Ren'Py - Takei's Journey [v0.30] [Ferrum]

New game review, in the beginning this game seemed to be interesting but now it's totally scary, it was one of the worst naruto porn parodies in terms of story development.

It takes place within the world of Naruto, but it's not literally a Naruto game and you're not playing as Naruto or anyone you know from the Naruto universe. You are controlling the MC indicated by the DEV, which is from Tanzaku Quarters and also known as ''Takei Clan'', where the game starts to sin because the mc is ridiculous, weak, depraved with horrible appearance, I hate the model for the MC .

There are many games that chose some innit, but there is a split choice whether he will be a good or bad protagonist, but this guy is just a badass villain... what's the point of the villain that lives inside your head then?

The "gameplay" sucks, the walkthrough is confusing and not very intuitive, and the fighting minigame is boring. I don't even mind when the games are dirty, usually. But this game is next level grindy. You have to replay training events literally dozens of times just to get to the next cutscene.

Some of the characters only have "trash Talk" Sarada is one of them, with tsundere temper outburst.
I couldn't tank your comments or event, I just skipped them all, Temari with that phrase "Put it in the right place!" like I was some kind of dog or whatever.

Apart from these annoyances, the models seem to be interesting and faithful but the appearance of the mc was one of the worst.

As a fan of the series I'm grateful that there are games with Naruto/Boruto characters even with Koikatu graphics, however the first 3 minutes are nonsense, Sasuke keeps saying loser to Naruto and Naruto has a shitty attitude towards him, it doesn't feel natural, in the series they don't behave like that, I know it's a porn parody but every parody has its logic, this one at least at the beginning doesn't have it.
When the "villain" appears the plot takes an interesting turn and apparently the good stuff starts, maybe if at the beginning the conversation was more nostalgic and less offensive (offensive in the childish sense, like you are a poop eater or something like that) it would be much better, it doesn't help Sasuke to call Naruto a loser all the time, he said it in practically every sentence.


PROS:
*The main characters I think are well done, they're not perfect but they're okay, although the landlady/mom I don't like at all, she looks too generic.
*The MC is ok, I don't dislike it like in the other games made with Koikatu.
*The story, despite being the typical "you're the only man left", is well thought out and enjoyable.
*Game for fans, a good one I must say.
*The "power" given to the MC is enjoyable and gives a lot of play to a future to practically be with any female character.
*It has an incredible potential, I hope it doesn't fail.

CONS:
*The beginning of the story, I find it almost disrespectful to the fans as the conversation and how Naruto and Sasuke get along is unnatural.
*The lack of animations, although it is understood that it is just the beginning, they are few.
*The game gives you a choice of what to call the Landlady, but if you decide to leave her as Landlady there are phrases that don't make sense as they don't belong to what a Landlady would say.
*The proportions of some characters look veeeery strange.

So far I'm liking the game, I'm looking forward to seeing content from Sarada and Hanabi, they are my favorites.
In the future you could implement a kind of "dark patch" for Himawari content or adult characters that use a jutsu to regain a child appearance.
In short, it is an excellent start, I believe that if you continue like this you will undoubtedly gain more fame and many more people will support you, there are just a few things to polish up, best of luck!