As one can expect from Mortze, this is a commendable effort. But, for me, creating something that is so fitting within SW lore, really makes for a particularly fun time. I really feel like I just experienced an episode of a new SW series and it certainly left me wanting for more.
I will say that it had one element that was a shame because it marred an otherwise exceptional game. The English was a little rough and unnatural. And I don't just mean when non-native Basic speakers were talking in flawed English, but also those established to be native Basic speakers. It really needed another round of editing from a native English speaker to polish the result despite showing two English editors in the credits.
One other very subjective complaint was that the extremely mottled/marbled skin tone on Jiljoo was very off-putting to me. It made her appear rather corpse-like.
Aside from these complaints, I'm really excited about this series and am impatiently anticipating more! Thanks so much Mortze!
I will say that it had one element that was a shame because it marred an otherwise exceptional game. The English was a little rough and unnatural. And I don't just mean when non-native Basic speakers were talking in flawed English, but also those established to be native Basic speakers. It really needed another round of editing from a native English speaker to polish the result despite showing two English editors in the credits.
One other very subjective complaint was that the extremely mottled/marbled skin tone on Jiljoo was very off-putting to me. It made her appear rather corpse-like.
Aside from these complaints, I'm really excited about this series and am impatiently anticipating more! Thanks so much Mortze!