Edit: Re-reading my reply, I sound a bit curt and annoyed. That wasn't my intention. Your feedback is welcome.
Belle Thank you for reading my impressions of your game. (yes, you did sound upset, so thanks for noticing, I sometimes piss people off unintentionally and don't realize I've done it. No problemo)
" you're wrong about where the story is heading and what the setup is trying to do" I'm
so glad to hear this. However, it was my honest impression upon my first play through so I reported it that way. It is honestly what the story feels like to me at this point.
Your suggestion to not think of Michael as the only MC goes over my head as the way the story starts, he is most definitely foremost in my mind as
the MC. While Anna is introduced as a powerful executive type character, the way she was turned on by her photo shoot left me with serious concerns about her character. I was under the impression she would be a supporting character at best. (it seems to me that there is something mysterious or seriously wrong/strange here in her)
However, knowing that Michael will not be confined to Stalwart as we proceed takes a serious concern of mine off the table...he sure seems to be at this point. So, maybe there
is more to this story?
About the Micro-transactions suggestion I made, again it came from my read of the game instructions and I was confused about it as that is what it seemed to suggest, which is why I mentioned it. I'm glad that's cleared up, I intended no insult. It goes to show that sometimes the written word comes across differently than we expect.
I see I failed to mention that I sincerely appreciate the VN button as I didn't want to play the strange card game. Thank you, thank you, thank you!
I was surprised that I'd already unexpectedly finished the story after Anna's photo shoot. When the game is updated, I will be using it to check and see if there is any story development other than just the instructions Anna gave Michael. Y'see, knowing the success of his main purpose is mostly influenced/controlled by how well you play the card game took a lot out of it for me. I look for the MC's actions/decisions to be the main variable in that development, rather than my card skills...which are unrelated to the story. Does that make sense?
Ok so I'd just like to close by once again saying how much I admire your beautiful opening production and cinematic development of Ren'py in creating Supermodel. You've done a magnificent job, far above the typical game found on F95. I know you put a lot of sweat and time into it. And knowing how well you wrote & produced 'the Princess' I probably shouldn't worry that there is a lot of good things to come. Cheers.