RPGM - Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.65] [Fujino]

Definetely the best NTR game i have played, and i have played/read a ton of ntr.

OK so IMO....
+Fantastic animated H scenes
+ Good and well deployed slow pacing NTR
+ Great dreadfull story, defintely not for soft hearted people
+ Well written characters story and events
+ Asuna is hot and the sex dialogues are actually good
+ MC is not a complete idiot, he knows something is going on but "love" and also he cant believe a fat fckr is ramming his girl
+ Really good battle animated H-Scenes
+ The second part is way better... but you need to play the first one
+ the First part last H scene is sooo good. And the Second part intro and Trehouse Scene are really good too


- WAY Too much unnecessary dialogue and side events
- the world against the cucked is something i dont find appealing
- maybe way too slow paced.
- The First part has no sexual intercourse, just one but is really meh, if you want a quick fap play the second part, the prologue has a great intro


Personal thoughs.....
My first ntr was Scars of summer so it leaved a mark on me and was top for me .. it was shocked for a long time but then you start to find more fckd up ntr's and you realize that "scars" is just babysteps into these sht.....
Shibafu, Castella and Hiromitsu have pull me full into this abyss.
But their ntr's are missing some little thing that make them feel more... "real".

This fkcng koikatsu rpgm game has that little thing. i played the first part and the entire corruption and ntr events are so well done and written that you can actually feel awfull for Kirito. its very rare for me to feel bad for the cucked. Asuna is such a lying wh#re you can actually feel anger reading her lies, and the fat bastard...... *clap clap*.... well done.... i really hate that fckr. i was so invested in the first part i spent like 3 or 4 hours playing till the end it it was a nightmare but the H scenes were totally worth it.... the "fall" of Asuna is perfect.
So the first part is fantastic

Now the second part....goddamn.... the new system of character thoughs and small conversation system is fkng fantastic. I actually had a small anxiety attack when seeing the fat bastard again making his moves on this bitch again... he is way more evil and more bold.
i actually despite asuna now... i think this novel totally ruined asuna and kirito for me. But thats good it means the novel and character /scenes writting are really good.


Overall: if you enjoy hard soul and mind hitting NTR's, this novel is for you and will get you there... just dont tunnel it, read it give it time to fck your mind.

Slow, slower, Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.40]
Yeah yeah, slow burn and what not. At this point it looks like the dev tries to boil at room temperature.
The way "part" 2 started, with the groping in the battle, is completely thrown out the window. Instead The plot and gameplay became completely unoriented and aimless.
The H scenes are so-so, as are the relationships between those characters, not getting anywhere.

I feel sorry for KIRITO because the whole world is against him. There's not much chance of life here.
The first time I feel sorry for a character in NTR, although I haven't played them that much yet, but I feel sorry for KIRITO here.
Alas INODA I am interested in 5% of my interest.
But the game is still ok for NTR would be better if only not INO...

The first one is better.
In the first part of Asuna she was ordinary after a short time in the first part she went from ordinary to a slightly stupid girl for NTR, which is normal.
At the beginning of the second part she ..... started to think more but all her thoughts are (BAD INODA- OH SHOULD HELP INODA) - but when Inoda came to the church the hard part started Inoda is stinging with all the dialog. Although there's a little excuse for a sneaky friend.
But the cruelty is this. (Oh, I probably didn't tell you I'm working as a manaschka - I'll play along with poor Inoda.)
Ha-ha. Even for NTR, they've made Asuna look like a stupid, gullible Asuna. -
Asuna, Kirito and pathetic Inoda were on a mission in the forest before the mission from Liz. Asuna says she's a nun, so you can guess where she's doing the mission or think Liz said. But alas, it's just (Oh, I didn't tell him).
Give her back at least 1% of her brains, because she thinks (Oh not good and immediately and OK I'm just helping) Way will be gullible but not a stupid tree.

Although because of the fact that Asuna toppled dumb became in the second but happy other even simple dialogues. That here says NPS with a couple of phrases more interesting than whining around inoda and stupid.

Now it is interesting that there Liz, Sugu, Shino, and a little Kyoko - Only My Opinion. Secondary. characters became more interesting so there is no whining WISH INODA- AND SHOULD HELP INODA.

one of the best r18+ games, need more games/type like this.
But if i can give feed back is, need more CG scene cuz the animation so amazing, more or longer gonna awesome. More realistic story between the characters, and how this game story connect more to real anime story.
Hope for the next update to this game. And more another parody games like this.

Story : 10/10
Originality : 10/10
Renders/Art : 9/10
Sound :10/10
Playability : 10/10
Performance : 10/10
Bugs : some visual bugs if you rush too much
Animations : 8/10
Voice Acting : none
Grammar : nothing to say.
Amount of content : completed part one with a lot of content, multiple fap sessions. Part two in the works.

Sword art online NTR parody with hidden ntr and slow corruption, Fujino sensei is cooking up his best game yet. Part 1 is worth it.

Fun game with a variety of different types of content. Works well in creating a variety of situations but going at a good pace to build toward the narrative. Character models are well done and interesting and they seem to have actual depth in some ways, not just paper dolls.

Lazy writing and no assests' creativity, those are the key words of this game. I was hoping a lot since I kinda liked the original show but here we are. I know NTR enjoyer are craving for anything they can find but come on... aim for higher quality!

The most typical bottom of the barrel NTR garbage.
Women with the agency and intelligence of a fleshlight, an MC so dumb it is a wonder he can breathe unassisted and a world inhabited almost solely of people that frequent Epstein's island.
The game itself is both mindless and too long, forcing a mundane brainless activity, with frequent crashes.
To put salt on the wound, there is some really good art and animations here, but most of the scenes are from bad angles or blurred, so the actual number of good scenes is cut in half.

One of the best games in the NTR genre. And believe me this is not empty praise, I have something to compare it with and this game is head and shoulders ahead of almost everything except HPMF. Great plot without the beaten up blackmail, but with a very smooth and slow corapshchen of the main female character. A lot of juicy animated scenes made with a soul. There's a local internet where people post racy pictures of people you know., juicy scenes aka "looking out of the door", awesome scenes during the battle, when you have behind your back is happening something "interesting", as well as a system of choice in which you either know more or play with minimal hints of NTR. And in the second part there is an awesome idea about a new girl trying to take the main character for herself (simultaneous NTR and a guy and a girl two in one, I have not seen such a brilliant move in any game).

From the minuses of the game wildly slows down and cheesy autosave that prevents you from saving in many different slots constantly transferring focus on yourself. But I hope that at least the author will fix the last one someday.

First thanks for the game , finally a SAO ntr game

great game tbh there is a lot of potential in it , with the asuna display it's great
I know it's hard to write a decent ntr story but you did good with this one it's making sence so far
the options are intresting and there are a variety of them like asuna statue window and that menu and kirito's room is a great idea

overall it's a 5 star from me , i do hope that the game will be a lot bigger with time .

Pretty good. I love the animations.

The only downside currently is the bad optimisation. The last few combo attacks character does lag the PC, and I'm on i7-11700kf and nvidia 3060Ti with 32 gb ram. Also highly noticeable when the side text is being displayed (left side text). Besides that, I get crashes (game closes) every 1 to 2 hours.

The current fighting system shouldn't exist, as every fight is trivial and is only there so we can see the side "activities" Asuna and Inoda are doing, so my suggestion is just to replace them with usual text/animations+pictures.

Still, I can see the effort put in, so a 4 is definitely deserved, might be 5 if better optimised.

Really wanted to enjoy this game premise was good but the issue was with the direction of the game and the personalities of the characters. It's like they are only working on two brain cells.


Issue with main characters:

Asuna: Kinda acts like a whore. Right from the start she starts caring for Inoda more than Kirito starts ignoring him and lies to him most of the time. These behaviors should have developed more slowly as the corruption progresses.

Kirito: Acts so dumb and oblivious in situations that it's torture to play. I bet Inoda can fuck Asuna right in front of him and she can convince Kirito they are just wrestling and he will cheer for them. And we were forced to play as him in the complete game.


I don't get the appeal of playing as an oblivious cuck. It would have been much better if it had a FMC or we played as Inoda, Instead of playing as brain-dead Kirito we could have played as Asuna who was slowly being corrupted by Inoda. But not against it having some events where we switch MC to Kirito for better immersion.

The only good thing about his game was the art and animation. Which was of high quality.

Dude. Animations and story is quite good but holy shiz, you dont play this game, you watch scene after scene, dialogue after dialogue. Also the game is very very far from finished and there are really only a couple of scenes. I would not recommend this game at this state. I am somewhat disappointed because i actually liked the story and scenes.

First off it's NTR. You know the deal. I know the deal. If you're into it. You're into it. If not, well this ain't the game for you.

Honestly. My issue is that the game is very slow, with no ability to fast-forward text. When it comes to NTR I'm in it for the corruption kink. Seeing Kirito slowly put things together or an attempt at believability isn't why I am here. Give me the smut.

What I did see while vaguely playing the game was pretty good. Gameplay-wise it was one of the least painful RPGM games I've played.

The writing wasn't perfect but that's not an issue I really care about.
My only real issue with the game is I can't skip to the good bits.

There will be minor spoilers, needed as examples for arguments. Also, sorry for any upcoming mistakes; English isn't my native language, but I want to try to give an adequate opinion on this

The Good:

• Gameplay-wise, this new game by Fujino is of much higher quality than its predecessors.
• Combat scenes are pretty good.
• The progression of the antagonist is done well, evolving from cunning to bad to evil.
• I like the story of the little sister, who is frustrated because her brother won't bang her, so she goes wild.

The Bad:

• Performance issues.
• UI problems.
• Crashes.
• Asuna's boobs are way too large but that's subjective.

The Painful:
Now, before I start, I hope we can agree that especially NTR is mainly not about the violation process but about the story and caring characters in physically and mentally "displeasing" situations. That is also clearly the aim of the dev, as the proportion of text to animation is like 90 to 10%. Sadly, that's exactly where the game falls short.

Asuna: Some people say she is a whore. As of now (Part 2, 0.15), she is not. The problem with her written story is that she just doesn't care about Kirito, love, or any other common relationship-related senses. Right from the start, as she starts caring for Inoda, she starts lying to Kirito and doing borderline cheating stuff. At the beginning, she is not forced or anything; you can even argue that her behavior encourages Inoda to become more corrupted and violent throughout the story. That's how it's written, and it just doesn't make sense considering what she and Kirito have been through over the course of their backstory. Later down the road, the author tries to bring in some "struggles," but they're just not believable if Asuna still does the same stuff right at the next meeting with Inoda. ^^

Kirito: The one and only black swordsman himself (sorry, fellow Berserk fans, it was just too tempting )) PS: I don't like Kirito, BUT... In short, you can call this game SAO - that time I got reincarnated as a Sloth (stupidest animal on earth).

The MC in this one is just so unbelievably dumb; it's painful to read his lines. The thing is, the dev also has an NTR game about Denji (Chainsawman). It would be totally okay for him to be this stupid because the dude literally grew up in a shack, and his only contact was a speechless demon dog. He knows nothing about society, common human behavior, relationships, etc. But considering the backstory of Kirito, he is cold, calculated, and decently smart. I just don't get why the dev had to pick the "overly original" idea of small dick and zero brain cells. The character has enough backstory to make a decent plot. Just a few suggestions:

• As it happens in real life, long-lasting relationships, the closeness fades as time passes by.
• The dev could make him study and work a lot because he and Asuna want to move abroad.
• The dude is known to be handsome; you could make Asuna jealous.
• Or make him at least an otaku who is more interested in playing games than spending time with his girlfriend.
  
  simply just somewhat believable storytelling

Last but not least, I have an example to make it absolutely clear. There is a scene, to be precise, it's a video in which the literal ID card of one of the girls is held into the camera over the whole "recording" process, and he still doesn't get who that is. C'mon now, that's just, geez...

I don't know; it seems that the dev is aware of the story issues in part 1 and tries to change and improve things, which I highly appreciate. To sum up, in Part 2, Kirito got some serious brain upgrades right from the start, but sadly, it's too late, as we know what happened in part 1. Honestly, I don't think part 2 can fix this matter, but I hope, for future installments, the author works on better storytelling, as overall, objectively, it's a higher quality production, and the dev has some good skills.

Haven't tried part 2, but part 1 was pretty awesome and hot. A lot of scenes with nice build up to the next event. A little bit of exploration with scenes as well, you can miss some of them if you go directly to your objective. But the maps are also small with few locations. 5/5 game for me.

Truly excellent work with awesome plot and very much enjoyable content.
Combat for such games is perfect, easy and short but not too much with little choice. Plot is going smoothly like drums before showdown of CG's, hoping and expecting more CG's with main characters. Don't know how plot will go further or there will be more choice options with different endings or no, but for me Hebishima(current Sugu BF) feels like side character villain and main one being Inoda with exciting options of invisibility. He could later lose little bit fat and get fit somehow turning little bit more handsome or no because it could change the plot context in good or bad way. What I am expecting and hoping from this game and dev. that there is no need to rush this game and it could be as big it could get in different parts like now because this game for many could become 1 of few Favorite games if it's already isn't for some.

Part 1 was decent with its pacing I find. But part 2 is an absolute nightmare. The dev stretches the story as far as he possibly can with boring, innate tasks and talks that go nowhere.
You finish part 1 and kind of expect for part 2 to have a little bit more on the hentai even in the early game, since the female character was corrupted in part 1.
But nope! You wake up next to her, you have some breakfast, you walk to school but not before the protagonist pointing out that they should wake up that guy who cucks him.
Like who gives a fuck? MOVE you dumb fuck. You arrive at the school. New character introduction that takes ages, then time to explore the school! You HAVE TO find the library, the swimming pool and many other rooms.
Of course everyone has several comments to drop every time you enter one of these rooms.
You go home, you log into the game again just more talking. Then lets explore the entire village! You HAVE to enter these many buildings now, again every time some comments from the NPCs you're with.
The entire game is like that. Then you have to bring some package from the library to some coffee shop, again nothing happens its only implied but its mostly just more empty talk.
You go home, log into the game, as always nothing happens. You wake up, have breakfast, go to school, buy some juice for your classmates, more empty talk with nothing substantial being said.
You go home, have breakfast, go to school, the protagonist goes like "Oh how about some pringles?" and visits a store, yet another character introduction.
Like its so boring. Seems like the dev forgot about the first part entirely or he forgot to add hentai to his hentai game.

Amazing fanfic plot I have known about SAO, especially Asuna. CG and script are also wonderful too (very very **rny). I 'm looking forward to next update for this game.
I hope Fujino will focus more on building the main route with Asuna in next time, instead of trying to other characters. It's not like that i'm not intertest in other character or their story. I'm only want to see Asuna'story more and more as soon as possible. Anyway, thank fujino and colleagues very much for the effort put into this work.
P/S: The other game of Fujino is also excellent. Example, Sakura's chapter.
Hopefully Fujino will continue to create more wonderful works like that.