The game is pretty fucking amazing.
First of all, this game is about 90% porn. Maybe more. The highest concentration of porn in a vn I've ever seen. It's really good.
Now, to the story. There is none. When writing a story, the author normally has a plan in mind. A protag, their development, the plot line (multiple ones in this case) , all the side characters and so on. This vn isn't like that. This vn is written as an improv all the way through. And, considering that the storytelling is VERY non-linear, it's been done really well (for an amateur writer).
Unfortunately, I have to say that in a traditional sense the dialogue is not just bad, it's pretty much non-existent. Don't get me wrong, the characters do talk to each other, but the dialogue doesn't serve any purpose other than porn. But honestly, that's fine. As I've said before this is a porn game through and through. The story is still interesting and it's pretty cool to look at all the crazy kinds of trouble the characters get themselves into.
Now, the only real criticism I have is as follows. It's always a really bad idea to tell a story and then be like 'Oh, this didn't actually happen, it was all this character's dream.' Don't do that. Ever. To the reader it feels like a giant slap in the face. Makes your story seem insignificant and it makes the reader constantly suspicious as to whether what they're currently reading is real or not within the world of game. But then again, this is a porn game, so it's not a big deal. Still five stars.
Overall, I highly recommend you check this game out if you're into exhibitionism and into female characters who like to have sex with anything that moves.
First of all, this game is about 90% porn. Maybe more. The highest concentration of porn in a vn I've ever seen. It's really good.
Now, to the story. There is none. When writing a story, the author normally has a plan in mind. A protag, their development, the plot line (multiple ones in this case) , all the side characters and so on. This vn isn't like that. This vn is written as an improv all the way through. And, considering that the storytelling is VERY non-linear, it's been done really well (for an amateur writer).
Unfortunately, I have to say that in a traditional sense the dialogue is not just bad, it's pretty much non-existent. Don't get me wrong, the characters do talk to each other, but the dialogue doesn't serve any purpose other than porn. But honestly, that's fine. As I've said before this is a porn game through and through. The story is still interesting and it's pretty cool to look at all the crazy kinds of trouble the characters get themselves into.
Now, the only real criticism I have is as follows. It's always a really bad idea to tell a story and then be like 'Oh, this didn't actually happen, it was all this character's dream.' Don't do that. Ever. To the reader it feels like a giant slap in the face. Makes your story seem insignificant and it makes the reader constantly suspicious as to whether what they're currently reading is real or not within the world of game. But then again, this is a porn game, so it's not a big deal. Still five stars.
Overall, I highly recommend you check this game out if you're into exhibitionism and into female characters who like to have sex with anything that moves.