VN - Ren'Py - The Awakening - Femboy Saga [Ch.1] [DarkFate]

For a completed first chapter, there definitely needs to be a spell checker. Some of the text didn't match what was going on in the scene and a lot of the syntax was awkward and distracting. Could use some polishing.

This was a well made game. Criticisms made over how feminine the MC are just personal taste -- it's a nice brief story, that feels like it could branch in a number of ways if the dev wanted.

It's not a criticism but I would prefer it if it wasn't completely kinetic and you could portray the relationship on a spectrum from nurturing to dark but again, that's just personal taste. It's a good game, it's well written and it looks great and it deserves 5 stars.

I love the premise and am a big fan of the FMC genera, so I really wanted to like this game... but I just don't. The models look nice, but the writing is really weak and the characters don't act in believable ways.

All of that would be forgivable if the sex scenes were better, but they're really quick and boring. It feels like the dev focused on on making multiple paths (even though it's pretty much just yes or no to sex at this point) without spending enough time to do one path well.

Visuals are a 10/10. The MC is kinda ugly but it is far from the worst i've seen. First love interest looks great probably one of the nicest looking male characters that I have seen. I usually don't mess with kinetic novels and other than changing the names and relationships it was pretty much that. But this was good. Decided to just try it because gay and dudes. Great looking game for sure. Things definitely moved quickly but it wasn't bad. Looking forward to more content and hope this doesn't get abandoned like 9/10 games like this do.

It's a strange game. Everything seems to be in place, but for some reason it was very boring to play.
I'll say right away - I don't like games where sex is expected within 10 minutes of gameplay. It's easier to download porn videos from torrent trackers. But this is my personal opinion, I do not impose it on anyone.
So what's up with this game? The main drawback is the dullest plot and completely flat, two-dimensional characters. This is the main and very serious flaw. I barely made it to the finale of the first season, I don't plan to start the second one, I hardly think the game has changed for the better.
Engagement - 0 out of 10
Story - 0 out of 10
Graphics - 5 out of 10. Everything would be fine, but some of the renders have a lot of noise and noticeable compression artifacts.
Soundtrack - 8 out of 10. Unobtrusive music, not annoying, very good sound background.
Content quality - 6 out of 10. It can be worse.
Conclusion - a completely average project, I would not call it a failure, it has and will have fans. But I wouldn't include it in the top 100 .
To play or not to play? Decide for yourself, but if you care about the plot, background of characters, development of their relationships - it's better to skip this game, save your free time for more useful activities.

Unexpectedly good! these type of games are rarely done good, but this one is really done well so far. it would be better to have a little lead up, and some choices in the start, but whats in here is good.