Good start. She seems to get into it a little too quickly for my taste, and that ruins the corruption part. She seems like she wants him as soon as she sees him. While I guess that is corruption of a sort, it feels more like a gentle nudge into what she already wanted.
Should have blackmail as a tag but the same comments about how quickly she is into it. Feels more like prostitution.
Should have blackmail as a tag but the same comments about how quickly she is into it. Feels more like prostitution.