VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - The Best of Intentions [v0.1.1] [Stickmanvn]

I love the fact the daughter in this game actually looks like 18 y/o as stated unlike other games where girls never look younger than 20 yet still stated 18
Plus I love the outfit selection & how perverted MCs daughter is. This is one of the game that was too good for us that it never continued

Overall decent artwork. The MC looks like a teenage boy though, kind of ruins the plot line. The super "loose" behavior of the daughter and her friend also ruin some logic parts of the story. I understand how it's supposed to be a juxtaposition to their possible "new life" down the road, but makes the characters not relatable at all.

Also I know there is a urination tag on this, but really there should be a "urination fetish" with a disclaimer that it is a central focus to almost every single interaction. If there was a way at the start to disable this dialogue/art that would make it so much more tenable for people that don't enjoy scat/piss degredation etc. A lot of VN's do this for NTR and other such content so shouldn't be too difficult.

The dialogue is quite disconnected. You have females claiming to be 18 in text and looking that age in art form, but their dialogue sounds like something from a 40 year old used up trick turning crack whore. It makes no sense. What little back story they have doesn't even begin to cover how they could possibly know what they know. Obviously characters can have spice and differences but these two young trollops have such cringy discussions that I found myself clicking through their text faster and faster until I just refused to read it. I've never had that happen in any of the other VN's I've read (and I've read a lot).

The art side of this has a lot of potential so I hope you understand that I am only writing this critique with the best of intentions.

This is neither a game nor a graphic novel. There are no options, there are not ramifications neither any type of interaction. I do not understand why others gave it so many points. It is not interesting neither as comic.

This game reads and plays out like the fantasy of young horny teenage boy who's never actually spoken to a real girl.
The way the girls speak is so unbelievably crude and not in a hot way at all. Every other word is "c*nt". No real girl speaks like this.

Then there is the logic of the game's events (or lack thereof) and this brutal unrealistic progression towards sex. Again it's just ridiculous.

It's this lack of logic, lack of subtlety, ridiculous sexual attitudes of characters and crude, harsh writing that gives this game this jarring absurdity to it, which for me... just kills any potential this game has.
It's a shame because this game really does have good aspects to it. The models are beautiful, there's some nice animations in there and there is some hot scenes but any good is just overshadowed for me.

Avoid.

If you like a actual story, even a remote amount of build up and choices that matter at all this game is not for you.

If you enjoy playing as a cuck father watching your daughter fuck anything with a pulse and enjoy watching your daughter drink piss (probably worse in the future ) then this game is definitely for you!

If the specific very niche content was avoidable at all that would help attract a far wider fanbase but being forced to watch stuff that makes most people want vomit well its not gonna attract many.

The dev is clearly getting better at visuals as he goes but unless your into the stated specific kinks/fetish it should be avoided at all costs.

I'm giving this "against type" VN a tentative 4-star rating.

The Good:
--An unusual take on the father-daughter relationship.
--Renders of the daughter are very pretty. I like stories with hot women that have different body types, and not just enormous larger than life boobs.
--Truly interesting and mysterious story.
--Was pleasantly surprised that the major choice near the end led to what looks to be two actual paths rather than one being a lame end-of-story ending.

The Bad.
--though Stephanie's body renders are hot her face makes her look like a store mannequin. It looks weird.
--I didn't care for the urination content. Would prefer if you could skip that content if you wanted.
--Right now it's mostly a kinetic novel with only one key decision near the end of the content.

This story has a lot of potential and I'm genuinely curious. I'm wishy-washy on NTR content, but this one has me genuinely intrigued. The daughter starts out as a total slut, so it will be interesting to see where they take this. I approve. Would love to see her in threesomes and gangbangs eventually. I'll definitely be following this title.

This wasn't a good game.

Basic daz renders, terrible attitude and character from the daughter. There's basically no content and it was abandoned as soon as it started.

Do not recommend playing for anyone.

Admittedly I've not played that many games before I played this one but so far this is my favourite one, by a long way.

It's proudly rude, lewd and kinky all wrapped up in quite an original story that takes a big detour away from the usual vanilla dad/daughter romance stories
While the daughters sluttyness is a big turn off for some it is necessary as far as this story goes and she's is a fresh and welcomed change from the usual prim and proper. But she ain't no bimbo, plus she looks as cute as buttton.
The relationship between the dad and daughter is believable and they do obviously love each other.
The images are more than adequate but I'd say they have been rendered in 3Delight rather than Iray and they suffer slightly for it. But maybe the DEV has his reasons for that.
This one game I'll be keeping my eye on, its well written and quite believable and I can't wait to see where the story goes.

This review is based on the first release, that is mainly a prologue to the actual game that is yet to be published.

A very interesting introduction to the story and characters. Not for everyone, this is. Not if you think that a father-daughter relation can be a vanilla romance. This game has a lewd, kinky twist to it. That is sort of a relief if you are, like me, fed up with stories about fathers corrupting their pure and innocent daughters, pretending they love them and have the best intentions with it.

For this story to work, the daughter needs to be a sex addicted slut already. She is, in spite of her innocent looks. That is appealing to me. I don't mind slutty girls, it's a porn game after all. And she is one hell of a sexy slut. For the story, the father needs to be a spineless dolt, which he is. You don’t have to identify with that. What remains, at least up to now, is that father and daughter genuinely seem to care for one another. Now throw in an indecent proposal and a new corruption game is born.

Will they accept the proposal? There would not be a game if they didn't. Will they break the last barrier? Of course, they will. Will they be tempted to break the contract? In very many ways, I suspect. How will it end? No idea, but I am curious.

Some of the renders are excellent, some are less. There's room for improvement. I like the looks of the daughter though. The story so far is very original and promising.

Review v0.1 (prologue)

This game is definately an interesting take on "the incest problem".

The difficult thing about incest in writing is to make the taboo real and the characters reluctant enough to be believable, but there must also be a driver, a reason why the characters are gravitating towards the incest.


Renders are OK, not fantastic in my opinion but they do get the job done.

Verdict: 4/5 mainly because of the inventive plot.