VN - Ren'Py - Completed - The Entrepreneur [Ep.4] [MisterMaya]

This game is very complete in comparison with the majority of AVN's, for me it has everything, the renders are very good, every girl has a important spot in the story with good enough branching between them to make the choices matter, the story is fairly unpredictable which makes it fun to read, and you can tell very well the difference in personality of each girl and the personal struggles of each one, the game is not huge in content (took me like 10 hours to finish) , but for me it definitely was worth the time spent playing it, it's one of the best finished AVN's out there.

You will smile, laugh, cry, shout for joy, and probably cry some more. Very rarely do I go through a story without break, but this is one of them. Renders are beautiful. Story is meaningful. Animations are spectacular. Support this creator if you can....he's one that definitely puts out quality content!

Short and sweet with a compelling plot and even more compelling LIs that look great. The lewd scenes are also done well and there is a good amount of them to not feel overwhelming but not lacking either.

Urge everyone to give this a shot since it checks all of my boxes and I had a very good time playing, never being turned off by anything in specific and it does a good job in every department.

Short summary:


This is a decent game. Most of the things - story, writing, animations are OK. But it didn’t grab my attention all that much. Girls are pretty and expressions are mostly great.



Good Things

• Girls are pretty
• Expressions are nice and subtle
• Writing is OK
• Renders are OK

Bad points

• A bit too much focus on criminal boss and not enough on lewd elements
• Animations are mostly very simplistic
• Not enough focus on eroticism

Ok cant believe i missed this game, the story was good, the models were really good as well. I am giving this 5 stars because it was something a bit different, i enjoyed the story and it was not tarnished by too much sex scenes just enough to add to it and not be the focus of it.

Thank you so much for an enjoyable game

Would be a 5 star rating if it had a reunion a the end of the game(maybe in the bar). Somewhat believable story and lovely ladys to romance.
It's my first rating ever so hope it helps. I just found out i have to type more than 200 charakters so yeah i recommend it. 4,5/5 stars

So, I've just wrapped up this VN, and decided to go ahead and leave a review.

If you want to skip the length, just know that I'm giving this 4 stars... almost entirely off of the story itself (and it's winding path depending on how you play with the others) and the graphics/renders. I take away a star for a weak ending. Details included if you read the spoiler; it's near the end of the review.

Now that you have the rating (plus it's in the upper-right corner; you really can't miss it), I'll give you my complete take. I'll spoiler it off to prevent it from making the already long reviews page annoyingly long. Enjoy!

The Entrepreneur is a unique AVN. Story is captivating and an interesting one among the others. It has the most ''mature'' approach to the character development, story-building and relationships among similiar AVN's.

My problem with this game is, since It's AVN, lewd scenes are far less than expected. I can see the devs intentions and why he decided that but still I think there should be a different approach to this subject.

Even though I gave 3/5 stars; This game is great and unique story-wise. This is in my must-play games. Try it and see it for yourself.

Decent effort from a first time Dev. Girls are gorgeous, story is decent, lewds leave a lot to be desired. Worth a play I say.

The Good

Renders are great from the start and just get better as the game goes on. You can tell who the Devs favorite model is, as she gets used multiple times, but for the most part the girls are gorgeous and varied.
Story is pretty heavily influenced by some other popular AVNs but is still well executed, and the writing is solid.
Music and background sounds are pretty well done.
MC is pretty passive, but at least is not annoying or a super creepy perv. Would have been nice if his hair wasn't clipping in almost every scene, but I've seen worse.

The Not so Good

Hope you are not playing for the porn because there isn't much to enjoy here.
A real shame, as the girls are very attractive, but there are far too few sex scenes, and they are not very well executed.
Needs sexy sounds in the lewd scenes.
Needs more angles and more renders and positions. Lewd animations range from terrible to decent by the end of the game, but they are not long enough.
Some of the main girls only have one real sex scene.
Bunch of random girls, but that's better than nothing I suppose.
Biggest flaw by far, is the endings.
There aren't real endings. A few silent slides for each ending, and no sexy time at all.
You can tell it was a rush job and the Dev just wanted to be done with the game, but it would still be nice if we got some kind of proper endings at some point.

Game has some issues, but it is not super long, and the beautiful ladies and decent story make it worth a look.
Hopefully the Dev can step up his lewd skills for his next game.

Just completed the game. In my opinion It's a 7.5 /10. I liked the story (I would say it's focused more on romance and drama... so forget about Harem mode xD), I also liked music, animations and renders. However, there is something off, I feel like the relationships with the girls are not that well written, sometimes It all happens too fast and sometimes nothing happens (somewhat random). Then the most important choice in chapter 4 is scripted, of course, for the sake of the plot (that time when you have to play it cool). Sex scenes happen randomly as well, sometimes it feels off (funny at times, but remember... in a drama it feels a litle out of place). Also, about sex scenes, mmmm there was something off as well and I don't mean Animations (those were good), it's the "how to get to a sex scene satisfactorily" (anticipation)... that writing part needs a bit of improvement.

Overall it was a very good AVN and hey I liked those cat renders hahah (he was the funniest ).

One of the better VNs out there.

• Story plot is not unique but it was well executed and fairly logical
• The writing is above average and not filled with errors
• You cannot date every character at the same time the entire time
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• Nice to see a game where player actions actually impact future choice
• Good character models
• Even though its "only" 4 chapters, each chapter has substantial content
• Bonus points for this actually being completed AND in a reasonable time frame. You would be hard pressed to find a better VN that was finished in two years flat

For the cons. There are a couple renders missing towards the end for one of the characters, but its pretty much a single scene. One of the LI seems to have an impossible path ending with them, I haven't used a walkthrough but you should not need a walkthrough if you do a common sense run for a specific character

TL;DR 4,5/5. Amazing renders, animations. Thrilling and interesting story. Beautiful and likeable LIs and humor... Plus minor bugs.

First I must say that this was very exciting to watch unfold. I completely dived myself into the story and enjoyed it a lot.

The renders and animations are the best I have ever seen, at least, among the best render-wise and the best animations wise... The facial movements and other scenes were so natural and really added to the immersion of story.

Alexa best girl She was so cute, funny and with loveable personality. But that does not mean other girls weren´t close. This story would not be was it is without Valentine, Lucy and Laura... Hell, even Vincent, Tony, and Michael...

Another great factory I love about this AVN is music... There is a lot of differents songs and all are very tasteful and fitting into the scene.

Lastly, hence the 4,5 rating as definitive from me, is the inconsistency of few things. I do not care for misspelings and gramatical errors, those I saw, but they never much break the immersion... The problem was with few missings renders in "crucial" moment . And relationships nonsenses, like Lucy in kitchen and Valentine after stream, even though I pursuited only Alexa and her romance, no one other...
So this was a bit anticlimatic and dissapointing, but now that I am writing this and have finished both Main story, and Christmas special, I do not care about it that much...

What I care about is this AVN in general, I have immensfully enjoyed it and can happily recommend it to you all.

Also, thanks MisterMaya (for not making Alexa sit in Christmas special...)

PS. JK. The 4th wall break was great and funny AF ----------- Thank you.

This is one of the VNs of all time. The male-written romance novel... A handful of appropriately aged females with minor insecurities, you show up, give them some male validation, and they reward you with love. You can look on any erotic novel website online and find something far better.

It's the type of book that if I saw it in a bookstore it would be 0/5 and go straight into the trash. Very very poorly written and a waste of time to read. But because it's got pictures I guess we can lower the standards and give it 2/5.

So, let's talk about the game.
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I love the dev for his hard work, he really tried his best.
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Now to shed some light on his work I have some point to make.
First, the models were really well made but not really beautiful. They are like true to life bit not very beautiful like many other VNs have.

Secondly there were really a lot of unnecessary animations, like car moving, walking etx etc and also unnecessary background information and incident of unknown people. All of these works could have been directed at more sex scene or improved longer sex scenes then that hard work would have been justified. The sex scenes were not great even though the render quality was great. Close up ones sucked even worse. some of the shots felt like fucking a doll. No stretching pussy while fucking, seemed like fucking a dead hole.
The story was very good btw.❤❤
I think the dev has great future in this business if he could just make those adjustments. I mean seriously man, the models had so much detailed work on them. I really liked that. Now if the models were beautiful and hot as Treasure of Nadia, Freeloading Family then I would rate it a 5 stars and rank in my 5 most favorite VN even though this doesn't have incest or Harem. And I am a sucker for those 2 genres.
overal...

3.5 ⭐ for me.

Done on steam
- Character relationships with the 4 main girls are very well done,
- Short interlude with other girls are also nice even if somehow not needed for the story
- lot of effort in the "ambiance". many details not needed but that are nice
- Story is well paced.
- graphics are very goods, animation are good but not the best possible ( in fact some of them are good, some of them are less good).

Et puis, cool de voir un français

It's a little hard to rate this one, but I'm leaning towards a strong 3,5 stars (rounded up to 4). I like the MC's personality and motivation, I like the main girls and there is some fun and cute side characters as well.

The overall story is nice, but I feel it was really rushed towards the end. I feel like a more fleshed-out ending for each girl would be a huge plus, but the slides are better than nothing I guess.

I think writing is strong in general, but I really feel like there should have been more choices up to the player to separate different branches and not having them "leak into" one another. It feels like some choices are presented to you that later doesn't matter the MC makes other important decisions without our input that makes him come across as more of an asshole than he probably should.

Overall, I think it's nice - if not only for the fantastic renders and character designs. I am very curious to see more from this developer.

very good game, not the usual incomplete incest shit with ultra horny females who need foursome at the first sight. Nice story and well defined characters. One of the best adult VN I have ever played.

This game has a few decent moments that make it worth trying, but it has some major issues with the execution of its story and the scenes. Mainly, it seems like the creator just gave up after a while and wanted to end the game.

The story relies on some of the most nonsensical character motivations I've ever seen in a crime story. Firstly, there's no reason for the people that go after the MC to steal his bar or the building. They just want to make the MC's as miserable as possible. The bad people are simply bad. There's no more thought put into it.

Also, the MC's motivation to not get help or go to the cops when he's not a made man (or a criminal at all) makes no sense. People are trying to kill him and the killer face was seen by multiple witnesses but MC refuses to tell the cops his story--not even as a business owner.

Also, I find it hard to believe the main antagonist could be as dumb as his is and lead the successful, happy life until the MC came to town. I don't buy that his wife never suspected he was a desperate nut job that just somehow got involved with the mob.

There is some relationship development with the main LIs at the start, but it kind of unravels by the end of chapter 3 and 4 when the story sprints to an end. However, despite the rush, there's a long scene in chapter 4 where MC goes to see a comedian, and it felt like the creator just typed "hacky MAGA stand-up comedian routine" and then pasted the whole thing into the game. It's always great to stop part-way through building romantic tension between 2 characters to do a long Joe Rogan bit.

The game is basically a harem game (unless you outright reject any the girls) until the very end. Many of the love interests don't get scenes of any kind until the very end though. I was a fan of the models chosen for each LI. I really liked a few of the scenes, but most felt too short and showed only 1 or 2 positions.

Not a bad AVN overall, but it had a lot of promise that could have been fulfilled if more work was put into it.

Loved this game. The story is interesting and although sex is part of it, it is secondary to the story being told. The renders are lovely and you are thoroughly entertained.

Some people might say that game is on shorter side or sex scenes are not repeatable but I am glad that dev focused on the story and took only as much time, as needed to tell the story. 5 stars.

This is the best VN on this forum nowdays. The story is round, and deeply interesting from the beginning, till the end. The characters have their individuality, and they have their own mistery regarding their burden from their past. The girls are hot. The real technical virtue of the game are the animations, as they redeem the texts, like in the case of films. The music, the noises and the sighs, moans or the screams of the characters unfortunately are roughly outlined, but it doesn't spoil the experience of the novel.