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I just started it but I like how Belial's beard is trying to run away from his face before the blasphemous act.
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Thanks for that catch. Please feel free to post any errors on my discord channel.
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'It was a song of three parts'
Didn't realise i was reading Rothfuss.
Might as well abandon it now, given the Dev's subtly hinting that they're never going to finish the story
Though actually this one makes more sense, because the third part is the silent part. So it's set up as a 2-part trilogy anyway.
Didn't realise i was reading Rothfuss.
Might as well abandon it now, given the Dev's subtly hinting that they're never going to finish the story
Though actually this one makes more sense, because the third part is the silent part. So it's set up as a 2-part trilogy anyway.
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I have not thought about any sequels to Tempest at this point. However, to put your mind at ease. If I do decide to do a sequel or even two, they will still probably be done before R.R. Martin finishes the damn "Winds of Winter".'It was a song of three parts'
Didn't realise i was reading Rothfuss.
Might as well abandon it now, given the Dev's subtly hinting that they're never going to finish the story
Though actually this one makes more sense, because the third part is the silent part. So it's set up as a 2-part trilogy anyway.
well unless u decide to play us a bs shit like those 2 buggons of scriptwriter's who did that dissaster ending at the end with daenu and jon u are in the right pathI have not thought about any sequels to Tempest at this point. However, to put your mind at ease. If I do decide to do a sequel or even two, they will still probably be done before R.R. Martin finishes the damn "Winds of Winter".
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just finished the prologue
what an awesome concept, considering the MC i the duality (pretty much), that means lots of choices right? like can chose something evil here, good there you know?
we are yet to "really" se the Li's but the story was pretty good for a prologue
what an awesome concept, considering the MC i the duality (pretty much), that means lots of choices right? like can chose something evil here, good there you know?
we are yet to "really" se the Li's but the story was pretty good for a prologue
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Thanks. Appreciate the feedback. Starting to get into choices in Chapter 1 now. I'm not going to flood the reader with thousands of choices, just to have choices. But each choice will have an impact. Some small, some big. And yes the duality of the MC will be in most choices.
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A public development update 11/26/25
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Development Update 12/17/25
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shine_twin
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Hey I signed up on the forum just to support this guy and now I kinda hold my breath every time I see a Patreon update.
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Just so you are aware. Updates to the VN will be on my Patreon page well before I update anything here. Just saying.Hey I signed up on the forum just to support this guy and now I kinda hold my breath every time I see a Patreon update.
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And by the way her name is Vespera.
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Omg, I'm in!Just so you are aware. Updates to the VN will be on my Patreon page well before I update anything here. Just saying.
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And by the way her name is Vespera.
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Progress Report: The first major chapter is entering its final production phase. All writing, branching logic, and narrative paths are finalized.
Latest Stats:
Scene 11 Status:
Once coding and rendering is complete I will be doing playthrough testing and building release files. This will be available only on my Patreon page for Patreons only for 14 days prior to public release here. So if you want it first you know where you have to go
Latest Stats:
- Word Count: ~26,000 words.
- Render Count: 413 (Currently through the climax of Scene 10.5).
- Average Density: ~60 Words Per Render.
Scene 11 Status:
- Scripting: Finished.
- Rendering: In Progress.
- Coding: In Progress.
Once coding and rendering is complete I will be doing playthrough testing and building release files. This will be available only on my Patreon page for Patreons only for 14 days prior to public release here. So if you want it first you know where you have to go
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