VN Ren'Py Completed The Edge Of [v1.0] [Hangover Cat]

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At least for me, I enjoy the NTR fantasy because I find it hot seeing my gf/wife fucking someone else.
I kind of think that's part of the problem. I enjoy NTR games (I'm single), I also enjoy female protag games and watching lesbian porn (I'm male), furry games (I'm human), and whatever else is uploaded that has decent artwork/story/dialogue.

The problem seems to be that people don't seem willing to separate themselves as the player, from the character's POV the game is made in. I saw the same thing back in the 90's with MMO's, people got all up in arms when they found out the person playing a female character in EQ2/WoW was actually a male. Like no shit, it's not my avatar, it's just a character.

If I'm playing something like Summertime Saga, I'm watching a VN about a virgin who bangs his mom and sister. It's not me, the player, it's the character in the game that's doing those things. The only difference between it and something like Game of Thrones is that I to some extent have control over the character's actions.

It's the same with NTR. If the wife/girlfriend is hot, I want to see her getting banged. I don't care if it's the male protag, her co-worker, or the San Francisco 49ers. It's not my wife/girlfriend, it's just a character in a story.

The fact that people get so upset about it just strikes me as some sort of mental imbalance.
 
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Twistedcat8

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I kind of think that's part of the problem. I enjoy NTR games (I'm single), I also enjoy female protag games and watching lesbian porn (I'm male), furry games (I'm human), and whatever else is uploaded that has decent artwork/story/dialogue.

The problem seems to be that people don't seem willing to separate themselves as the player, from the character's POV the game is made in. I saw the same thing back in the 90's with MMO's, people got all up in arms when they found out the person playing a female character in EQ2/WoW was actually a male. Like no shit, it's not my avatar, it's just a character.

If I'm playing something like Summertime Saga, I'm watching a VN about a virgin who bangs his mom and sister. It's not me, the player, it's the character in the game that's doing those things. The only difference between it and something like Game of Thrones is that I to some extent have control over the character's actions.

It's the same with NTR. If the wife/girlfriend is hot, I want to see her getting banged. I don't care if it's the player, her co-worker, or the San Francisco 49ers. It's not my wife/girlfriend, it's just a character in a story.

The fact that people get so upset about it just strikes me as some sort of mental imbalance.

As someone who doesn't particularly care for NTR. Another problem similar to what I posted about on a previous page is that person being "cucked" is usually a non entity, which imo causes a disconnect especially with my personal suspension of disbelief. Like dude grow a fucking backbone stand up for yourself and the relationship, communicate with each other; pretty much the fact that almost all NTR content is created with unavoidable parts turns people like myself away. This is also why I tend to enjoy the NTR games that focus way more on the one being "corrupted" then following the spineless husbands/boyfriends. Though it is technically a different subgenre of NTR. Even then those games fluctuate in quality mainly because the one "corrupting" the MC can be completely unlikable to the point where it comes off way more as straight up rape or torture(Japan and its weird non-consent fetish).


If there were more games that had NTR happening as a direct fault of the players action or inaction I would find it more enjoying.
If you were playing as a husband/boyfriend and you the player decided to focus on other things such as work more than your relationship have NTR be a potential consequence for that. Since your wife/girlfriend is feeling unfulfilled they may go looking elsewhere. I honestly think NTR can work well it just so happens it seems like too many creators don't put enough time and effort in because NTR is a thriving genre right now. It feels like when porn studios just slap step whatever on a porn film and call it a day without even putting effort into making it an incest flim because they know it will sell no matter what.

Another thing is the "fantasy" is usually too out there for me like come on any person doing what the people do to "corrupt" the wife/girlfriends would be getting slammed for sexual harassment to outright assault and rape, yet it comes off in game as a okay.
 
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Pogo123

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surprisingly nice artstyle for a hentai game! :) ntr/chaeting game is always nice. especially from the perspective of the dumb husband.

girl has nice curves but looks a tad too young face ways imo.

i hope we get to know the guy(s) (hopefully multiple) the girl can choose from or you can decide she "accidently" sleeps with. maybe guys from different size and age.
 
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So far, so good. I don't know why but, NTR doesn't affect me whereas Cheating gives me mood swings. I liked the concept about the crumbling relationship and the insecurities, which IMO can go pretty good with NTR content. I liked the art too.

Here are my save(s) from the end of v0.21
 

Dyhart

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I would kindly suggest that you look at the imaginary chalkboard:

View attachment 991127

*Clears throat*

Kinetic Novel: A kinetic novel is a linear type of visual novel where there is a linear storyline with no player choice or gameplay.

Netorare (NTR): Netorare is a genre of anime, manga, or video game focused on infidelity.

So, it's simple. Kinetic Novel + NTR = Unavoidable NTR. You don't even have to ask. Timmy, I can see you in the back. Stop picking your nose.

Now, before we end class, a reminder. Your 65 000 words dissertation on the differences between blackmail and rape is due next week. I want those papers on my desk on monday morning at the first hour. That will be all. End of class.
I was honestly hoping they were sarcastically asking if it was avoidable, but at the same time we have reached that point in human ignorance so hope shattered.

(DIABEETUS)
 

rouge_g

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Haha the MC is a neurotic psychopath and she deserves better. Great direction, even if it's very text heavy.
 

XV71

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I mean the husband has a right to be angry but instead of confronting her he's just taking his anger out on her, but this is ntr so he will become the villain of this story so the hoe is justified.
typical cliche plot, hope I'm proven wrong if not then this is just the same as all the rest.
 

Voilsh

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Oh, an actual western made ntr mystery game?
Hope it's good, we need more of those !
OK, first minute and mc is already doubting his wife? Not sure I'm a fan of super paranoid mc.
 
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KenneX

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I haven't fully completed the new update yet but ugh............... I hate the mc sooo much. He's such a fuckiin asshole. Like I get it, he's mad she's cheating on him. That's the whole point of ntr. Your gf/wife cheating on you. But the dialogue is just paragraph after paragraph after paragraph of marital arguing.

Like I get it there should be some for the story being told but it just gets exhausting to read the mc yelling at his wife over and over and over again. Reading and watching married people have heated arguments is such a boner killer.

It just doesn't stop. They just keep arguing and the mc just keeps yelling at her and making her cry. Like fucking hell just say what you fucking mean holy shit. Just ask her if she's cheating for fucks sake already. Just move the story forward already instead of just focusing on constantly arguing.

I don't even feel bad for the mc. If you're gonna be such an asshole, I fully support your wife cheating on you and leaving you.

At least for me, I enjoy the NTR fantasy because I find it hot seeing my gf/wife fucking someone else. I'm not here for realism. In real life, if this shit happens, yeah people will argue and get mad, people get hurt, marriages ruined etc. That's no fun. I don't want a divorce simulator and right now, that's what this game is. It's a divorce simulator basically.
Wow, I wanted to write here after finishing the game but you just did it for me. This is exactly what I think. 0.1 version was very good but the update made the husband an unbearable prick and the game went to shit. Such a shame.
 

dtodd

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Loving the slow burn on this. I'm think that the hand in the photo is actually her girlfriend who she spoke to on the phone later. I'm betting that it's the MC acting like a total dickhead is what actually drives her to cheat.
 
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ohhaiguize

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really enjoying this so far! last
Loving the slow burn on this. I'm think that the hand in the photo is actually her girlfriend who she spoke to on the phone later. I'm betting that it's the MC actually like a total dickhead is what actually drives her to cheat.
100% agree and I thought about this as well! What are the odds the MC's boss and detective get in on the wife action?
 

FrostWrym

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This is one of the best game i ever played. NTRMAN and Hangover Cat Purrroduction.. You are fire.. Guys support him on patreon. He deserve it. I hope next update publish as soon as possible :)
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JohnAtu

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Great Game! I'm a big fan of your other games, and it's interesting to see how this one will turn out. I think you're doing an incredible job portraying the thoughts of a man in a failing relationship. I also think it's incredible, how you manage to tie all parts of this game together, where MC's erectile dysfunction leads him to feeling self-conscious and anxious with his relationship, which then leads to doubting his wife, which also connects in with the 2 sex scenes so far, where we're shown their marital problems. It was somewhat surprising(and maybe even a bit off-putting)finding out that you're going to do an NTR porn game, but I can see how you would do that in order to fulfill your financial requirements.
And if I may, even though I understand it's not my place to recommend you anything, but please, try, if you can, to keep the characters a little bit more consistent, when you finish the story, as I think one of the endings for "Her Lie I tried to Believe-extended edition" was a bit too action-packed and I think, that you tried to make a nasty main characters better in that one.
But even with all that-I love your games a lot and I'm excited for this, even though this is NTR-I still think with your talent, you'll manage to make a compelling story out of it. Good Luck!
 
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HangoverCat

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Great Game! I'm a big fan of your other games, and it's interesting to see how this one will turn out. I think you're doing an incredible job portraying the thoughts of a man in a failing relationship. I also think it's incredible, how you manage to tie all parts of this game together, where MC's erectile dysfunction leads him to feeling self-conscious and anxious with his relationship, which then leads to doubting his wife, which also connects in with the 2 sex scenes so far, where we're shown their marital problems. It was somewhat surprising(and maybe even a bit off-putting)finding out that you're going to do an NTR porn game, but I can see how you would do that in order to fulfill your financial requirements.
And if I may, even though I understand it's not my place to recommend you anything, but please, try, if you can, to keep the characters a little bit more consistent, when you finish the story, as I think one of the endings for "Her Lie I tried to Believe-extended edition" was a bit too action-packed and I think, that you tried to make a nasty main characters better in that one.
But even with all that-I love your games a lot and I'm excited for this, even though this is NTR-I still think with your talent, you'll manage to make a compelling story out of it. Good Luck!
Hey, I’m pleasantly surprised that someone here read my other works, and I’m very flattered by your words. I’m still kind of learning what people seeks when it comes to porn (I might be focusing too much on the plot rather than on the porn itself), so it’s always nice to read such a positive feedback. And as for the extended edition of Her Lie, I totally understand. I already knew while entertaining the idea of writing that ending that half the readers wouldn’t be happy with it. My biggest mistake was to call it a true ending, when I should have simply called it a ‘good’ ending instead. The only reason why I called it the true ending was because it made the extended edition look like more of complete experience. But overall I think all endings are equally true.
 

JohnAtu

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Hey, I’m pleasantly surprised that someone here read my other works, and I’m very flattered by your words. I’m still kind of learning what people seeks when it comes to porn (I might be focusing too much on the plot rather than on the porn itself), so it’s always nice to read such a positive feedback. And as for the extended edition of Her Lie, I totally understand. I already knew while entertaining the idea of writing that ending that half the readers wouldn’t be happy with it. My biggest mistake was to call it a true ending, when I should have simply called it a ‘good’ ending instead. The only reason why I called it the true ending was because it made the extended edition look like more of complete experience. But overall I think all endings are equally true.
You also should've seen how pleasantly surprised I was, when I saw that this was made by the same guy who made "HLITTB", "The Spell" and "Together", I didn't follow you on any social media before, so I wasn't aware that you were making a new game(
And yeah, I think you're right in that, what irked me the most was "true" part of that ending and not the actual ending itself.
As for the "porn" part, I personally would prefer that you focused more on the plot, but I think that's more to do with the fact, that I loved your other stories, and that I'm not that into the "porn" side of visual novels(which puts me into the absolute minority here). On the other hand, I can see how focusing on the plot would earn you less money, so you should just stick with your gut and go whichever way you think is best for you.
Again, Good Luck!
 
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tuShua

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This idiot of an MC didn't do it right. He wanted to catch his wife cheating yet he broke before he even started. Let's say his wife was indeed being hit on, or flirted on by another man and she did her best to resist in her own way. Treating her and acting like an asshole before you even began just makes her more depressed and vulnerable to others. He gave in to anger and overthinking things when he wasn't even sure yet. he did well on the first day but immediately broke on the second. He could've just be patient with it since he's not sure yet and treated her with the same care he always has. his wife even tried to say "i did my best" in heating up the bath and preparing food, yet he gave in to anger and overthinking that he started acting like an asshole. I get it, you're angry and doubtful, i've been there, but it aint gonna bring anything good on yourself if u rush things. don't let anger consume you or you'll just end updestroying something not meant to be destroyed. you'll lose a lot more than you'll think. And he's always talking about "evidence that i have" WHAT EVIDENCE EXACTLY? YOUR PARANOIA?? hotdamn man u aint got shit but your own mind feeding you doubts. Sure, three fingers, and then what? That cou;d've been her female friend. She goes out for an hour and u doubt her, then what? What evidence do u have that she's cheating? What's there in front of you? Exactly. Nothin as of yet.

any of u who are reading this: DON'T DO THIS

be patient. I know because i did exactly the same type of retardation this man did years ago with my lover when i suspected her of cheating. I started acting like an asshole when I wasn't even 100% sure she was cheating. years later i still regret for acting so immature and unprofessional. for the sake of my brethren, don't jump into conclusions unless you're not 100% sure. be patient. Please, i don't want you to end up the way i did. If paranoia strikes you, just take a deep breath and calm down. Let everything go out of your mind. Be patient

Also, sex is about the both of you. Not you alone. Doesn't matter who you're fucking with, it's always for both of you. If u just think of pleasuring yourself, you'll leave ur partner dissatisfied. Make your partner feel good as well. The point of sex is for both of u to feel good u make ur partner feel good, ur partner makes sure u feel good. It's not one-sided. Prioritize your partner, not yourself. His wife explained this to him and asked if he gets it and he's just like "not really" my goodness lmao
 
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baited92

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You didn't understand what I meant. I mean why would they play as a cuck MC instead of a bull MC if they are putting themselves in the bulls position?
Because they're sadist. Seeing the psychological harm from the perspective of the victim makes it much more vivid. Their uncertainty, their doubt, their inner conflicts, their feelings of helplessness, their lack of confidence and of abilities and so on. All that which paralyzes them. And finally their self-hatred and -disgust when they realize they are turned on by it. The NTR-games where you can see the face of the victim are the best, by far. I've heard ;).

Here's an example:

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