Ren'Py - Survival Guide [Day 10] [RazzyBerry]

  1. 3.00 star(s)

    swills13

    There's not much content yet, but this game has potential.

    So far, this is a pretty straight-forward zombie story. There's only about 15 minutes of gameplay, so it's too early to really judge the story one way or another at this point. I'd say it's fairly engaging already, though.

    The characters are quite cartoonish, though they are attractive enough. The renders are pretty good all around. There are only 2 very small possible lewd scenes at this point (1 is a dream scene), and the animations, while smooth, are very minimal. I am slightly confused why the MC's daughter is effectively only wearing underwear the entire time, including while going out and fighting zombies during an apocalypse, but I suppose that's a relatively small gripe.

    The mechanics of the game are somewhat puzzling to me, as there are a few point-and-click and semi-free-roam scenes that offer nothing to the game, because the only options you have are to do exactly what the game wants you to do. There are no choices to do anything but the exact task you are instructed to (i.e. you cannot go to any other locations, look at or interact with any other people/objects). Maybe the dev is just getting the hang of these free-roam interactions, and future scenes will be more complex or have more optional content. Otherwise, the game deviating from straight VN at this point has no apparent purpose.

    When it comes to dialogue, there are a number of choices, but they all seem pretty meaningless. You are often given the choice during a conversation with another character to pick one of two dialogue options, which are basically identical except for small differences in wording. It's unclear why you are even given a choice, as the conversation goes the same no matter what you choose.

    Still, this is a very early release, so all of these things can be improved upon. The only reason I am not giving a 4-star rating is because of the writing. I know that effective and natural writing is a difficult skill to master, but the writing in this game is simply not very good. Although the English is fine (dev seems to be a native English speaker), there are a handful of typos and a number of grammatical errors. A lot of the dialogues are awkward and unnatural. Also, the dev constantly commits one of my biggest pet peeves: having characters constantly saying "haha" during/after many of their conversations, when nothing that has been said is a joke or humorous in any way. I find it to be not only completely unnecessary, but incredibly awkward and cringe-inducing.

    Overall, I appreciate the unique art style, and what little story there is so far is interesting. With some polishing, this could become a very enjoyable game.
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    King22422

    Nice game. Render very good quality. The story is well told and understandable. RazzyBerry, you're making a nice game and don't let it bother you too much. I hope we see more soon. Please don't change the game script too often because someone has something to complain about.
  3. 4.00 star(s)

    justapervert

    By the time I am typing this it is currently the Day 1 version of this game and it is unlikely that I will change my mind. Go all the way down to the Conclusion if you want a short summary of this surprisingly good game.

    Gameplay: The game is a linear progression story base Ren'py style survival genre. Every action has its consequences but not only is this not a problem with the help of back tracking and quick saving, the current consequences are too meagre to take into consideration. (Despite in its infancy though I know this will change for the best), The UI is elementary yet simplistic and navigating despite not having much presence currently is superbly done. Lastly the relationship progression system is only a bar without any clear indication of level or goal zones is kind of of mundane but can easily be improved on in the future so it really isn't that worrisome. Not much is meant to be said except the game file size is extremely large for a first release which is slightly worrying for the future. Enough said it is good for what is presented and with its versatile game mechanics that can be implemented at any notice brings freshness to this games future. (5/5)

    Story: Not much is said besides a basic zombie survival generic genre. Deux ex Machina is cliché but presenting new characters using this technique can be forgiving but for the second time I lost slight faith on what could occur when introducing to new exciting characters. The pacing is calm and collective, Not too slow for it to be easily forgotten which cases back logging to understand what the characters said, but not to quick jumping straight to the point and moving to another scenery in a short span of time. Understanding a zombie genre type survival is easy but having back stories prior to the event takes a bit of elbow grease considering you have to integrate it to the current times which is done very well by the introduction of the police girl. Sadly not much can be said but all is well done for what little is provided. (5/5)

    Scenes: Lastly the scenes of smut is currently very limited but well executed. Despite the character models looking more like barbie dolls than CGI closely human individuals is slightly off putting with the change, It isn't really off putting as I thought which humbled me drastically. Honestly can not wait for the next release to see what other smut scenes the developer will unleash to this crocked world. (4/5)

    Conclusion; Read this if you cannot be arsed reading the whole ass essay I've typed. The game file size can be a bit menacing for what little is given but the gameplay is simplistic the story is good and the scenes of smut are not off putting. (4/5)

    P.S by the time I am typing this I contracted Omni-covid or some shit so I can't work but wank all day to games like this. I wish for good health for the gamers and developer for this fresh new game and I cannot wait to stay tune to what other ideas the developer will implement.-Justapervert