Unity - Completed - Swimmer Admiration [Final] [PUSH! Publication]

  1. 2.00 star(s)

    Icrz

    Played on version Final

    Recommendation Level: Eh? Sure.

    + Good Art
    + Polished

    - Very small discrepancy between routes

    Comment: If you're looking for a game with these tags in mind go ahead and play, however that's the only thing you will get. There was some missed opportunities to get some variations in the routes but you're sort of picking different options only to get the same payback. If you're going for a session kind of game you'd at least try to differentiate them a little bit more when the writing is very superficial.
  2. 1.00 star(s)

    Angelray

    The only good point? the art.

    Music, "gameplay", choices, story is bad.

    The worst being the fact that the FMC falls in the blackmail without logic. It is not build up, it's pure insanity. She evens speaks (before falling in it) that she wouldn't fall for it and go to police and kick the guy if he tries anything.
    3 seconds later? she is fucked and enjoys it.

    That's not a Female protagonist. That's bad writing.
  3. 4.00 star(s)

    teddidiah

    It's a relatively short blackmail porn VN. Nothing to special, but it does what it sets out to do just fine and doesn't rely on to many conceits. It's fine. The worst I could say about it is that the sex scene writing is a little detached and brief, which is odd given the non-sexual narrative isn't.
  4. 3.00 star(s)

    Victor069

    I gave it a try and contrary to the other 2 reviews finished it in a good ending with the girls being together, the blackmailers in prison and the MC winning a gold medal in swimming.
    The game is far from a masterpiece and obviously inspired by student hentai movies, where pure girls turn into bimbos. But it is not that bad or railroad into cumdumb as the reviews before had said. But if you choose everytime the obvious way to turn into a sextoy you probably will.
  5. 1.00 star(s)

    Avaron1974

    The art is great ..... that's my star. It's the only thing I can give it a star for.

    The story is shit, the characters are shit and the "gameplay" (term used very loosely) is shit.

    As a women who happens to enjoy sex very much it doesn't bother me when games involving female MC are basically fuck'a'thons. Obviously I prefer a story with actual choices.

    You have no agency as a player. You are basically pushed down a route controlling quite possibly the dumbest bint ever created in a porn game who has a crush on the second dumbest bint ever created in a porn game.

    And that is all this is, a porn game. You are pushed from one scene to the next in a sex gallery that shows the girls turn from hopeful athletes to drooling cum dumps.

    That is the only outcome, there are no alternatives, you will end up as a cock sleeve.

    This is basi8cally a porn gallery with a few words loosely stringing it all together.

    I want the time back I wasted on this shit.
  6. 2.00 star(s)

    kelmentina

    Version: 1.0 (final release)

    Before anyone thinks that I'm actually recommending you play this game, let me make this very clear: the 2 stars I have given it are for: count 'em, 2 things:
    -amazingly well drawn CGs.
    -different paths to follow*, all with actual endings (this has a massive "but[t]", and we'll get to that in a bit.)

    *only if you want to have no actual choices in the fate of your protagonist. You cannot avoid becoming a cock hungry bitch in this game. At the very start, somehow, our MC sees her fucking role model (Zoe) getting blackmailed and essentially raped, and her reaction is to touch herself.

    You, the player, have no agency in this. If you have taken this path, the MC will do these actions. Fine, let's say that's just due to the "shock". The second time around, the MC SAYS that she can't just "let this go on" when you choose to follow them and spy on said blackmail/rape again. Now, what would any reasonable person do:
    -privately contact zoe and ask if you can help somehow.
    -take pictures, blur out zoe's body and face, report it to the police or the school.
    -do nothing and touch yourself again.

    Spoiler, she does nothing and plays with herself. Sure, it's fun to see them (the MC and Zoe,) get fucked in a variety of different ways, but if you have no actual say in anything important other than choosing which person you want to end up getting fucked by, the "game" isn't a game anymore. It's a set path of CG galleries for you to explore.

    Someone out there might find this to be to their tastes, but personally, I find this whole game to have been a waste of my time. It's great if you wanna get off I suppose, but it's not a good porn game in any standing.

    Quick list of cons to wrap this off, since I did give a small list of the stuff I kinda liked:
    -there is ZERO attempts to have even slightly realistic writing.
    -as I said, no actual player agency is involved.
    -the portrayal of women being stupid, dumb airheads will make any sane person be uncomfortable. People objectify your character heavily, and every path leads you to become a massive slut , like it was never even considered that SWIMMERS WHO SWIM AT NATIONAL/INTERNATIONAL LEVELS had any way out of being treated like shit due to their "futures", or become anything other than cum-dumpsters. Yeah, I get it's a porn game, but god, there's limits to how much I can stretch my imagination, even for them. No woman seems to have an ounce of self respect here.
    -small inconsistencies that pissed me off as a swimmer (feel free to skip this);
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    Overall, this game ticked me off massively due to how badly it was written, with even the "good" route having the stuff I mentioned about the MC doing nothing for quite a while. where every woman is getting screwed, or wants to get screwed by creepy guys or fat coaches blackmailing them.

    However, I can see the appeal this may have to players who just want to jack off to some hot anime women, so I'm still giving it a 2 against all my instincts screaming to make it a 1.