VN Ren'Py Completed The Edge Of [v1.0] [Hangover Cat]

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HangoverCat

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keep doing your project dev,
if u don't mind u can share ur project detail here.

Thanks for this memorable game :);)

and keep healty...
I've actually already released the V0.1.0 on two days ago. If you wanna know the details,
 

Magi17

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Great artwork. Honestly this NTR story is comparable to NTRRPG or Thug Hero Party in its impact. At the end, you will feel sorry for the husband and wanting a breakdown of him like in Thug Hero Party, so again pretty top tier NTR game.
 

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Great artwork. Honestly this NTR story is comparable to NTRRPG or Thug Hero Party in its impact. At the end, you will feel sorry for the husband and wanting a breakdown of him like in Thug Hero Party, so again pretty top tier NTR game.
I don't feel sorry for him at all he's kind of a piece of shit it seems like.
 

eUTCnFFGYbNT

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God never have I hated characters in a porn video game so much,the writing is so much the way,
Sam :
Honestly I fell bad for Sam ,an ex bully who got his life back together, sure he did go out of his way to find signs of his wife cheating ,but can you blame him ? the hand it the photo ,that I assume the wife's lover hacked and photoshoped ?? or is it all in Sam's head ,I wish that was explained.
that being said I see a lot of people giving Sam shit for his part it it but the way I see it ,
Beth would have cheated eventually even if the Sam's victim didn't show up, it would've been someone else.
God honestly I prefer the implied ending in prison ending ,the other one is too brutal .
I have no sympathy for Beth ,she slowly turns emotionally abusive gaslights Sam , cheated on him,justifies it to herself and keeps going , even when she finds out she is being used for revenge and was lied to about being loved still stays with him.
the way I see it . There are a few ways this story ends
1 Sam snaps out of it either after getting released from prison or after his wife puts him through enough abuse , gaslighting etc
or
2 Despite being cheated on and sent to prison , or lied to about how its all in his head in the other ending and realizing everything
Sam agrees to stay /get back with Beth and she keeps cucking him but this time with his connect .
that being said.

HangoverCat

I'd like to have a question answered weather that's in a reply to this or in another update/sequel , that's up to you.
1.The photo ,was it in Sam's head ? (regardless of the ending you choose) or did Drew have something to do with it ?

Oh and also how about Drew's perspective? that would be interesting...
 

Terix3

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God never have I hated characters in a porn video game so much,the writing is so much the way,
Sam :
Honestly I fell bad for Sam ,an ex bully who got his life back together, sure he did go out of his way to find signs of his wife cheating ,but can you blame him ? the hand it the photo ,that I assume the wife's lover hacked and photoshoped ?? or is it all in Sam's head ,I wish that was explained.
that being said I see a lot of people giving Sam shit for his part it it but the way I see it ,
Beth would have cheated eventually even if the Sam's victim didn't show up, it would've been someone else.
God honestly I prefer the implied ending in prison ending ,the other one is too brutal .
I have no sympathy for Beth ,she slowly turns emotionally abusive gaslights Sam , cheated on him,justifies it to herself and keeps going , even when she finds out she is being used for revenge and was lied to about being loved still stays with him.
the way I see it . There are a few ways this story ends
1 Sam snaps out of it either after getting released from prison or after his wife puts him through enough abuse , gaslighting etc
or
2 Despite being cheated on and sent to prison , or lied to about how its all in his head in the other ending and realizing everything
Sam agrees to stay /get back with Beth and she keeps cucking him but this time with his connect .
that being said.

HangoverCat

I'd like to have a question answered weather that's in a reply to this or in another update/sequel , that's up to you.
1.The photo ,was it in Sam's head ? (regardless of the ending you choose) or did Drew have something to do with it ?

Oh and also how about Drew's perspective? that would be interesting...
It is already answered in the game - Beth herself says she was with a girlfriend and she was the one that made her send the picture to Sam. The picture was real but not detailed enough to tell if that was male or female hand, yet Sam assumed directly it's male.

Sam was seeing signs of cheating left and right but failed to see the genuine affection from Beth towards him. She does like everything for him so to lessen his burden as much as possible. More so she was trying hard in bed which is like dead give away she is unsatisfied meaning there is none else that satisfies her either.
Beth was not happy and may have cheated with someone else eventually but it was not for her lack of trying to be happy with Sam but he simply wasn't trying. He never considered her happiness and his fear of being dominated in bed was ridiculous. He was aware he can't perform but he only was worried about himself being less of a man then her lacking said man.

The Beth side of story - the abusiveness and whatnot ... consider that the NTR gimmick. It is written that way because it gets people excited, people want her to be the absolute bitch. I wouldn't hold that against Beth, traumatic events can change person. Had Sam supported her the fallen Beth would not exist.
 

eUTCnFFGYbNT

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It is already answered in the game - Beth herself says she was with a girlfriend and she was the one that made her send the picture to Sam. The picture was real but not detailed enough to tell if that was male or female hand, yet Sam assumed directly it's male.
Shit ,guess I missed that ,where was that mentioned ,and if it was a girlfriend why was the hand missing later in the game ?

Sam was seeing signs of cheating left and right but failed to see the genuine affection from Beth towards him. She does like everything for him so to lessen his burden as much as possible. More so she was trying hard in bed which is like dead give away she is unsatisfied meaning there is none else that satisfies her either.
Beth was not happy and may have cheated with someone else eventually but it was not for her lack of trying to be happy with Sam but he simply wasn't trying. He never considered her happiness and his fear of being dominated in bed was ridiculous. He was aware he can't perform but he only was worried about himself being less of a man then her lacking said man.
I mostly agree with you ,I mean it is a NTR game but I would have preferred a scene where say, Beth approaches Sam ,taks about her concerns ,how he didn't support her job, was too anxious to be dominated ,acutally not even dominated ,just be on the bottom ,and lays out everything only for Sam to blow up on her ,then Beth falls out of love ,meets Drew, and the story goes on .

The Beth side of story - the abusiveness and whatnot ... consider that the NTR gimmick. It is written that way because it gets people excited, people want her to be the absolute bitch. I wouldn't hold that against Beth, traumatic events can change person. Had Sam supported her the fallen Beth would not exist.
Yeah, I agree the "abusiveness and whatnot " is the NTR gimmick but honestly it went too far in my onion especially in the new ending where she was gaslighting him and telling him it was "all in his head" and driving him insane ,I was sooooo into the game before the ending.

That being said if it was poorly written cliché gimmicky NTR game where housewife gets corrupted buy big strong muscular big dick bull ,I don't think I would have cared this much. and I agree with you if Sam had returned the love and affection from Beth she wouldn't have stepped out ,but still a Scene where she and Sam just talked , she poured her heart out and was met with the Cold suspecting Sam who blew her off THEN cheated on him I would feel Beth was more justified.
 

Terix3

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Shit ,guess I missed that ,where was that mentioned ,and if it was a girlfriend why was the hand missing later in the game ?
When Drew shows her the website before their first sex.
The hand is later missing because it was edited by Drew, it's pretty obvious it was edited because the sheets folds as if there was weight pressed where hand supposed to be. Make no mistake Drew made the website all along when you get the question about who made it the question should be read as "Does Sam believe what he sees? Is he afraid of being insane?"

I mostly agree with you ,I mean it is a NTR game but I would have preferred a scene where say, Beth approaches Sam ,taks about her concerns ,how he didn't support her job, was too anxious to be dominated ,acutally not even dominated ,just be on the bottom ,and lays out everything only for Sam to blow up on her ,then Beth falls out of love ,meets Drew, and the story goes on .
I think for the ntr experience she needs to be conflicted - in love yet cheating. Also i believe the theme of the game was suspense - that is we are supposed to be unsure whatever she is cheating or not. If she would come to Sam to clear the air and he would blow her that would be pretty obvious she won't be faithful anymore.

Yeah, I agree the "abusiveness and whatnot " is the NTR gimmick but honestly it went too far in my onion especially in the new ending where she was gaslighting him and telling him it was "all in his head" and driving him insane ,I was sooooo into the game before the ending.

That being said if it was poorly written cliché gimmicky NTR game where housewife gets corrupted buy big strong muscular big dick bull ,I don't think I would have cared this much. and I agree with you if Sam had returned the love and affection from Beth she wouldn't have stepped out ,but still a Scene where she and Sam just talked , she poured her heart out and was met with the Cold suspecting Sam who blew her off THEN cheated on him I would feel Beth was more justified.
I think that the core of the story - MC path up to the split is excellent. That is the most crucial part that gets us familiarized with the characters and conveys the story. It also enables the ntr to kick in, the rest is basically ntr fantasy - i wouldn't judge it too harsh.

Beth is afraid to leave Sam i think - both she is insecure about her ability to stand on her own and she sorta blames herself for being needy. She is afraid to put more burden on Sam. She is then lead to believe that Sam has ntr kink and wants her to cheat.
Also Sam could have done the very same - come out and ask about the picture, about her work/outings. The cameras shown him no indication of her cheating but he wasn't happy with that he essentially hires his enemy to prove she is cheating. If Drew would find nothing (let's assume he would not be aiming to take revenge on Sam) would Sam believe him ? or would he realize "oh i bulied him in t he past, he may hold grudge and not tell me the truth!".
 
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HangoverCat

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God never have I hated characters in a porn video game so much,the writing is so much the way,
Sam :
Honestly I fell bad for Sam ,an ex bully who got his life back together, sure he did go out of his way to find signs of his wife cheating ,but can you blame him ? the hand it the photo ,that I assume the wife's lover hacked and photoshoped ?? or is it all in Sam's head ,I wish that was explained.
that being said I see a lot of people giving Sam shit for his part it it but the way I see it ,
Beth would have cheated eventually even if the Sam's victim didn't show up, it would've been someone else.
God honestly I prefer the implied ending in prison ending ,the other one is too brutal .
I have no sympathy for Beth ,she slowly turns emotionally abusive gaslights Sam , cheated on him,justifies it to herself and keeps going , even when she finds out she is being used for revenge and was lied to about being loved still stays with him.
the way I see it . There are a few ways this story ends
1 Sam snaps out of it either after getting released from prison or after his wife puts him through enough abuse , gaslighting etc
or
2 Despite being cheated on and sent to prison , or lied to about how its all in his head in the other ending and realizing everything
Sam agrees to stay /get back with Beth and she keeps cucking him but this time with his connect .
that being said.

HangoverCat

I'd like to have a question answered weather that's in a reply to this or in another update/sequel , that's up to you.
1.The photo ,was it in Sam's head ? (regardless of the ending you choose) or did Drew have something to do with it ?

Oh and also how about Drew's perspective? that would be interesting...
I see the first question has already been answered. As for the second question, I had, in fact, originally planned to write Drew's perspective, but decided otherwise for two simple reasons. The first reason is that the length of the game was already longer than what I first had in mind. It was my first porn project, so I wanted to start with something small. The second and most obvious reason is that it would ultimately not introduce many--if any--new content (sex scenes). It would essentially be the same sex scenes, but from a different perspective, which wouldn't have been fun to write nor that interesting to read. If the main appeal of the game wasn't porn, then I would have written it, but I'm pretty sure the overwhelming majority is playing it for the porn, so...
 

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I see the first question has already been answered. As for the second question, I had, in fact, originally planned to write Drew's perspective, but decided otherwise for two simple reasons. The first reason is that the length of the game was already longer than what I first had in mind. It was my first porn project, so I wanted to start with something small. The second and most obvious reason is that it would ultimately not introduce many--if any--new content (sex scenes). It would essentially be the same sex scenes, but from a different perspective, which wouldn't have been fun to write nor that interesting to read. If the main appeal of the game wasn't porn, then I would have written it, but I'm pretty sure the overwhelming majority is playing it for the porn, so...
Well it was a really good NTR game,that was well ,more than just a "NTR" game for your first shot at this,
I look forward to your future games,I personally would love to see a sequel for both ending.

Does he end up in jail? Does his lawyers prove the false allegations wrong ? Does he get revenge ? Does he find love elsewhere or come back crawling to Beth?

Does he go deeper and deeper into insanity after repeatedly being gaslight ? Or does he figure it out and snap out of it ?

I would live to see what happens after this game ends.
 

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Well it was a really good NTR game,that was well ,more than just a "NTR" game for your first shot at this,
I look forward to your future games,I personally would love to see a sequel for both ending.

Does he end up in jail? Does his lawyers prove the false allegations wrong ? Does he get revenge ? Does he find love elsewhere or come back crawling to Beth?

Does he go deeper and deeper into insanity after repeatedly being gaslight ? Or does he figure it out and snap out of it ?

I would live to see what happens after this game ends.
For now, I don't have any plan to continue the story of The Edge Of. I'm already working on another project, and I usually prefer working on new stories rather than reworking older ones. But in any case, I'm glad you liked your experience enough to ask for more.
 

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For now, I don't have any plan to continue the story of The Edge Of. I'm already working on another project, and I usually prefer working on new stories rather than reworking older ones. But in any case, I'm glad you liked your experience enough to ask for more.
Any info on your new project ? is it about NTR/cuckold as well ? I would really love to see something more ...lets just say less more consensual from you...whats the word netorase I think..
 

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Any info on your new project ? is it about NTR/cuckold as well ? I would really love to see something more ...lets just say less more consensual from you...whats the word netorase I think..
So the Patron states the following
Story (A Promise Best Left Unkept)
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So NTR is 99.9% happening what kind of NTR is the question, but i am suspecting similar to this game
 

ozzo

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Well in this game MC was the bully not the bullied. so this seems a bit different
Right but i mean the dynamic between the characters. Like in this game Drew never acted as a bully victim he constantly made snide remarks and such to undermine Sam and the blonde guy and i can see the next game bully doing the same thing.
Like the bully is not gona walk up and pants the MC but i can see him talking down to him infront of the girls to make the mc look like a loser and such
 
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HangoverCat

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Any info on your new project ? is it about NTR/cuckold as well ? I would really love to see something more ...lets just say less more consensual from you...whats the word netorase I think..
I won't lie, I'm not a fan of netorase. Doesn't mean I won't touch it at some point, but for now I'm focusing on pure NTR. I won't be happy until I write something that really satisfy me--which probably means it will take a long time.
 
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