- Sep 4, 2019
- 39
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While I do enjoy this story for the most part, my two chief complaints are the fact that they make the protagonist as unlikeable as possible, as for corruption fans reading a story centered around corruption, it's no fun seeing a heroine who has every reason to not feel bad about cheating. And secondly, starting from the wife's point of view, she grew attached to this dude a little too quickly. Some could say that just emphasizes her marital problems, and you could be right, but then the dude kisses her after what...2 days of any real interaction and says he loves her? And that's the start of our corruption? I'm hoping whatever is in 0.6 makes it a bit more believable cause right now it feels rushed and unrealistic. For her to do anything but go "that guy is a fuckin freak, I want nothing to do with him" would be completely inconsistent with her character so far.
Other than that, this is hitting all my check boxes for a good corruption story. The mystery plays out well. An accurate portrayal of what it feels like to be paranoid and controlling. And thank god it doesn't take the path of what seems to be every "NTR" story where it's either blackmail or the husband finding out and being all "why do I like this???" and gradually becoming a cuck story. Definitely can't wait to read 0.6
Other than that, this is hitting all my check boxes for a good corruption story. The mystery plays out well. An accurate portrayal of what it feels like to be paranoid and controlling. And thank god it doesn't take the path of what seems to be every "NTR" story where it's either blackmail or the husband finding out and being all "why do I like this???" and gradually becoming a cuck story. Definitely can't wait to read 0.6