Revised as of V0.81
This is still not quite what it promises to be. But it isn't bad either. This game is actually a fairly normal life simulator with college undertones along with the added ability to waste entire days being forced to "train your powers" or receive a bad end. This is particularly troublesome now that it is entirely influenced by the invisible had of the creator. As you can't gain power too quickly, the game literally removes the option. However, the story is paced well enough to do without branching lines,. God forbid you beat the final boss in his introductory fight, how anticlimactic. (On that same note tho... NewGame+ that starts you at full power or accelerating training would be wild.) You use your powers much more frequently now, and they are implemented well, where implemented. The power level system as stated above is just a tool to keep the reader on the tracks of the railroad. "Again as previously stated there are no branching storylines, only dead ends. With two possible , or rather optional exceptions. (futa content and ntr path). Do or do not, nothing matters, unless you hit a dead end you just get to choose your flavor text." It still remains true to its visual novel heritage. Not to mention training your powers doesn't always boost your power level (still true-real gains are got through weird anime esc events). Also not to mention that there are moments where your powers would be insanely useful and your character acts like they don't have any for plot contrivance (still true- I get story comes first and there is only so much time for so many scenes... but...idk. Some things still just feel kinda basic. It just kinda feels like this game is being written by a regular person with no Superhuman abilities.). "Superhumans are not the focus of this game," porn is! As it should be, FINALLY! One of my biggest concerns was addressed, well played. And The Superhuman part has really taken off and is in a pretty rocken spot rn. It is still a little bloated with words at times and non-sexual walking and talking but not nearly as bad as it was, the extra content really helped (Also, previous experience with the game #Skip), but has completely earned a pass cus they are pretty good. Actually, I really feel like the writer has come into their own and are churning out real good shit right now. But, this game is no longer light on sexual content early and is a lot less heavy handed with exposition. "Its corruption time. This is a concept near and dear to my heart, so I will be blunt af. It is executed so poorly that I'm sure people have played and not even noticed it. And there is no implementation of the corruption system, at all. It probably won't matter until the end of the game and since their is no way to manually change your corruption, (meditation, prayer, potions, drugs, etc.) its just going to serve ass a vague threat for the end scenes and restrict players from playing the way they want to, "adding" to replayablility factor. "Good" run or "Bad" run?! Even though you will go through 99% of the same content but with slightly more angsty text. Spoiler!: There isn't even angsty text, let alone darker choices. AKA Garbage Gaming." I have been told with no uncertainty that this will absolutely remain a feature and is functioning as intended. "But straight up skipping through the game my 2nd time through it took me like 20 minutes to get to any sort of meaningful content adult or otherwise." (Fixed? Idk, I seriously skim all the dialogue until I can't figure out what's going on and have to back track until I can't. I'm really here for 1 thing.) And the fact you have to press buttons in scenes shouldn't make this a "game". This is a visual novel (Still true). It does the bare minimum to be considered an interactive novel, which is essentially having random death scenes that take you back to the title, even though it railroads the shit out of you. There are several 1st choices in game that feel like they'll have consequences, but they don't go anywhere.
"There are still a few red flags. The game introduces Jake (We'll get to him...), 1st red flag. It already had 5 antagonists, we really needed another and the fact the MC couldn't give 2 fucks about him and our superpowers are again completely worthless.)(Still true- but, now with hand waving!) then Mai, then Demi and the fan club. Basically this game is going to turn into nothing but filler and college drama. The table is already set, you have mob, rich people, Ella and the struggle to conceal your identity. Boom. That's it, that's all you need, there is enough their for a compelling 5 star game." The creator stopped adding for the most part and my god. The story is in a really great place now. Obviously other monsters would pop up (One more-ish, like if you think about it, is it really?), like the party scene. How much backstory did we get on the monster at the party. Don't care, didn't need it. It was a solid set piece. You established why he turned and established gripping stakes. Competence. Side plots, Emily/Gym/Shadow, Stripper detective (questions about Ella), horny detective (seems like a tie in to the rich people, but because she's her own character with her own motivations she's here.), Public relations( talk show), "therapy (which why?! It literally takes over the late game completely and fails to flesh anything out.)" (Still True- not sure if its my play style or what, but the section seems to have gotten much shorter.), fight club (shit! I wasn't supposed to talk about that.), The rich jock kid, cheerleading practice, the angry teacher, will Daryl ever get laid, the fan club, the mutating masseuse, etc. This game is a perfectly great, good game.
"its execution is too flawed and its quickly losing its identity. It shows fits of passion and then adds filler that you have to dredge through for 20 minutes. Even on my first play through I was skipping text. A few hours of content AND the MC is at 2 corruption AND still has his Vcard... really? That should really be the players choice at that point. HES IN COLLEGE!!!" Full 180. This train is back on track and better then ever, although it ends in a weird spot.
"Soft horror with ntr/sexual molestation and the MC is super powered and incapable of rape or manipulation. Its very clear you want the MC to be a hero. Illusions of choice," Still very much the case. Look, the game isn't called Superheros... ok?) Visual Novel. If you like VN's then give it a go. As far as VN's go its about as good as it gets. Although, I did just notice the developer likes a different visual novel series that is known for terrible endings... so we'll see. But hey. You probably would like that one too. Everything in this game is begging me to give it 5 stars.... Except 1 very important thing that literally implodes the ENTIRE game for me. No spoilers. But I think you made a tremendous mistake with Jake. I have no immersion left, you've stripped it from me, I can never be part of your world as long as he's in it. It all feels... wrong. Like, all of it. And then it just keeps getting weirder and more wrong. There is no logic, character consistency or course correction. Its just a nose dive into a spiral. Oh, sure, there is a ton of hand wringing and pussy footing. But I guess story has to story. And for the love of god, what can't he fucking do? In our dm's I looked you right in the face and spelled out exactly how this game is going to end with the bread crust analogy didn't I... Oh god, Eh, it could just be me. Otherwise, Wow. Best VN on the market?
,I hope to see more of that in the future.
