VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Teenage Dirtbag [v0.5 Final] [Munchmallowgames]

Good Points :
Models are really good (outside of Male Model but it's kind of usual with this type of models ^^)
Sex scenes are well done
Most characters are likeable

Bad Points :
Story is inexistant
Really little amount of content

I still give 4 stars hoping it will get more content than it has right now

(Writed on v0.5 Alpha)

This is a PURE visual novel
Game is very good unlike popular adult games in the site

you dont have to grind for stats,affection,etc and to keep up with day events

No map no need to browse for the kitchen,bathroom,school for events

Story is 8/10 so far
Sex scene are 9/10

Would definitely support the game developer

Hoping the game will not be abandoned like some games

Review for v0.3.5
Even though I've found myself bugged by the many bugs at the pool scene (e.g. the broken continuity when westop massaging Alison midway) and I'm sometimes bothered by the MC's attitude (like fawning so much over... Lara I think was her name (?), although I liked her a little bit better after tutoring her, or throwing himself at Mary (although I guess it's necessary to advance the plot)), I 've got to say that I've liked this game quite a bit.

Alison, Sarah, the mom, the gray-haired girl... all of them are very cute/sexy/attractive and all feel quite different from one another in regards to personality (not that the gray-haired girl has any depth as a character since we've not seen much from her; just that... she likes animals and is embarrassed by toplessness?). Also, I liked that plenty of the choices do have an effect on the story; that really made the difference between not even bothering to review and writing 250 words.

Anyway; I hope that the code is worked on and fumigated, that there's some glimpse of a plot; that we see more of the girls I've liked best and specially that the devs don't give up and leave us with a half-finished game like many others do. I hope I can come back to this game and give it 5 stars.

PS: Something minor but that'd be nice to have is actual rendered food when eating.

Review for version 3.

Short version
Pros
-Fantastic renders and animations
-Great characters and dialogue
Cons
-Length
-Spelling


Long version
The renders and characters and poses and scenes are all really well done. The dialogue is good enough to prove he's not just trying to sell porn. He clearly put some heart into it.

If the length of the game had been more than 3 in-game days, which will later have more content I would probably give it 4-5 stars.

But no, this game ends as quickly as it begins. Based on the author's plans for the future more endings will be updated and thus more choices, but we shouldn't be expecting anything past day 3. Therefore the game length won't be much longer even if additional choices add more replay value.

The endings I've seen so far isn't much better than a "to be continued, but not really" note. It's effectively just "I didn't get to do anything with her, but maybe things will go well with her in the future. Congratulations on finding this ending."

Many story-arcs are started and left completely forgotten. No doubt he'll add extra choices to pursue something specific, but the majority of story-arcs don't last long enough to make the game feel engaging. To top it off things are set in motion that the mc never looks into. Example: the mom's money troubles, the connection between her and the girl living with you, are forgotten shortly after they start. The mc never pries into this and ends up forgetting. You dive into the world, pick a direction, and as soon as you start to connect to it ends.

Even if the author does add the capability to pursue specific arcs it's weird how doing this will no doubt prevent him from pursuing others. If the author does make it possible to satisfyingly draw every started arc to a proper conclusion in at least one path I will edit my rating to be better. The half-hearted current endings I'm seeing are flat out awful and do no justice for this game.

It's really nice to see a game here that is so straight to the point.
It has some nice characters with mostly very good looking models, some humor and a tad of drama. It's very easily digestable, but not in a bad way.
The protagonist is actually sort of likeable, and a huge plus is that he gets laid pretty quickly. As for future updates, I hope it slows down the pace a bit and give us some more character moments, but it's a comfort that the dev doesn't want us blueballed for several versions.
I hope it continues in its current style, just more nice character moments.

Renders are too bright and colors are off due to bloom effect.
Some clipping on the renders (hand in clothes etc)
The grammar is terrible
Story is nonexistent
This is more linear than even a vn. Basically the developer created a bunch of renders and then added a few short phrases and called it a story.
The pace is way too fast.
Overall I can not find any PROS in this besides the existence of animations. I gave it 2 star because it is a very early version and might improve.

Teenage Dirtbag [v0.1]
The game looks promising, nice introduction with the characters.

Pros
+nice renders.
+the diffrent types of charcters
+quality of scenes
++animations(not many games have animations so thats very nice)

Cons
-story: i do like the setup, however i feel the story is already kind of rushed. The pace of story would be better if its slower; add some more in depth story,maybe more dialogue.
-speaking of dialogue; that is maybe the worst part of this game. Its very broken english, that made me enjoy the game much less.

Overall nice game, big improvement to do on the dialogue, other than that;
Keep up the nice work!