VN - Ren'Py - The Dragonspire [Ep. 2 v1.0] [Lancastle]

Sorry but, mid, not at all bad visualsn (apart from very old looking mc as per usual compared to even aged girls) aside. This will be a very short review.
Bascially I can cover it in a single word:


CRINGE!

I mean... Have people who feel this kind of dialogue and writing is "good" and "believable" ever met a woman?
That's it.
Sorry, not sorry.
Apart from DL'ing a whopping 10.3 GB for this on a 4G network.
THAT I'm sorry abt.

Was enjoying the new version of the game (1.1) till I hit the cinema loop. After finding the solution of getting an updated script.rpa file was able to continue.

I find the story, models and animations to be good and will definitely keep following Dev and if steady updates happen will subscribe. Dev currently is active and responsive here so that is also a plus.

Do not get the low rating or understand what the other people have issues with. Have seen much worse written and visuals get better score. So take that into account when thinking of trying the game.

It weighs a lot, there are no animations, there is no walkthrough, the game doesn’t let you watch all the scenes, stupid correspondence via phone...
The characters and plot are not interesting.
I just wasted my time downloading and unpacking.

Regrettably, the narrative not only fails to meet expectations but also suffers from notably poor writing quality. This unfortunate combination substantially diminishes the overall impact, resulting in a deeply unsatisfying reading experience

Personally did not like that there is too many paths to chose from but the story is very short from start to finish. Replaying to see different scenes and outcomes becomes very tedious and not rewarding as it's super repetitive. Maybe if the game was much longer and each path would be completely different it would make sense, but minor alteration is just bad taste in my mind.

Well, let's go I have little to say because my first time here playing but I'm enjoying the beginning of this game has great renderings beautiful and sensual characters a very interesting story but I was intrigued by Hailie the scene with her taking two guys at once it made me very emotional so I already put this game as a favorite I highly recommend it when there are enough updates I come here to edit my comment and give it a better grade...

Review for v0.1.4
Starting with positives in this game - Renders are good in this game though at times Main character looks strange in some scenes , some female characters looks amazing . Music is a huge plus point
Moving on to negatives - Story doesn't impress me , it is somewhat boring and doesn't make much sense till now , to make matters even worse are the choices in this game . We are asked to start dating in the beginning of the game when you don't know much about her and when you haven't met most female characters . You can't say no to the girl even if you are given the option you are forced to have sex with her ( Seems like rape for me and you can't avoid it even with the choice to say no )
So apart from some good looking girls , nothing much in the game - story and writing is a huge let down in this VN .

Rendering looks good,but some of the characters have unnatural expressions.
The story is rather tedious and uninteresting, I hope to enhance the fun of the script.
There is still a shortage on the renpy system,Hope it can be improved
Good luck with your game.

Well, what can I say.

-Renders look good so far

- Models look good, at least most of them

- story ... bland and boring - trys to be funny but isn't funny at all

- mc gets a birthday present (girl shows pussy to him) and even if you say no to her request "lick me" , he goes for it. (thats super cool if you can't stand her face and that overused hairstyle ) depends on taste ofc. but I generaly don't like choices that are not choices and forced content. MC looks like a tool/toy to me. Equaly to forced content is the scene before that with sasha and the other chick with the panties - a third option would be cool, because (yes its a porn game and the chicks are beautifull, BUT) what if I didn't want to see any panties of them? It's the start of the game, the MC does know sasha for long time and maybe her "hot" friend is open minded like that, but we as readers don't know them, and this scene seems out of place to me. Maybe in a later state of the story that scene would have been okay/better, when you know the girls better and you care about them enough, just my 5 cents.

3/5 for the renders - rest wasn't for me.
Good luck with your project

cheers