RPGM - Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.501] [Fujino]

Excellent so far, I only really have two elements which are negative so far so I'll start with those:

The content so far is present, but it is at roughly the first third of Asuna's corruption. So the first blowjob has been given but it is not common yet, groping has occurred and there are good scenes, but it is not close to being finished.

Secondly, the translation is not done by a pro and this is mostly apparent in some text boxes not being translated as well as some bits and pieces being translated weirdly. To be fair, roughly 85% is properly translated into english and most of the translated text is understandable, but if you can't stand fan translations or some errors/untranslated text don't play it. Perhaps bookmark it if in the future it is fully translated. On the other hand, this is not MTL, so the English understands what it is trying to say.

Moving on from that, the core of the story is that Kirito and Asuna are dating and are trying out a new online VR game wherein they meet a classmate, who has the hots for Asuna and resorts to a combination of emotional manipulation and some in-game events to seduce her. The build up to the NTR is very well done and even the non-sex scenes add to the tension. When groping occurs it feels important, as enough build-up has happened before.

Beyond the main story line are varying side stories: one concering suguha, and a great deal with OC characters. This world is corrupt, and both fat bastards and playboys are very interested in convincing girls to cheat. This means that there are a lot of hidden stimulating scenes to discover which greatly adds to the entertainment value while the main ntr takes its time.

The engine allows for a great deal of scenes and the dev knows how to create good scenes with it. If you don't like how the models look in the pictures here don't download, if you do or are on the fence, it's done well and animated.

The engine feels fine, the combat feels a bit excessive to the world but it does add to the playing experience as it's a game for the characters as well. During the play-through I experienced one crash, but it ran smoothly otherwise.

Great game and it will be one of the best if the developer finishes it and if the current translator decides to finish it as well.

First thanks for the game , finally a SAO ntr game

great game tbh there is a lot of potential in it , i'm not a big fan of RPG combat but with the asuna display it's great
I know it's hard to write a decent ntr story but you did good with this one it's making sence so far
the options are intresting and there are a variety of them like asuna statue window and that menu and kirito's room is a great idea

overall it's a 5 star from me , i do hope that the game will be a lot bigger with time .

+ Lively Dialogues, Live Characters.
- Asuna online doesn't look like herself.
--? The author makes Asuna into a primitive whore, like in 99 out of 100 games.
It would be much more interesting if she did THIS by overpowering herself, by resorting to deception, with disgust.
Here again, a schoolboy with a horse dick.
How vulgar and monotonous.

Very good game. It has semi-mystery elements which is what I really appreciate in ntr games. The world is small so it is not cumbersome, being just and necessary for a story made in rpgm. The corruption does not start with a typical violation, rather it is based on Asuna's retribution and feeling of wanting to do something for the events, which then escalates more and more. A fluid, beautiful animation. It also has battle mechanics equal to that of a once very good game, which will never be finished .

The bad, there is no skip button apparently.

if you stop to think about it, SAO is a story that is very suggestive of netorare and rape, I could even consider this game canonical because of how problematic the narrative of this work is. Other than that, the game is already one of the best Netorare I've played, lots of scenes, mostly sneaky sex which is in my opinion the best sex in Netorare. Finally, I think the developer has to decrease the boring and long battles and increase the number of Asuna's interactions with corruption.

THIS GAME IS AMAZING!!! I played plenty of RPGM games before none of them has this amount of art assets and sex scenarios. The animated art that plays during are great. Not only has the developer made a good main NTR plotline, he also made some sub plotlines for NPCs that progress as you progress the main plot. I find myself looking around in-between main quests to find new scenes and see how the other NTR plotlines are progressing.

This is defining something to look forward to. Being a SAO NTR is only the icing on the wonderful NTR cake. The only problem the game seems to crash a lot. Thankfully there is an autosave.