scene perfect, and you can spent a lot of time just watching the details of some scenes (like for example the view down the hill over the city). The story so far sounds plausible at all.
Even it's a first release, MrDots managed perfectly to add nude scenes, even there are no relations built so far (except MC girlfriend of course).
The balance between character introduction, scene setup and story progress is also fine.
Overall a typical "MrDots-game" so far.
Like to see how this will continue, and can't await the next update

EDIT:
Why did i give 5 stars, even there are some Typos and at least one confirmed bug? Just because the devs are aware and some are already fixed. Also because compared to other games out there which have a rating close to 5 stars, this one feels even better and deserves at least the same amount

Looking good! Nice quality models and animations. Enjoyed the build up for the characters and can see some interesting paths this could develop into. Keen to watch this one and see how it goes. As an ex-sailor, some of the intro dialogue was a bit awkward to go through though