VN - Ren'Py - Completed - The Entrepreneur [Complete Edition] [MisterMaya]

I don't even know where to start with this.

The good parts, renders are nice.
Character models are great.
Some of the dialogue didn't give me second hand shame.
Story has potential.

As for the bad.

Pretty much everything else and most of the dialogue had me wincing with second hand shame.

MC is looking for a house, meets one of the girls living there and instantly starts talking about her divorce. Really personal questions even close friends would think twice about asking. Stuff that was absolutely none of his business and in any real life scenario would probably have seen the woman walk back out again after watching all those red flags waving.

One of the girls is a social media influencer. She's taking photo's for her job and she asks him to give her space and he starts with the pissy attitude ... 10 minutes after telling the first girl he's mature.

Sees a girls panties in the bathroom. She gets all shy about it, he talks about it to clear the air and repeatedly mentions the panties making the conversation quite awkward.

Convinces them to let him live there like thus "I was studying law, partying and acting like a dick".

Woman - "I don't think you are mature enough to live with us".

MC - "I am, trust me" .....

That worked ..... for reasons I cannot fathom.

I tried to like it but everytime the MC speaks i'm wondering how no one has punched him in the mouth.

And the absolute worst part, the friends quiz. If you are going to have people asking trivia in your game then 3 questions max or it starts to get tedious .... this shit went on for ages. About 10 questions too many.

He also calls an exterminator and leaves them the keys to the bar.

I can't decide if the MC starts off as a complete moron of gradually gets dumber but he is, without a shadow of a doubt, the dumbest MC i've witnessed in a game in recent memory.

I feel like no matter how good everything else gets, how awesome the female cast is and how good the plot gets. The MC is always going to be the weak link and hold it back.

(v0.2)

The game is great. It has a lot of potential. The plot, the characters, the renders and models... They're all great. I love this kind of VN's so I know which game is worth to install. So first time i see it, I knew this was a good game.

The only bad thing is the look of MC. It seems the dev worked too much to render good women models and probably forgot the MC's look. Man he looks like Cyberpunk2077 NPC. They didn't render him properly it seems, or maybe its because i played compressed version of the game i don't know. But the girls looked pretty decent and good rendered so i don't know whats wrong with his renders. But I know one thing : He is ugly. And he acts like he is alfa or something. He is always saying that in the college, he was wild and did lots of sex. While he looks like a peasent. That is kinda annoys me.

All in all. Its'a wonderful game. Worthwhile, not boring at all and good history with beautiful models. I quite enjoyed it.

I will stay tuned for next updates.

In short - Good renders, good/surprising story (several, good storylines; coherent narrations of the individual characters; good connection of the individual storylines, ...), good handling of the game, many characters, good music selection and Rick Astley!!!!


Please keep this level (quality/originality/style/...) and your enthusiasm.

(Version 0.2) So far, this AVN is excellent. The english can be a tich off because the dev is French. But it is in very minor ways that don't hurt the experience. Just know that's where it's coming from. The initial setup is great. The characters have depth and their surface appearance gives way to more nuance as they are introduced. The character models are fantastic, and come off as very real/sexy without being too flashy. Storywise, there are driving motivators for the MC and other characters and a brief glimpse of enemies that will probably intersect with our MC in the next chapter. There was already a great plot twist with us wondering if we could trust one of the MC's friends. I'd recommend giving this a shot if you like the story heavier games. I'm invested in the characters, it has a great sense of humor, and I'm looking forward to the next update.

Just finished playing v0.2 and gotta say this game has a huge potential to be one of the best game out there. The renders are great and each girl is different in their own ways. One bad thing is it's going to be hard to choose one only so hopefully it'll be a harem game. Though it's only v0.2 , the storyline is good and unique so far. Keep up the good work and can't wait for more!

Pro: Excellent renders and models, great story so far, dialogue is great for a porn-game, a great plan with regular, large updates.

Con: That it is not complete yet

5/5 - A very well-done start to what could become one of the future great games.