RPGM - Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.745] [Fujino]

THe three stooges raping simulator.

The typhoon scene is the breaking one for me.
You seriously want me to believe Kaito doesn't bring his OWN god damn keys with him?! Sure bruh

Who is dumber.

#1 The MC who apparenty won a Battle Roayl MMORPG, but in real life walks around oblivious to his surroudings.

#2 The GF with a Golden Heart which turn out to be a magnet for BS, cause she lacks the ability to think logically.

#3 A abused kid who most likely did something to his parents, and his only idea of solving a problem is raping.

THe plotholes in this game are so big you can hide Dave Blunts in them.

-A convenient coincidence. The MC was about to visit AKina, but suddenly has to do errands for a teacher? Seriously!? And he is too stupid to figure out he should bail and really visit his GF?!
-Akina shouldn't even bother visiting Inoda! She supoosedly wanted to break up...Why even bother visitng him.
Instead she spends a whole day with him?!
-Why is she at his house to begin with!?
-She waits until IT STARTS TO RAIN. Doesn't ring him, doesn't bang on the door. Why aren't the lights on?!
-Why are they wet?! Those japanese houses always have a roof above the corridors.
-Inoda ALWAYS there when MC meets Akina. ALWAYS.
-How did he know to take the spare?
-Why does the MC blabber to himself about hiding the spare key?!
-Why doesn't she have a spare of her own to begin with?!
-Typhoon is coming. The whole city knows excpet her. Too stupid to figure out on her own.
-Kaito calls her to tell her after it starts to rain...Why didn't he call her earlier?!
-One day flu LUL

Definitely the worst writing I have encountered.

The game is just sad...
The only enjoyable part of this game is the relationship betwen hebishima and the MC's sister. Whatever the hell her name was.
Actual NTR. Also all the small NTR encounters around town. Unfortunately there weren't enough scenes of...you know...THE ACTUALL SEX. Show me more of Akina's mom, all those school girls. The web scenes are too short. Show us all the depravity in it's glory.
Also there should be more commentary from the MC about all the cheating going on around him.
You have to get off on the idea of everyone fucking each other behind their spouses backs. We know it's happening, yet all behind the screen, off camera...
The only character and story progression moments worthy of praise are Kaito slowly realising a connection betwen Inoda and Akina, and his talks with the priest. Unironicaly the Akina/Inoda relationship which should be the strongest part of the game, is just a poorly written dumpster fire.
So like, what's the point?

One of the goats when it comes to NTR games, extra credit since this is SAO. Part one started off pretty slow but once it picked up speed, it does not stop. Considring this is a NTR game, the story is pretty good. But where it shines the most are the character model and the sex scenes. The female models are 11/10 and so are the sex scenes.

Great game if you like Sword art online or hate Kirito and want to see him cucked the only thing that would make it better is if they let you name the guy stealing all of Kiritos girls so you can pretend you are the one cucking him

The story is incredibly written well, the sex animations are really good and the writing makes it 10x better... the developer also gives consistently good updates. playing every update is enjoyable unlike some other games that makes the updates after 6 months of waiting feel like absolutely nothing

A brilliant game through and through, for me. Good NTR, great animations, and enough regular updates to keep the game relevant. And no recycled pose animations from Koikatsu, all custom (Seemingly, at least.)

Wish I never played it so I could play it again from the start for the first time.

It definitely has some strong points, like the animation, attractive and cute art style, atmosphere, and mechanics such as spying through the phone, among other things

However, it lacks a cohesive story or direction—I have no idea where I’m heading or what the ultimate goal is. It feels like I’m simply watching the day-to-day lives of the MC and FMC
And the characters lack strong depth and personality. Their relationships aren’t profound but rather shallow and one-dimensional
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I should also mention the non-consensual act at the beginning of the story:
Rape can also be enjoyable (I mean in games, not in reality) And in this game, it was quite hot; as the MC progressed through each stage, the bull reached new levels of sexual acts until he had an intense sex with the FMC However, it didn't leave a good memory

I believe 3 stars is a fair rating. A flawless game deserves the full 5 stars

I would rate this game 2 stars, and while there are aspects that deserve some recognition, the overall experience falls flat for me. The art style is undeniably appealing, and certain scenes are visually well-executed, contributing to moments that capture attention. Unfortunately, these strengths are not enough to compensate for the game’s major shortcomings.
The writing and character development are areas where the game struggles significantly. Despite being an NTR game, which inherently demands some plot structure to build the corruption process, I found the narrative to be lacking depth and substance. What was especially disheartening was reading multiple reviews that praised the writing, plot, and characters, only to be met with an experience that felt shallow and uninspired. The characters, rather than feeling authentic and multi-dimensional, came across as one-dimensional and lacking the complexity needed to engage players on an emotional level.
The disconnect between the positive reception and my own experience left me disappointed, as I had hoped for a story that would complement the visual appeal and keep me invested throughout. While the game may appeal to those who prioritize visual elements and certain intense scenes, those seeking a compelling plot and strong character development are likely to find it lacking.

A long and slow burn of a game, that allows a nice corruption progress (maybe too tedious to some) with a very satisfying CG to top each arc of advances from the "villain". The game regresses regulary because of a guilty conscience from the FMC but that allows for a more extended experience.

Really great potential in this game but there are a few very large problems with this game. Part 1 had a nice flow, there wasn't a terrible amount of dialogue and running around between sex scenes; however part 2 is very tedious. Mountains of dialogue between nothing exciting happening. My second issue with this game, is that the constant crashing makes it unplayable. It's a real shame too because the story is actually pretty good. This would likely be a 4-star game if not for the crashing issues.

Cool cheating game but ultimately unplayable due to constant crashes.

I'm loving the game so far. I've been playing since part 1, and this plus a couple other games are the only ones I play every update. I just finished part 2 .601, and I'm loving the direction of the current arc. The scenarios paired with the CG scenes are really sexy, and if you have a decent computer the CGs are fluid. Game can be a bit demanding on lower end PC's, but that is from the amount of content in each part. Looking forward to more.

This review covers the entirety of the part 1, which is what I've played thus far.

This game has one redeeming quality, which are the scenes, as everyone has said. Everything else is terrible.

Here's a non exhaustive list of issues and complaints:

Battles are extremely boring, lengthy while also being unlosable.
Battle skills have an unholy amount of flashing and ridiculous amount of sounds going on.
Scene replay is janky.
Scene transitions are janky and can break the game entirely if you're skipping dialogue or press the confirm key too many times.
The game crashes often (on map change, on battle change, on scene transition, you fucking name it)
There's a shitton of walking around just to get to places (map is sparse with not enough events to justify it and there's not much to do in it other than just be a walking simulator; no item system, no quest fetch system, nothing, just going from point A to B to view scene)
Some maps are coded wrong (I interacted with a clerk from the left instead of from the front and that softlocked my game)
Whoever is praising the story is either illiterate or deluded; all characters barely feel like themselves and they're all varying degrees of way too fucking stupid. Corruption is NOT slow, the guy gets a handjob on day 2. Come the fuck on.

How on earth this has five stars genuinely eludes me. This game is held together with duct tape and dreams. Probably more of the former than the latter, too.

this review is based on Part 2 v0.551 (October 29, 2024)

currently, I am giving it a 4/5.
the gfx is good, especially Part 2 onwards. the game mechanics is OK, the story is excellent.

i would have given it 5/5 but i am deducting a point for the following reasons:
a) game is unfinished, so some stuff feels hanging or broken. even Part 1 tends to crash reasonably often.
b) pace of the game can be a bit slow at times.

overall its well forth the time and one of the better titles in the NTR/cheating genre.

Note: this review is for part 1. This is a linear visual novel of a cheating (netorare) story based on the Sword Art Online anime.

The single strong point of the game (and admittedly it's very good indeed) are the sex scenes, the majority of which are well animated with fluid and smooth motion and have sounds and moans. The forte of this developer is clearly in this department and it shows; the game is worth checking out just because of this.

But every other element of the game is at best average to mediocre, if not outright dogshit.

The story is pure porn logic and dumb even by NTR standards. It reduces both Kirito and Asuna characters into bumbling idiots. There is too much unnecessary dialogue with side characters, and also scene for side characters that we don't even care about. To give credit, the very beginning points of the story is decent enough, but it quickly loses any immersive grasp due to character breaking progression.

The rpgmaker comes with the ever annoying unskippable overabundance of emoji bubbles. The rpg battles are just there, base level rpgmaker just to show the battle molestation, which are pleasing but underutilized its full potential. Actually, there is a lot of good potential with such setting of hyper virtual reality rpg, but the author doesn't do much with it beyond the basics which is frustrating.

It is also bad how for such a simple game, it crashed to desktop close to 10 times during a full playthrough, with frequent hiccups and freezes specially at the start of combat or when animations play, sometimes I had to force close the game and open it again to fix.

The save system annoyingly defaults and ruins the 5th save slot (seriously?). The original translation was bad and ruined the story even further, and the gallery was shoddly implemented, with many scenes missing and no title or descriptor for each scene. Modders had to come and fix both the translation and gallery.

So 4 stars for the neat sex scenes, but 2 stars for everything else: the dumb story, dialogue, suboptimal engine and tech issues.
Final rating (for part 1): 3 stars for the effort and animations alone.

It's an NTR game that's bloat maxing right now. The first part is tense a bit quick and ends with some ambiguity. The 2nd part picks up and pretty much kills the ending from the first game by turning the ugly bastard into a straight up rapist. After that it's kinda meandering with tons of content but it all happens inside the game for a good chunk and blowing any pacing and tension there could be. Also exploration got nerfed so it's pretty much a VN. I love the animations, but for me NTR is all about showing scenes then found out the tricky ways they happened. I'll keep playing it for the animations and to see what happens but everyone, including the cuck, are turning into degenerates so what's the point.

[Part 2 v0.551]
Interesting, but too much text and plot (for me)

-Story, Originality
You are a cuck... From anime...

-Renders
Cool Koikatsu 3D models and animations.

-Sound
Some sounds and h-sounds.

-Playability
A lot of walking, reading and fighting, but a little boring.

-Performance
Runs okay.

-Bugs
Gallery in 2nd part doesn't unlock everything.

-Animations
Developer used Koikatsu nicely.

-Voice Acting
H-sounds.

-Grammar
Didn't see any mistakes.

-Amount of content
A lot of content, but a little too much gameplay and too little h-stuff.

Like it, but it is too slow for an h-game.

A game with actual plot and plenty of H scenes with a dedicated developer. The corruption is slow but worth the wait even now. The game has an interactive status menu to check if the FMC is being harassed off screen. Makes me diamonds.

Awesome game. It has its pros and cons.
On the plus side, I can note the gradual corruption of the heroine, which is quite fresh, because usually it is not like that. And the fall happens quite quickly.
The number of secondary stories is also good, but they lack a connection with the main plot, and it looks more like an addition, not a connected story. Which is neither a plus nor a minus.
The quality of the animation is at a fairly high level.
The amount of content is quite large, especially in the second part, which is clearly a plus.
On the minuses in this game, these are not always long animations, for example, when Kirito peeks, or accidentally sees something, as well as the effects and sounds that accompany this event.
But if longer animations were set, it would be a plus.
Also, there are often no sound effects where they would be appropriate, especially in erotic content, even in simple places, although perhaps they just do not load well for me.
The number of dialogues is very large. This is not exactly a minus, since it is quite interesting to read what kind of story is developing, but the minus here is that sometimes there is no connection with other events, even when playing the game for the second time. But again, this is possible due to the quality of my automatic translation of the game.
Result.
Even with a fairly large number of minuses, the game turned out to be quite interesting, because the author took the idea from a popular anime. And the characters themselves, their animation and dialogues, are quite lively.
At the moment, I give it from 4.5 to 5 stars.
If the game will have more unexpected moments, especially in the story of the heroine Asuna, the manifestation of her character in relation to the villain Inoda and her lover Kirito, as well as the manifestation of willpower, and not just her own lustful consciousness, then the game will be more entertaining, and my rating will not be so small.
Although where else. (smile)

I am a big fan of their previous games, so it's unfortunate that I feel I have to rate it this low, but I have not been looking forward to updates for a while now and thinking about it, there's a number of things that bother me.

- The story - the pacing feels... off. There's very little tension. It can't all be H scenes obviously, but the build up needs to be meaningful. I just drudged through the "Date Section" of the latest update and it felt phoned in and entirely predictable. And every event feels like this. I just can't get invested. There's endless padding/walking around that's just uninteresting.

- Playing the game - it's cumbersome. You rarely know exactly where to go. "Date in the Commercial District"... ok. You walk around aimlessly until the game decides you have ticked off all (unmarked) events. Fun. Then every conversation.is.broken.up.by.the.stupid.emoji.RPGM.things.breaking.up.every.stream.of.thought.or.cohesion. You can't skip (largely shallow) conversations well and even if you don't, you have to wait every few seconds for the same stupid emojis to play out. It adds nothing and makes it a pain to watch.

-Kirito - he is such an idiot that the love story makes less and less sense as the story progresses.

- Bugs, bugs, bugs - crashes, stuck screens, perk list that won't update. On that note the whole status UI seems pointless since it doesn't affect anything.

I could write more... but suffice to say that playing feels like a chore right now.

first part was a masterpiece, but the later updates were dogshit. i hate how it's going towards the corruption/pregnancy route. fuck this shit, this is gonna end like those mediocre ntr games where mc deliberately ends into cuckolding lmao. but it was good in the first part, 2 stars for that yo

Review updated (Dez/2024): Based on Part 1 (Complete) and Part 2 (v0.65)

*Story, Characters and Dialogues: 4/5
*Art, Renders and Animations: 5/5
*Sex scenes quality and quantity: 5/5
*Gameplay: 3.5/5
*Bugs and technical state of the game: 3/5

-A very good and kinky story for NTR/Corruption fans. With really great art and sex scenes!

-Gameplay wise, there's some unnecessary walking and searching for events in the map, but nothing too absurd... It's also, sometimes, a bit confusing to make some choices or search for some of the side characters scenes. (For example: A few scenes were available for me in the gallery, but I have no clue how did I miss them while playing). But this does not happen for the main heroine part of the game, because everything is quite straightforward with Asuna's story.

-Technical issues: A lot of crashes on Part 1. At least there's an Auto Save function to make it less annoying, but be ready to F5 a lot. I had considerably fewer crashes playing Part 2, but had some frame drop problems in some scenes involving the "side dialogue" feature. (Having a good/modern CPU and installing the game in a SSD may help.)

Final Score: 4/5