Its not bad, the antagonist is good, the plotlines are good, doesnt feel too weird as a story line.
MC is a bit of a superhero but isn't untouchable, just like usual every woman swoons over him at first sight. The biggest thing I can say this VN has is a MASSIVE ORAL FIXATION lol. Every girl is a throat queen and they REALLY enjoy it.
LI's are alright, Beatri(x)z is definitively the best looking/model out of all of them. Clarice is a close second. Sasha is probably third. None of the other models really hold a candle to them in my opinion. Theres alot of flavor variety, around 12~ different characters and some side-gigs that are a one-off.
Story is pretty simplistic but the pieces atleast align, business and corruption and the MC getting in the middle of it by working for a richer family that ends up having a conflict, that then the MC takes part of due to his close relation/proximity to everything happening.
Tbh I would have probably given this a 5 as there isn't a ton of boring filler dialogue, time waste, and boring stuff that I really dont otherwise care about (ie: backstory or just general forgettable chit chat that doesn't do anything for the progression of the story, only to fill time) however the stuff that keeps me from giving it a 5 is.
1) It feels as if this is written by a non-native english speaking person and if so the translation isn't great. Leading to the writing being bad, however if it was cleaned up well and a bit more articulate it would be solid.
2) the constant fixation to call younger people "little one" carries that super creepy undertone, not a fan of that whatsoever.
3) the constant throwing of characters at the MC, wouldn't mind a bit of a challenge or some build up. Not automatic instant attraction with the illusion of choices.
4) Theres a good/bad mechanic at play but I just dont really see a need for it, doesn't really tie much to the story or choices atleast from what I could tell. Might be a future thing but just didn't really feel fitting at all, kind of a red herring in a way.