HTML - Abandoned - That Girl Fan Remake [v0.6 Beta] [Timmy Reed]

I haven't played the original so I'm going into this as if it's a new game. I find the plot a bit too far-fetched, which is fine for a porn game I guess, but it's hard to follow the story line when there are random girls trying to get fucked by the main character all the time.

Specifically, I think this is fine if there were consequences for choosing these side routes, but at one point your wife is literally kidnapped and you have time to go have a random threesome?

As a VN, which this game very much is (not sure the tag isn't there), I feel like either make these decisions matter, or remove them. The whole point of a VN is to tell a story.

0.5 review

Probably the best ntr real porn game, that is a VN (thanks!), instead the classic sandbox, with 3 ntr paths and great sex scenes.

It's short for now, about 1 hour of gameplay , but is still worth the download.

The only huge negative thing is that the aspect of wife, Alice and others girls as well, keep changing even in the same page, from a pornstar to another. That sadly breaks the immersion and can even create confusion, as u can't recognize the girl in action if wasn't for the name displayed before every lines of dialogues.

It would be 4 stars, because of that problem, but I want to give 5 stars to the author, hoping that the new updates will fix it.

Keep up the good work!

0.5 Review

It adds a bit of content, but the quality of the new scenes are superb. The creator's got great taste

The only con I can think of is that the content sometimes is hard to reach, the choices have to be very specific. For some scenes I had to read the code so I could get them.

There is also a minor bug in the code where it's written "Let mer see" instead of "Let me see", which in consequence makes some text unreachable, but it's nothing important anyways so yeah

Hope for more uncle scenes in the future!

It improves a lot on the original game, adding a lot of scenes that makes replayability much more satisfying. It doesn't improve much on the MC's storyline, but the added content really makes a lot of choices having some repercussion, like letting the uncle keep the book. I hope to see more of this in the future.