You wrote such a long message, just to explain how the story doesn't make sense, or how the writing sucks. I can say that while your criticism is valid, I feel like your expectations are unfitting for "a porn game".
How is that so? There are a lot of games that were developed for less than a year, yet have more content than this one. I mean, i understand that current writer/developer have it rough, but you can't say that this game is good just out of pity.
Even a porn focused game will require a story framework.
I don't think i've ever said otherwise.
Yes, the characters may say 1 thing and then do something completely different, but in the real world, it's quite usual for people to be split in situations and at least in the way this story is structured, the women do have parts which are hoping to be dominated.
I mean... Priscilla and Gerda? Yeah. Maybe even Becca, but personally i felt like she just liked MC, wanted to have sex with him, and were willing to endure MC's fetishes, but i guess it's just me trying to find a character that was not "masochistic". But what about Clara? I don't think she ever wanted to have sex with MC. Yet he sexually assaulted her, took photos of this, and then blackmailed her forcing her to have sex with him and basically making her his own sex slave. I mean, why would he do this? She never did anything bad to him, always were quite nice even though she worked as a janitor and were constantly sexually assaulted by principal and humiliated by students. She was probably the only character that main character should've pitied, yet he just went crazy after she called him a boy, even though it makes perfect fucking sense since she's like what, 40 or something? 18 y/o guy would be a boy for her.
Now the realism of "how are there so many women who're into that" is pointless, because a game is a game.
Well, from my experience most games that have a lot of masochistic women have corruption/mind control in them. Why? Because it would be simply illogical to have a town full of horny masochistic women that don't care about how their partner treat them and simply want to ride a dick, yet having them not fuck anyone and just wait for MC to come and fuck them even though he's not better than literally any other man. That's why most games try to have one masochistic character, and then maybe have some rape play or just rough sex with other girls, because it's simply more realistic, and you can appeal to a wider auditory by adding different characters, because, you know, people have different fetishes.
And the same response is in regards to the size of the MC's dick, it's a game, so it's a strange thing to be bothered by..
Why the fuck no one is bothered by MC's dick? I understand that basically every game's MC has big penis, but that's all. They have a big dick, not a barrel instead of a dick. It's normal sized, something like 7-9 inches or so, you know. It doesn't look like a Hulk's dick, although i think even Hulk's dick would be smaller than this game's MC. It should look like a human's dick god damn it, not like a weird shaped log.
The story criticism (In terms of how it's structured), I know that it's currently a mess with many events happening out of order, with some scenes not addressing the previous scenes, but the out of order story bits can be fixed rather easily. The dialogue can also be improved as long as there's the motivation to improve it.
Yet it's still not fixed, even after a year of development, so why are you trying to defend it? Right now this game is a mess, and i wouldn't recommend it to anyone. As for potential of this game, i already said, it definitely has one.
This game has some of the best art in this site (imho), and the scenes, while they currently don't form an exactly "satisfying story", if you take the general story of the majority of storylines, they do make sense. Like - Man meets woman, woman mocks man, man shows that he's a real man, the woman leaves an opening in her "heart", man wins her over with his meat scepter (And coercion) through a number of events.It has a bunch of stereotypical settings, like the "landlady", "friend", best friend, his mom, etc, etc.
Yeah, art is great, but there are still scenes that look ungodly awful. Yeah, most storylines do this, i agree on that. But in most stories man is a good guy, or at least he's likable, and have some positive features. But in this game MC is a complete scumbag with no likeable or positive features, so i can't really project MC's doings on myself which really breaks immersion.
Could there be better transitions between events and story progression? Yes. But is that a necessity considering it's a game focused on the porn? No.
Considering that most of the good games have that, and that it's basically just a proper thing to do since game feels a lot better when it's story are smooth, it's kinda a necessity. And it's kinda funny to see someone saying that this game are focused on porn when there's just a handful of sex scenes right now.
For me the scenes are hot purely from what's happening, not from the great backstory of each character, their depth and internal conflict of being sexually depraved, and being a strong womxn dealing with a young man.
Yeah, that's basically everyone. No one really gets hard reading a backstory. But even so there aren't a lot of scenes for you to get hot from what's happening.
As long as the storylines are ordered properly (which they aren't currently), I think this will be a quality piece (As a porn game) no matter how poor the dialogue itself is.
Honestly, even if they fixed storylines and quests it's still would've been a pretty bad porn game, but if you compare it to some other stuff that gets made then yeah, it would be a quality piece.
