VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - The Best Days of Our Lives [v0.1a] [ERA51]

Renders are decent and the story is a college theme. Hope the choice have more than 2 to select because for now its like a yes/no choices so i hope future updates are better choices with more,when we go to search the fuse box it appear image not found and then continues the game,hope the mobile has some impact on the game too (messages and calls) and dont make the girls all sluty. Has potential but i think the choices need to be better.

There is a lot of difference in almost everything between the original version and this one, they are other developers, and it is obvious that you "feel the change", personally i didn't like it, i will try to explain my points and be as constructive as possible.

1. The writing is very mundane, a lot of text whit empty dialogues, as a reader I lose interest very quickly.

2. I feel a "College Kings" vibe that I don't like, especially when they arrive at the mansion, it's a mix between the empty dialogues and the sequence of the renders, personally I don't like at all that VN.

3. The expressions of the characters, they look bad, especially in certain female characters, this is important, if a love interest within the plot, makes weird, stupid faces, I as a reader / player, totally lose interest in that specific character.

4. The level of eroticism is much lower in this version, you only have to compare the scene between Vanesa and the MC in the basement, with Sophia's in the previous version, the big problem that I see is that there is no construction of the moment, there is no climax, there is no logic, etc., it is just quick sex, because it is a porn game and that's it

5. The college environment among young adults has changed a lot, it is now oriented more towards a wall of tex that are not interesting and eventual easy sex with some of the women in the story.

I have more points, usually they are going to be negative, and that is not the idea, what I want to try to achieve with this criticism is to imply that this VN is moving away from its original version, I imagine that the idea of "inheriting" a project is to improve the previous version and from there continue with the story, otherwise I don't see why use all the assets of a
previous project, to do something completely different, it is not logical from my point of view.

This one is not going to make a definitive note, as the updates arrive, I will see if I change my rating and my criticism, one piece of advice, try to get as far away as possible from the "College King" formula.